The first mission is really excellent and amazing. There are really not many writers who can clearly explain the logic of time and space. Unfortunately, this was not continued in the subsequent missions. In the end, it felt like closing the loop for the sake of closing the loop.
It has a novel and interesting apocalyptic setting and is also a great group drama. No matter what kind of difficulties you face, don't indulge the evil of human nature. Please always remain kind and brave and play the hymn of life.
The world view is grand, but the story is limited to filial piety and petty love between parents, which is a bit of a waste of this subject matter. The story is a little lacking, and the plot is a bit boring in the later stages.
It's lighthearted and humorous, the setting about Chonglian is a bit complicated, and the villain's words and deeds at the last moment are a bit far-fetched, but everything else is pretty good.
It's a lighthearted and sweet article, but it's okay if you don't take it seriously. The emotion of attack is a bit inexplicable, the plot design is more deliberate and sometimes far-fetched, and the competitive part cannot withstand scrutiny.
The early and middle stages are pretty good, but the later stages are a little slow and sloppy. The protagonist relies on Goldfinger to solve the case. The ending is a bit rushed, and the handling of past lives and Nirvana is not clearly explained in the follow-up. There is only a brief taste of half-animal transformation and beast-human transformation. It is clear that it is a preparation for the third book, but it is too vague for the awakening book.
It's a bit top-heavy, especially in the later stages. The pace is too fast, and the whole story is lackluster. I hope the author won't go astray. The plot must be balanced while being funny.
Except that the translation is really difficult to pronounce and some parts are too convoluted and not concise, it can be regarded as an excellent Western fantasy novel. The protagonist Wei Guangzheng, who is not popular nowadays, does not fully agree with their behavior and consciousness, but he always respects those who adhere to their own principles.
The emotional line has improved compared to the previous novels, the plot is still excellent, the clearance setting is a little complicated and sometimes cannot be explained clearly, and the pace in the later period is obviously accelerated and slightly rushed. The advantage is that the characters are so brilliant that one can overlook some shortcomings.
Familiar formula, familiar taste, not breaking through but not falling below the lower limit. The world view setting is not clear enough but does not affect the reading. The protagonist's emotional line is not natural enough and lacks flavor. The plot in the later period is weak and the pace is extremely fast. The villain comes out to take a breath and then disappears. After reading it, it was like drinking a glass of boiled water. Apart from quenching Wen Huang's thirst, there was no lingering fragrance or anything worth remembering.
Gong's character is quite interesting, Shou is a bit weaker and has no memorable points. The plot is naturally neither bloody nor procrastinating. There are no major ups and downs but it is not boring either. It is pretty good in every aspect.
The setting, plot and other aspects are not very outstanding. The protagonists are too homogeneous, there are no memorable points, and the watchability is average.
Overall it's very good, although there are some minor flaws but the flaws are not outweighed. One star was deducted due to the delay in the later part of the plot. If the indifference and resistance of the attacker to the enemy in the early stage was due to being kept in the dark, it would be excusable. However, in the later stage, when he knew the truth and fell in love, he was still indifferent and arrogant. He either lost his mind or had a serious illness. Amnesia is not an excuse for the collapse of the character. You cannot abuse me just for the sake of abuse.
The funny part is not bad, but it has a great impact on the outlook on life. Many times, Mink's presence is stronger than that of the protagonist. The plot is scattered, the main line is unclear, and the ending is hasty.
The plot is not very deep, but this is a common problem with short stories. Fortunately, the author's writing style is good and the emotional lines are well written.
It is short and concise. Although it cannot delve into the plot due to the length, it is still very good overall and the characters are also very successful.
The author's writing skills are quite good, and he quotes a lot of poems, but neither deliberately nor show off. Instead, he makes this love affair more romantic and profound. It would be better if the ending of the story could be a little more thoughtful and foreshadowing. I look forward to my wife writing more and better works in the future, and I wish my wife a smooth writing journey.
The author's literary quality is quite high. He can pick up poems, lyrics, and poems at his fingertips, and he uses the right places (this is really rare!). However, there is still room for improvement in his narrative ability. The ending negotiation is really a blind spot in my knowledge. Moreover, it is difficult to find a market for this kind of story where the protagonist cannot defeat the villain. I hope the author can create a better story~