Np, there is a strong feeling of being a mother in the words, and the mother will feel very comfortable after reading it. It's just that the writing needs to be improved. I tried a lot of novel settings but none of them were used. I was a little disappointed. The ending was a bit unfinished and I couldn't understand it. It felt like it was cut in half.
Gong Jie Shou Fei, natural scum cute treasure Shou, Shou Meng cried me. It's a free article, and I feel that the ending has a tendency to touch on the NP side, but it happened at the wrong time. In order to comply with the norms of the time, it was explicitly 1v1. The author did not dare to write more. Is there any chance to dream of an NP side story now? (There is a cannon fodder attacking Unclean)
NP, a naturally scumbag, frivolous and straight man, is the target of all members. The text has an open ending and is written in the style of a light novel, suitable for reading before going to bed.
The author is so jealous that he becomes twisted
Attacking the clean shou is not +NP, the carnivorous evildoer controls the shou, the love brain has low self-esteem and sourness, and the attack is ×n. Funny, light-hearted and abstract Su Shuang's novel, delicious dog training literature, both in love and work, the main character in the world of the underworld is already in control.
If you attack the clean, you will suffer the wrong, if you have a weak career, you will suffer the emotion. The plot of Dark Night is controlled without thinking. Although the ending is 1v1, it is more like an open ending. The front attack may be kicked at any time and replaced with a more useful one.
Attack the pure and suffer the evil, the soft little angel suffers, the dark rat attacks. It's a bit sour and sweet story about mutual love. The plot in the later stage is a bit rushed and the length is a bit short. It would be better if it was written as a long story with Shou and four cannon fodder talking to each other. The overall plot is a bit weak.
Attack the innocent and accept the wrong, the world-weary and cold-blooded tyrant is attacked by the licking dog. Shou has an emotional disorder, so the arrow he returns is not too thick. Sister Shou Su will eat it.
3P, attacking favors and favors, containing a lethal amount of forum content, and Xiaochun CP is stewed, maybe it is easier for those who have chased stars to understand, the overall writing style is a bit bland
Gong Jie and Shou Fei, the natural scum and pampering little devil Shou, fall in love with Gong. Mothers in the Yangjian and Shou Ma must eat it. The author uses every opportunity to write down all kinds of adorable little details. There is a 1v1 if line extra, but no happy reunion extra
Attacking the pure and accepting the wrong, attacking the weak and suffering x paranoid attack, the ancient bloody forced love + chasing his wife in the crematorium, the sadistic attack is okay. Shou Gong and Cannon Fodder Gong gave birth to a child, and the family of four ended up living in seclusion. I feel like there is something wrong with the rhythm of the plot. The plot before writing is too slow and the plot after writing is too rushed. It has no impact at all to start watching directly from the suspended animation.
Attack the pure and suffer the evil, the beautiful, the strong, the miserable, the noble and the heartthrob suffer, the loyal dog attacks. Su Su can be eaten. It contains plots such as redemption literature, stand-in literature, NTR, heartthrobs, hatred of the sea and love for the sky, etc. There are too many elements, but unfortunately none of them are written to the extreme, and each element is only touched upon. The ending ended a bit abruptly. The author only wrote about why Shou fell in love with Gong, but did not say why Shou no longer loves Gong. I feel like I still love Shou. I really want to watch the 3p extra.
NP, cold feeling, paranoid aggression. The three attacks are not enough, and the reception is partial. There are only three attacks in the Chongmu article, which is a bit too little.
NP, a beautiful story about the underworld mother pronunciation. The ending is very satisfying. The underworld mama must eat it. If you are not an underworld mama, don't torture yourself. If you have to read it, you can read it after you go abroad.
The main CP reunites + switches attacks, the deputy CP pursues his wife in the crematorium + takes revenge. It's not too poisonous, it's just that the cannon fodder attack is too annoying, dirty and self-indulgent. The deputy CP's crematorium is quite cool. It uses less ink and is easy to write colorfully.
Attack the pure and suffer the evil, the gentle and melancholy virgin wife suffers. She is a wife, but her maternal nature is far greater than her wifely nature, so Oedipus is blessed. The plot in the early stages was a bit confusing and confusing, which may be related to Shou's depression and frequent amnesia. However, the plot gradually became clearer and better in the later stages. The ending is oe, I don't love anyone, but I have a 1v1 with my husband out of responsibility. It's quite depressing, forced love, suitable for the underworld, don't be controlled.
If you attack the pure, you will be wronged, if you are ruthless and cold, you will be popular with all people. Gong's humble dog-licking and bitter rise to power history, dog-blooded and scumbag literature, controlled special supply, the latter part is better than the first
The emotional line is written very delicately, making love and family love a good cry. Although it is a short article, the plot is quite complete and all the pitfalls have been filled in.
Gong Jie and Shou are both bad and common. Shou plays a little less, and in the middle and later stages, Shou is completely offline. The plot revolves around Gong, and Gong is more comprehensive. There is too much self-pity. There is no need to watch it just to condense Shou. The main Shou story is better than this. The overall plot is an interchangeable version of a bloody novel with attack and shou, but shou's character is better so it's not too sadistic, the main reason is that the plot is sadistic
Np, a dog-blooded attack article, a scumbag's attack, a rare Tianlongren's attack, who will eat when controlled, the whole article has no positive attack and is all cannon fodder attack, all the original attacks in Danjie are in this article
Attacking is pure and accepting is wrong. Love gives rise to hatred and becomes love that cannot be tolerated. Don't attack with a long mouth. At the beginning of the crematorium, the burning in the front was okay. Shou kept many lovers. After Shou entered the hospital, he didn't need to look at it. Although Shou exudes the atmosphere of still loving Gong from beginning to end, the emotional transition in the later period is not well written at all. I don't understand why forgiveness suddenly becomes sweet to Wen He. Moreover, more and more crimes are written about Shou for Gong Shou. He is abused both physically and mentally. It seems that Gong is not punished enough. He is also abused mentally and his dignity is damaged. The ending of the ending makes it seem as if Gong's dignity is valuable. I just scratched the surface of the extra chapter, it was so disgusting, I originally had a good impression of this book
Gong Jie is wrong, and the meek, beautiful and straight man is the heartthrob. The process is very enjoyable and no virgin can resist its charm. It's a pity that the ending is 1v1. There are 5 attackers in the main text, and two cannon fodder attackers in the extra story.
Gong Jie Shou Fei is an ancient literature about youth and pain. It's been a long time since I've seen a piece of literature that uses lyrics as its atmosphere. Shou and her ex-husband hate each other so much that they can't help but squander their blood. They chase her from behind. The better is to live longer. It contains a lot of cannon fodder attacks. I don't think it's a humiliation. It's just that the simple character is not good, and the character of the main attacker is average. I'm taller among the short ones.
Why delete my rating?
Attack the clean one and accept the blame, the straight man with cold feelings and the beautiful woman will accept it, and the father type will attack. Part of the underworld, a lot of coercion, and the suffering history of straight men surrounded by gays. What I like most is that even in 1v1, the reason why Shou refuses the cannon fodder attack is not for offense and defense, but for his own consideration. I like the Brothers Sandwich if extra. There is no need to watch the extra if line with the longest one.