The writing is very good, but I feel that the character design of Kaka is too fairy-like and does not match the real person [covering face and laughing]
I followed it intermittently. Although I said it a bit harshly, some of the words and actions of the protagonist always gave me a feeling of low emotional intelligence... (Thinking)... It may also be due to the fact that the education is relatively simple and the person is relatively young... In short, this is the one that makes me uncomfortable to read.
I haven't finished chasing it yet, maybe I will change my review after I finish chasing it.
After tying the score, I changed the rating [Star Eyes] It looks great, the emotions, friendships, and family ties are all written very deliciously, and the descriptions of the competition are even more beautiful! Looking forward to the end [Come on] [Star Eyes]
The distribution of the plot feels a bit strange, the integration of daily life and emotional lines is a bit hard, and the transition between daily life and competition is also a bit stiff.
There is also the character design of the protagonist. Although it can be seen that the focus is on raising cubs, overall it feels that the character design of the protagonist is very thin, and the character setting also has this problem.
The writing of the competition is pretty good. Overall, I'll give it 3 stars.
What I wrote before is really good, but the update was interrupted at the end. The ending of the one-time update was so fast, except for changing coaches all the time and then nothing happened. It felt like it started but ended at the end. I hope I can optimize it if I have time.
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