The stalk is very novel
I didn't find out in the early stage that the orcs were very cute when they were purely describing cats. After entering v, it became awkward when there was an emotional line. The character of attack was a bit greasy, so I regretted leaving.
The subject matter is very novel, and the writing is good. I have read a book by an artist on QD before. Maybe because of the preset (?), I expected it to be a long and enjoyable article, but in fact it is more about rebirth of campus life... In the early stage, there were frequent small villains who were looking for trouble for no reason. The slap-in-the-face plot did not show the gains of the protagonist. He was just dealing with trouble. I didn't like it.
The opening is too bloody and the writing style is a bit exaggerated (?) Which is not my cup of tea. The Chinese version of the text is also a bloody and crooked opening of Dragon King... Shouldn't the Chinese version of the text be written to be more complicated and difficult to write and more diverse? How can it be repaired?
The Chinese language in the article is childish, and the logic is a bit awkward. It's strange at the beginning. I stayed in someone else's house for so long, and there were so many people coming and going without being discovered? However, the analysis of the novel theory school is okay.
Before entering v
I read it a long time ago. I read the book and recalled how I was traumatized. The writing was very exciting, but the protagonist was always in a state of grievance. Moreover, the main character's brain circuit is very strange, giving people the impression of a Madonna who is neither cold nor indifferent. It is very strange and the character is divided. I feel very unhappy when I read Shuangwen ()
Yeah, I basically skipped through it.
Advantages: The setting is complete and novel, the two characters are cute, and the author's writing is very good!
Disadvantages: 1. The main emotional line is common, there is no connection between events, and the reader is not given the emotional ups and downs that must lead to the next event, and there is no hook to read on. 2. I don't understand why the protagonist talked with the cannon fodder boyfriend in the early stage, and I don't understand why, which is a bit frustrating.
Chapter 165
At that time, I was following the movie called A Mesmerized Drunk, but I forgot about it later. I was reading it, but the writing was average, and the main character was pretentious and the character was awkward. I gave up when I couldn't see the v.
Advantages: fast pace, novel setting, I really wanted to see the cp interaction later, but unfortunately I couldn't hold on [Lie flat]
Chapter 20, seeing before entering v,
Advantages: Delicate emotional portrayal, vivid characters, good writing, and good rhythm
Disadvantages: Let me put it this way, it is difficult to attract people if this kind of pure emotional line drives the two people and they are smooth sailing without any twists and turns. They are still purely in love with herbivorous people and have no passion. The author's promotion of the relationship between the two people basically relies on separate events that are not connected in series. This leads to the fact that after watching one, there is no expectation for the next, which is a bit unattractive...
Chapter 40
The setting is very strange and complete, but when I read the text, I thought it would be a fierce love affair and it would be very satisfying. However, Xiaobai had a miserable start [crying] [crying] and it wasn't very satisfying either.
Chapter 48
The author's writing style is very good, the protagonist and Finnian are both cute [please] [please], but the rhythm and writing style are light and smooth [cheek support]. Personally, I prefer reading interesting articles. I have read half of my wife's articles. I recommend it to everyone! The taste is right, basically five-star (like)
Chapter 21
The world view and the jokes are very interesting, because I clicked on this gag three times, but I didn't get into it (smoking). I think it's too daily, and the pace of the plot is a bit slow. I originally liked the copywriting and character design, but after clicking in, I felt that the interaction was a bit flat, so I regretted leaving.
Chapter 39
Features: Unique character design + novelty of squatting at home and unlimited mixed settings
The pacing is pretty cool. I personally don't like negative character settings... But this is the core highlight of this article. As a refreshing article, it's a bit contradictory. I can eat it if I don't mind. The emotional line is not my thing.
Chapter 103
I don't like the emotional line, and some game settings are written in a mess. Why is it that in the Three Kingdoms game, everyone's live broadcast is the same as history (?), And everyone brings different cards, but they can still achieve the same ending as the main world? I didn't understand it, but the first few were quite delicious.
Chapter 4
Ah Fu's character is broken. He revealed his identity to the psychiatrist at the beginning [scared] [scared]. It feels like his character is too broken.
The writing is not mature enough
Chapter 25
Help, I can't stand it anymore. It's very noob, the Bat character is very broken, and I feel that the heroine's vest is artificial and I don't know what she is doing. It's too shocking for me (horrified [split] why is this so highly collected?? I've been hit three times in it)
Chapter 15
I am interested in the details of the bubble period, but the pace is too slow... It feels too bland, and the ratings seem to be unfinished (?) I will consider trying to watch it again in the future
Chapter 62
I can't eat cp, because I'm an amateur on desserts, so I don't understand the protagonist's upgrade line at all (haha, as the protagonist of a refreshing novel, I have gained a little less... Well, the flaws are not concealed, I may try to eat it again later)
Chapter 8
The third time I clicked it, the final progress still stayed within ten chapters (painful face)
This kind of novel with no plot is not suitable for me (Crying Cat Cat Head) is so boring. I just like sad plot parties that are refreshing and refreshing.
Chapter 53
What can I say? The writing is very good.
I read it as a fun novel, but the protagonist's progress line didn't bring enough excitement, and I felt exhausted after reading it all at once.
Chapter 73
Writing style is OK
The plot is too long and the latter part is a bit bland for me. The animal stories I have read are all collections of short stories. (Thinking) I really prefer plots, maybe I will read them again.
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