Xp is being released. It contains some Zerg articles that I feel are pretty good, and I prefer 1v1 and sweet articles. Life is already very bitter, so it would be better if the article is sweeter~
Nice! The introduction and writing at the beginning are a bit awkward, but the writing becomes smoother and smoother, and the length is also very suitable. It is just the kind of thing that you can be satisfied with after reading it in a few days. The plot is a little awkward and forced, but it is completely flawless. It is a sumptuous afternoon tea that can be savored slowly. The length and length are also well controlled. There are no overly long side stories and too many sub-CPs. The main CP is also a strong combination. It has a little bit of a pie-from-the-sky flavor but the overall story development is not particularly forced. In short, it is great. I recommend you to read it [Red Heart]
It's sad, but it's touching and acceptable, and the length of the article is just right. The stalk is a bit strange, and there is a special discussion about the insect form that needs attention. Rather than calling it a Zerg novel, it's better to think of it as "Suppose My Lover Is Not Human"
It feels cute. . . It has a special ancient taste. . . A very charismatic male insect, the ending is a bit messy, but overall he is very cute. . . It pokes me. . .
The experience is still very good, but it's a bit of a pity.
The early pacing is a bit too slow, and the ending is too fast. All the problems are solved at once, leaving people feeling a bit empty. There is not even foreshadowing and a step-by-step development line. Many things seemed extremely urgent in the previous chapter and then suddenly had results in the next chapter. This is really not good. When looking for the adjutant by name, the author may think that it is foreshadowing that he did not find it after searching for it once, but for very urgent things, it feels like it is better to explain that the protagonist is busy. . . And the content of the copywriting is a bit inconsistent with the actual content. I can't say there is no such thing. I can only say that it is not the focus of writing the article at all, and the advantages of my article are not fully utilized.
Although this may seem a bit mean, the viewing experience is actually quite good.
Cute, the plot develops very smoothly, and it does not emphasize the weakness of the male insect, but uses its own advantages. This is very good. I like the live broadcast element very much. The writing is very natural and very loving. It is very good at playing a lot of xql. The interaction is very cute and worth watching [Red Heart]
It's delicious, the length is well controlled, and it's a great little dessert. Although the reconciliation was a bit abrupt, overall it was still pretty good.
A very cute article, a bit refreshing, but very smooth and not exaggerated, very cute, the interaction and plot development are very smooth, the only shortcoming is that it is a bit short, but it has indeed said what needs to be said. I give full marks to the cookie [red heart]
Cute! Relatively speaking, it is not a very long article, but the cute points are very clear. There is a bit of sourness at the beginning, but it is not very long. The misunderstandings are resolved without any delay, and the emotional development later is also very smooth. It is a very qualified little dessert article.
The story itself is well written and the plot is very cute. There are some sad parts and some fun ones. The sad parts are all short, basically only one or two chapters, so don't worry. Overall, highly recommended. The last extra chapter and sometimes the descriptions in the story are a bit misleading.
The setting is relatively novel, the writing is also good, and the world view setting is relatively complete. It went a little off in the later stage, but the main CP is really my strike zone [red heart]. The plot setting is a bit abrupt and forced, but the flaws are not outweighed. [Plus 1] Warning, this is not a mindless sweet story. There is a description of the plot of the younger brothers being tortured and killed. There are many minor abuse points later and they are deliberately set up. Even the protagonist's own brother was involved in it. He single-handedly caused the patient to suffer from mental illness and has not apologized. 0 Responsibility. It is the protagonist who apologizes on his behalf. . . Moreover, the descriptions of many brothers later led to a lot of comments about dismantling CP. If you were just here for a mindless sweet story, you would probably stop reading halfway through. Oh, right, it's best not to read the comment section. There are a lot of arguments and comments about splitting up xp. Having said that, the xql setting is very cute. . . It's a pity that the overall flaws cannot be concealed. . .
The setting is very interesting and very funny. It is a very good article written in a joyful direction. I recommend it. The only drawback is that the development is a bit nonsensical, and I was kept in the dark for too long, but this can be regarded as one of the cute points of this article, and it is still quite funny.
The narrative is a bit biased towards the Zerg background, but the writing itself is very good and worth a read. It has a bit of a crematorium flavor of chasing your wife, but also thanks to the Zerg setting, in fact, chasing your wife is not abusive.
The setting is very cute, and the early interactions are really fun and exciting. I recommend watching it! It's a pity that it gradually went off track in the later period and the writing was a bit unsustainable. . . But overall it still looks great!