The Author's Gentle Writing Left Me with a Life of Pain (Lightning Protection)
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It's my misfortune that makes me suffer. After reading it, I forgot to record it to avoid stepping on the thunder a second time. Point of difference: The suffering you suffer comes from yourself and the spotlight > Being highlighted and the feelings are impure
0.5 Stars
I really enjoyed myself after staying up late to read this book. Attack 1 is a completely super strong Chusheng, who has been verbally bullied from beginning to end, and shows no sign of changing at the end; attack 2 is okay, but his brain is not good and he is too weak, and he has to be coaxed to do anything.
Later on, there is a plot about pregnancy and pregnancy, and the character design is a bit serious. In the fantasy, the father does not care for the younger brother who does not love the mother. In the late stages of pregnancy, I feel that all personal will has been lost. It is like an empty shell that forcibly promotes the development of the plot. It makes people feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe the underworld lady likes it, but I can't stand it.
The only thing that's acceptable is that Shou didn't like either of them in the end, and the child was aborted, so that's okay.
The last chapter of "Burial in the Crematorium" in each world, I briefly thought about it, but I can't see that it's too rushed, and the ending is too hasty.
I feel great, Jingjing is handsome, beautiful and soft-hearted [crying], but it really doesn't suit my taste, and updates are too slow.
The following contains spoilers
Maybe it's because the author, XP, likes to be a coward and incompetent (incompetent in every sense of the word, the EQ and IQ of Shou's Slice Attack are appallingly low...) He's stupid, stupid, and loves bad things, especially in the second world, there's an eunuch who's attacked Slice and was threatened and poisoned to the point of death (he's really dead because the system poisoned Shou (alive), then Shou leads the troops to rebel and leaks military secrets to the villain (the reason given by the author is that Shou is afraid that Shou will find out that he poisoned him and never see Shou again. I personally think this reason is very far-fetched...) The final ending is that Shou and Shou become a great eunuch in Suzhou, thousands of miles apart, and become rich and powerful, and there is a strange smell. . .
The first part was okay, but towards the end it suddenly described in great detail the process of being interviewed by a career editor. . . Don't you think it's weird, the author? He didn't even write in such detail when he took the college entrance examination.
It was so miserable. I was domestically abused since I was a child. I had a cannon fodder to attack, but it didn't end badly.
I have a bit of an S tendency when it comes to attack. As I suffer from severe PTSD, I can't accept any bdsm attributes being mixed into the character. It feels like something is stuck in my throat.
It was so watery, I was about to drown. Half of the 114,000 words were invalid information. I had to cook chicken soup for two chapters. The same thing was told from the A perspective first, and after a callback of more than ten chapters, it was told again from the B perspective. Finally, after the small map, it was said again from the C perspective. The water was flooding the golden mountain.
There is an annoying villain who jumps from the first chapter to the end. Every time the protagonist slaps the villain in the face, he immediately stirs up public opinion and makes the protagonist morally condemned. There are also problems with Shou's portrayal. The author has to emphasize that Shou is a son of heaven every 100 words on average, but everyone is struggling with Shou's beating, from the beginning to the last chapter. In terms of character, no matter how others slander him, he basically does not refute. The way to fight back is to wait for the villain to be stupid next time and overturn the previous public opinion. . . It's completely as great as reincarnation. The embroidered prayer flags are the true version. You slander me like this. I don't know what to say. Overall, it's very useless [changed]
Although the logic of the writing is slightly problematic, the flaws are not concealed. It is quite fun to pull and pull, and the author writes that the father-in-law's personality suddenly became crazy. The character of Shou in the later life has no charm at all, and is even completely separated from the personality of this life. The part of Shou in the finale has no highlights at all, and even rarely appears. I don't understand why the relatives and friends of Gong's past life hate Shou so much when they learn that Shou's temperament suddenly changed in his previous life. . . All the pain in Gong's previous life had nothing to do with Shou, and Shou even saved Gong, just repaying kindness with enmity.
In the later period, Shou's character became a strong and licking dog, and Gong became a beautiful, weak and tragic heartthrob, which was even more uncomfortable as if he had suffered a loss. Shou also had to bear the cause and effect of Gong to wipe Gong's ass, in the end and smell.
The most hateful thing is that I bought this book from my grandma's book list. Why are you treating me like this [crying]
With 2 million words, I thought I would be able to write about Shou's unification of the world, but in the end, he became a prince and king. The second part of the sequel was not written consecutively and was more like an if line. . . I'm really not in the mood to watch it continuously.
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