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(Highly subjective, enter with caution) There are too many books, so leave a mark to prevent forgetting. Some are good and some are bad. Write whatever you have. The reason why you are embarrassed is because the book is ugly.
First of all, I don't have any thoughts of name discrimination, but the male protagonist's name is really unique in Jinjiang Xianyan [covering face and laughing], especially the name is very similar to that of a classmate of mine, which makes me laugh every now and then.
Is this really a book from 2013? Oh my god
The book attracted me right from the beginning. In ancient time travels that are not fictional or not completely fictional and have historical basis, many protagonists can communicate smoothly directly after traveling through time. This is actually a disadvantage. The phonology of ancient Chinese is very different from that of modern times. If you travel back in time, you may be regarded as a lunatic. The author actually carefully fills the logical loopholes, including how the heroine adapts to the ancient environment in the future. He has carefully laid out, which immediately made me look forward to reading.
In terms of writing, some narrative perspectives are well arranged. In addition to how you see the characters as a reader, you also have how you see the world and yourself as a character. It can make people feel that the characters are really thinking about the problem with their brains, instead of just "following the plot". In an unknown environment, survival instinct is the underlying logic of all behaviors. How the heroine examines the new society after time travel, and her self-awareness, reflection and adjustment are refreshing. The display of professional attributes adds to the three-dimensionality of the characters. The characters are first of all people in the world of the book, and then they are the elements that promote the development of the plot. It seems that I have not read many romance novels in the time-travel literature over the years that develop the psychological logic of "how to adapt to survive in the time-travel world." Note that this is survival rather than life. There is no life without survival. A big hidden advantage in time travel novels is the protagonist's ability to adapt to the environment.
I don't know how to describe it…
Halfway through, I clicked on the post that recommended this book to me and reduced my recommendations. The title of the book is quite fresh and the text feels like I'm watching 100 episodes of a family ethics drama [Lie flat]
After reading two books, my impression of this author has basically taken shape. The writing is sometimes good and sometimes bad, and the character creation and plot design are really average [Lie flat]
The savior character of the heroine is really well created
*Looking through this book on the bookshelf, I can't think of anything except The Savior [Loading] I remember it looked good.
The plot is interesting but the rhythm is average, and many of the characters' words and deeds are indescribably strange (after thinking about it for a long time, I finally figured it out. I feel that the content is not filling enough, the plot is dry, and the imagination space is relatively limited. It stops abruptly as soon as the scene starts. Many details can actually be extended)
I think it is also the above problem that causes the main cp's love line to be a bit sweet for the sake of sweetness. The male protagonist has amnesia and cannot remember who he is, but he can learn everything else without a teacher [laughing and crying] The deputy cp's line also made me frown at first. The only thing that impressed me most was the various delicacies cooked by the heroine. It was a waste of humor to write a mindless sweet article, and the author really didn't plan to write more farming/food books. The aura of writing about cooking attracted the digestive enzymes in my mouth [covering my face and crying]
The writing style is decent, the Shura field part is the best, but the rest is a bit bland. To be honest, I don't really understand the male protagonist's career path of revolting and becoming emperor. And I don't really like to see the vicious female supporting character written very childishly and stupidly to highlight the halo of the heroine. Personally, I think the ex-husband is really crazy and has no sense of responsibility. The only thing I remember about the text is that he went home and went crazy. I really don't understand why the heroine fell in love with him before [laughing and crying] After all, he is the male protagonist's brother and the heroine's sweetheart. The writing is too stupid, except to let the readers know how miserable the heroine's life was before, and to provide a sense of satisfaction. In the end, he was exonerated by death, which made me really hold back my breath.
It's a medical novel that looks very professional, but the romance part is hard to say... It's too flamboyant, the pacing is average, and the heroine is very beautiful and strong. The male protagonist is too... Awkward. He is smart, handsome, rich and has a single mother with zero blemishes. He is young and has a little love-mindedness. The key point is that some of his words and deeds are very childish and not at all like an adult in his 27s. , Completely silly and sweet. When such Mary Sue's character collides with the strong professional output, it is very disconnected and awkward, and there is a feeling of being neither up to nor down. Therefore, in a relatively rational, serious and professional professional environment such as medical care, I often get OOC...
This male protagonist is a bit scary. . . If it weren't for the male protagonist's halo buff, it would really seem a bit glib to flirt with him [covering face and laughing]
I can't stand it anymore. It's the first time I've seen a male protagonist who looks like he's teasing me. I can't stand it no matter how bright the male protagonist is.
I'm giving it four stars for the time being. The speaker is intentional and the listener is intentional, and the signals of love are matched by coincidence. The early part of the setting has some logical loopholes in order to create an atmosphere and advance the plot.
This book feels a bit like Ebony Fengchun. I don't know why this author's book becomes less and less readable towards the end. The writing style is too lyrical and I feel like I need to read and understand the words spoken by the characters, especially the male protagonist, who is a bit tired from reading it.
