MOBA. The emotional line is twitching, I can't talk, I'm so bitter and resentful, I don't know what I'm doing. There is nothing wrong with the writing of the game
The author's second e-sports article is much better than this one, and he failed to dig out the old article.
Ivl. There are too many proper nouns in the game part, making it difficult to understand.
The emotional line is even more awkward. The two of them don't talk much, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.
Gong has a fan of the Five Crown Champions who "sympathizes with" him, so the controversy is not groundless. The writing was very beautiful, strong and tragic, but it didn't offend anyone.
I haven't finished reading this, so there may be misunderstandings. Please refer to it yourself.
Ivl. The writing style of the article written in 23 years looks like it was written in 13 years. It's very long-winded, and the description of the game is too detailed. One skill description takes three pages.
The meme is interesting, but the description of the game content is average, and the protagonist's consciousness or unique skills are not revealed. He is a technical master who relies on hand speed to win.
The protagonist is a beautiful woman with a group of crazy followers.
Sorry, this article is okay, the e-sports part is also well written. However, the article contains a lot of descriptions of native families, including parents who quarrel all the time and act as a model couple outside, a mother who is a super controlling PUA master, a useless silent father, and "sensible and obedient" children. Map itself. My heart skipped a beat when I looked at it. The protagonist grew up in this kind of family and likes to find reasons for himself when things happen, rather than taking the blame.
It may also be that the protagonist's mentality is not mature enough and self-consistent, which awakened many unpleasant memories for me.
There's nothing wrong with the article itself, and it's a small taste for those who don't have family PTSD.
The e-sports part is very average. The protagonist has a group of ex-boyfriends and potential followers. The description of the protagonist's feet in many places in the article is also very condensed. In addition, the protagonist is a bit unhygienic (dbq), and Xiaoxiao encountered a personal lightning point.
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