The setting is very novel, and the abuse in the early stage is very interesting and enjoyable. In the later stage, after the protagonist regains his true identity, the fantasy concentration is too high and the early stage feels a bit broken.
The author's writing skills are okay, but I feel that he likes to emphasize the correctness of policies. It is too righteous and makes people experience the sexual contraction full of realistic charm from time to time. It is unattractive. I have read several articles by the author and it is almost like this (yes, I can't get enough of it). I feel like the author lacks aura. He has written a lot of articles but the expression of some emotions still feels stiff, which is really strange.
Well, it's a pure idiot, a beautiful wife, and a mischievous evil who always loves the same person for some reason (normally I call this situation an evil one). The plot is also visible to the naked eye and can be seen at a glance. Shou is really cute, um, no more.
Pulled the big one. I bought it for 98 and finally couldn't make up my mind to buy the last two chapters. The whole process was very strange. I thought the setting was ancient fantasy, but it turned out to be ancient fantasy in modern times. It was very separated from the modern background setting. The plot was inexplicable and the emotions were incomprehensible. In the end, the protagonist was a ghost and had sex with someone else. It was eye-opening. The ending was so rushed that it felt like the author didn't want to write it anymore.
It's just average. In the early stage, the interaction between humans and cats was quite cute, but in the later stage, when the cat changed into a human, it became more dull and boring. I felt like I fell in love with each other for no reason, which is probably a common problem in this type of writing. In addition, some new settings were introduced towards the end of the game without much foreshadowing. Although the human design pit was filled in, the overall sense was very fragmented compared to the full text. The villain's image was also very flat and unoriginal, and the integration with the article was also very low. The appearance time was short and the difficulty was low. The character design was not established. It felt that even removing the villain would have no impact.
As for the author, the experience of following up is still very good. During the serialization period, he had food at a certain time almost every day, and I only asked for leave once in my memory. Generally speaking, the author's writing is relatively smooth, but the plot and characters still need a little more work. The writing is somewhat lacking and needs more precipitation. I can only say that there is quite a lot of room for improvement.
Three stars are given to the protagonist's character, but the author doesn't want to give it a single star. From the beginning, I pursued the character of the protagonist, a very rational and decisive baby. The first scumbag was also slapped in the face. As a result, the author occasionally stopped updating for no reason and updated it by one or two thousand each time. In the later period, the update was directly updated in an outline style and was quickly completed. The other scumbags were not seen much. It's a slap in the face, and I didn't even see a hair of the crematorium I wanted to see. I didn't see it and didn't want to see it. The protagonist is just a complete idiot. Baby, tell me the truth. Did you get lowered or kidnapped? Just blink. Damn it, the author, stop persecuting others. I feel so bad. Obviously, I feel that the author is not incapable of writing about emotions. The other two important male pairs are more emotional than Gong, and they are normal people. If I don't change Gong, I can only say that the author does have a strange sense of belief in him.