I can't describe it... A true growth-oriented female protagonist, with Leech's parents and Yaozu behind her. I feel that she is completely downward compatible with the male protagonist emotionally. The female protagonist's subjectivity is not strong from the beginning to the end. It was very frustrating to watch in the early stages. On the one hand, I feel sorry for the female protagonist's experience. She has basically never received the love of her parents in a family that completely values boys over girls. A sense of security. On the other hand, I don't talk at all and don't say anything. It's obvious that the male protagonist misunderstood me. Donating money to the fake ex for medical treatment is not a shameful bad thing that needs to be concealed. No matter how cowardly my character is, frankness between husband and wife is the basic principle of getting along with each other when it comes to major matters of marriage management. I also want to repay the male protagonist by giving birth to a child... Completely sad for his misfortune and angry at him. If you can't bear this kind of frustration, please don't open it. Moreover, the transition of personality changes before and after the awakening is too blunt and has little foreshadowing. The male protagonist uses divorce to force the female protagonist to wake up and get rid of her original family. Then the female protagonist suddenly becomes a different person... Human temperament is not formed overnight, so it cannot be changed overnight. Although all flowers have their own meaning, this article is really not in line with my values and I cannot read it rationally.
The writing is okay but sparse. There are too many jumps between paragraphs. The person switching is messy. The author sometimes likes to omit things that are written with a long time interval. I am confused several times. After reading a chapter, I feel like I understand it but not understand it. I can't read it until I reach the paid chapter.
As far as the text is concerned, it's good. It's a youth story from school uniform to wedding dress. The heroine is the central narration. She is a very tough and good girl. Some of the author's thoughts are also deep.
But in terms of setting, as children who come from 5 a. M. To 11 a. M. In the four provinces of Shanhe, it is difficult to get this kind of youth campus but elite narrative. The characters basically have a privileged family background and a good life. Even if they hit the bottom, there is a way out. They can be said to be the upper level of the pyramid. There is nothing wrong with the novel, but the details are relatively realistic. When the credibility is high, some plots are a bit dreamy and bloody, which makes people feel very disconnected [covering face, laughing and crying]. Maybe some words, deeds and behavior reflect the degree of socialization and thinking that are not like those of middle school students? In short, it's weird. Some of the characters' lines are a little bit condescending. I can actually understand the author's thoughts. With the development of society, I believe that many children at the forefront of the times have grown up like this. However, as a campus novel, the details are too detailed and people can't help but think about reality. If you can't empathize, it will be a bit tiring to read. I feel that part of the middle part is reading the protagonist's diary [covering my face and laughing] After watching the extra chapter, it will sway between three stars and four stars.
A bloody revenge novel. The main character's aura is so bright that one can't even open his eyes (that's what a novel is). Part of the plot has a bit of a diode mentality. If the heroine had the strength to run away, she wouldn't have been tortured like that in the original sect [covering her face and laughing]. The cannon fodder supporting characters are too flat. The overall feeling is that Paper Man has a strong taste. I thought it was okay when I read it before, but it's a pity to abandon it after reading it again. However, this was also a long time ago. Compared with the author's current writing power, it can be said that it has improved a lot [covering face and crying]
The writing is smooth and the plot is complete. The plot is okay at first but weak at the end. The main character has no memorable points. It belongs to the same genre and many people forget it after reading it.
I'm really exhausted. There are so many flaws that I don't know where to start. The main characters each have their own paper-like feel. Since you are reborn, why don't you reborn your brain with experience points? The point of the rebirth article is not that rebirth is stupider than no rebirth. I hope all creators know this.
The pseudo-orthopedics plot is very good. But later on, I feel that the author is powerless. The more he writes, the duller he becomes. The plots other than the duo are written in a confusing way, and the ending is also sloppy. He started high and left low.
What attracts me the most about this book is that the heroine has a high sense of deservingness and hedonism. The character of a pampered daughter of an aristocratic family who has grown up with no shortage of love is brought to life. I have seen so many Celestial Dragons with zero moral flaws. This kind of character is really surprising to me, although both the male and female protagonists typically lack the ability to open their mouths. , But the two-parter part expresses the tension of pulling. The male protagonist's self-defeat part is actually a bit funny from a God's perspective. The weakness lies in the plot. The underlying logic is that the male protagonist is forced to love each other. Although the outline determines that the emotional contributions of the male and female protagonists are destined to be unequal, it does make sense after reading it. A feeling of "the heroine really likes the hero" [covering her face and laughing] I really don't understand the narrative of the triangle relationship, the life-and-death rivalry between the hero and the male partner. The male partner knows that the hero will kill himself and yet he keeps seducing the heroine (someone relies on constantly finding trouble for the heroine to seduce her) The feeling of entering the plot), and the author did not write the emotional bond between the heroine and the male supporting character too hard in the end. The emotional line in the Wei and Jin Dynasties is still a bit idealistic, but it is logically acceptable. The sense of crisis is also the highlight of Xiongjing xp, hahaha [dog head]
So when I was collecting it, I was still thinking about how the Thunderbolt copy was rounded, and it turned out that the male protagonist was really a dog (in the sense of the female protagonist).
Chasing the Wife in the Crematorium is a simple and smooth article with simple and smooth writing. It is comfortable to read. The plot is a bit bloody. It is a bit hard to write more to add fullness to the characters. Although the plot line is adapted from history, it feels a bit broken throughout. It is not what I want to eat.
An epileptic novel within an epileptic novel. The heroine is talented and turns out to be a big love brain. Not to mention, she especially likes to suffer for others. She was beaten four or five times in the beginning. In the early stage, she had to wait for the male protagonist to show up before she could wake up. In the later period, there was no obvious growth line. Not to mention the male protagonist's line. There was no writing about the self-pulling of the male protagonist's one soul and two bodies. It felt like two people. The author used a limited-knowledge mentality to write an omniscient perspective. It was very satisfying as a reader. It almost drove me crazy. In order to convince myself over and over again that the writing is really to my liking, what if it turns out to be good later on? I gave it three stars for the sake of the writing, but in fact it's only worth one star in terms of character design and narrative logic.