Very, very, very beautiful! [Sahua] has written a huge and complete world view, and every character has flesh and blood. The emotional line of the young couple is also very beautiful and warm [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
Nice! Although there are some minor flaws in some details of the settings, the emotional lines are very delicate and make up for this very well [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
Haokan [Spreading Flowers] is very exciting, especially the part in Luoyang where all the forces are influencing people's hearts for their own plans, and they are all intertwined! The emotional line is also very easy to understand, which is an improvement compared to the previous books. It feels like a friendship between gentlemen. The shortcoming is that the parts that the author wants to focus on are very exciting. The transitional stages in the middle are a bit fluid and the rhythm is choppy. The other is the ending. As the main text rather than an if extra, it seems a bit unreal.
It's very beautiful. The emperor's suspicion and trust coexist, and it's not OOC at all. Each character is also written vividly and three-dimensionally. From passive survival in the early stage to proactive attack in the later stage, Xiaomi gradually became able to understand people's livelihood and royal principles.
I really like the character design of the second senior brother, interesting and three-dimensional. Every other character is also very vivid. The author also handles the controversial points very well, and the sweet article runs through [Xingxingyan] (but there are a few typos at the end. Will the author consider revising the article for the exam?
The setting is relatively independent and novel, and the emotional line is also very delicious. The cheaper son in the front is more annoying, but after all, he fell out halfway, so it is acceptable. The ending brings the plot full circle, but it's a bit bland.
The first half of the book is very well written! I really like Rael's character and their story.
There was a slight problem with the pacing in the second half of the book. I was ready to give up the book at one point, but I finished reading it without realizing it with the feeling of "Why isn't it finished yet?" And "What will happen next?" I liked the extras very much, and the impression points were almost restored again. Overall it looks good!
I particularly like the last episode. At first I thought the name "Grown Up" was a bit strange, until the last sentence.
Writing novels means writing about life; reading articles means looking at oneself
Throw flowers! The protagonist has grown up in the end, I hope this story continues. No cp is the best thing about this book, the author is really good at this
It was a bit exhausting and I gave up writing for a while. But, look good! ! ! The logic is very complete and the foreshadowing is interesting. An inadvertent detail may be a small wave of fate.
It's good to watch and the plot is smooth. The male protagonist is in a superimposed state with a sense of presence and background, and the portrayal is still very successful, without being awkward.
Cookies! An old classic, but with new ideas. The pull was not delayed blindly. The most important thing is that the male and female protagonists have long mouths!
It's a comprehensive comic and doesn't require much understanding of the original work. The biggest joy is the copywriting. I like this kind of character who usually seems to be very unreliable but stands up at critical moments. And the degree of completion of the character design is very high
Very interesting, very exciting growth flow. The protagonist's growth is very natural, and it's worth reading as an infrastructure novel. The emotional lines in it are also well written.
Most of the emotional dramas are well written, but the plot of this one is a bit messy (and the writing is really tiring and unlovable. Don't you think about changing it?