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In just two chapters, there is a forum system mixed with autobiographical analysis of each person involved, constructing the past of an older generation who was not conservative in thinking but also very open in behavior.
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It's really too nurturing and I really can't do it anymore.
The content of "little beauties" in each chapter was so high that it made me wonder whether I was watching a football boy or a mountain king who wanted to steal the village's wife.
It is hard to imagine what advanced mental state the author and teacher had in writing such crazy words.
Those who love to watch the combination of "Bigger and Ninja" are in luck. Biter and Pipo are the pinnacle representatives of this literature and are a match made in heaven.
A very explosive beginning.
But with the protagonist going to play football for Manchester United, the story is almost two stories, and even the character of the protagonist is greatly separated.
The previous one is a story that combines football and "rescuing Fengchen" under the social background of the time, with a unique sense of historical heaviness. But after the protagonist went to play for Manchester United, the story became the kind of conventional football novel that would become a popular favorite. It's quite a pity.
A mother who is extremely controlling and paranoid, a father who only spends money when absent, a life-threatening system and a broken him.
Unlike most football genius protagonists, the male protagonist in this book has obvious shortcomings in football (although he has tried his best to develop advantages in other areas). All the games detailed in the text are not "downwind games", and for the male protagonist, every game is a matter of life and death. The twists and turns and climaxes on the field, coupled with the male protagonist's madness for scoring goals, make the game line of this book very exciting and immersive, as if you are really watching a wonderful football game in reality where "anything can happen before the final whistle blows."
Another thing that I think is particularly good is that the author has set up the game to have winners and losers. Although it was very bold to let the male protagonist lose a very important game in the mid-term, the reason for the loss made logical sense, and this loss also played an important role in promoting the plot. As long as the protagonist does not lose to the clown, for competitive novels, not all games must be won.
But I feel that the emotional line of this book is just average. The ordinary pure love with a hint of redemption is not as touching as the sympathy between Mu Niao and the male protagonist.
Maybe because it was written a few years ago, the small amount of forum style and the way of describing emotional lines in the article have a more contemporary feel (but the amazing thing is that the author didn't have this problem at all when he wrote the game scene).
In addition, I guess the focus is on the career line and the emotional line. The author's setting of the core suspense of this article is relatively rough. I don't really like the treatment of the so-called "culprit" in the article.
God among gods! I can feel that the author really put great care into telling this story.
In fact, I think this book has gone beyond the scope of traditional football cool articles. It tells the story of how a depressed patient who is extremely successful in his career and who seems to have everything in bloom to outsiders is mentally tortured, how he falls into the emotional abyss again and again, and how he struggles to get up to save himself again and again. However, the career background of the protagonist is set in the high-exposure, high-competition, and high-pressure football competition.
Several parallel emotional lines are drawn particularly well. Especially the Kamu line, the misunderstood code name, the wrong confession, the hopeless secret love hidden under the great friendship, the dramatic encounter on the youth platform in despair, the sincerity that took seven years to be conveyed due to a combination of circumstances, Chapters 132 and 140, I really cried from beginning to end.
Rumor: The hazy line between CB and CP is the best thing to drink!
The author has really read a lot of autobiographies of relevant players, and hopes to come back to fill in the gaps one day [crying]
The writing is quite good, with a bit of a children's book style.
But this style is a bit unsuitable for football. When reading, there is always a feeling that the realistic background of football is not in the same dimension as the protagonist. The protagonist seems to have been mistakenly immersed in books such as "Heidi" and "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer".
Moreover, in the entire story, there is a lack of shaping of the protagonist's "emotions, anger, sorrows, and joys" that can enrich the character's image and make the character flesh-and-blood. Compared with a "living" character that develops dynamically, the protagonist is more like a static concept that can be righteous and evil, always positive, and with holy light shining on the earth.
She ran away from him and chased her, a terrifying story of love and hatred.
The image of Panwa, who looks like a person but is actually far away from him, is portrayed in a profound way. The heroine is really miserable, living under someone else's roof and meeting such a scumbag.
The content of the novel is currently progressing to the point where the heroine cannot bear it anymore and is struggling to escape from the marriage hunt using children as an excuse.
Written as Otome, pronounced as CP Da Chao Stew. There is no competition, no emotional line, it is just pure evil, a must-read for anyone who wants to have fun.
Its authentic Chinese translation flavor of foreign literature. It is autobiographical, and there is a sense of sadness between the lines that both the good and the bad have passed away.
The red devil is in tatters and the kitten is tinkering.
In the first part, the protagonist's cat talk was quite interesting, but after the locker room problem was solved and the protagonist was upgraded to the red devil group's pet, it became a bit of a house-playing mode. Only the underworld flavor of Panwa's hatred of the protagonist's homosexuality could barely be eaten.
The writing of the game is okay, but because the protagonist is the goalkeeper, apart from saving the ball, other parts of the game will be relatively simple, which will affect the excitement a bit.
I don't win. The teacher who came up with this wicked joke must be a genius. The biggest problem is that it is too short. I hope the teacher can expand it to 1 million words.
Overall, the forum text is better-looking than the main text, and it feels like I'm trying to get something out of DB. Especially in the first, third, and fourth units, the plot is quite gripping and makes people happy.
The part where she was a translator in the Cuju circle was quite interesting. Sister Shui charmed everyone around her in such a light way. But after moving to F1, I don't know if it is because this industry with too much male content is too toxic. I felt that the author was very painful to write, the protagonist was very painful, and I was also very painful to watch... The ending was quite hasty, and some of the emotional lines buried earlier basically ended without any problem.
It's hard to understand why a Zuyiwen with a relatively big heroine's career line would use such a male-oriented style of writing, and it's also very stinky.
The meme was quite funny at first, but after reading too many slaps, I became a bit tired of aesthetics, and the writing of other characters was really a bit intellectually depressing...
The core plot is quite good. A painting genius from a family of con men defrauds a retired football retired old man (bushi) from money, sex, and even food.
I originally thought that the heroine in this theme would be the kind of evil woman who is good at playing with people's hearts and pretending to be a pig, weaving emotional traps waiting for those emotional veterans who have been in football for many years to jump into, watching them love her to death but she remains unmoved. But in fact, the heroine is not at all "bad" as the author has always emphasized. On the contrary, every emotional line is quite real, and it feels like hurting the enemy by one thousand and hurting yourself by eight hundred.
The male guests who appeared were a bit papery and lacked the tension of you coming and going. Except for the emotional line between Xiaoyin and Xiaoyin, which had this meaning, the other paragraphs were relatively bland.