Self-Help Lightning Protection Fan Fiction (Personal)
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One Piece: Naruto Hunter Curse is a fanfic. If the writing, rhythm, story, plot or word description are not good, then abandon the novel. It is a rotten novel about a man wearing a giant thunder. Because mentally retarded fans will no longer read fan movies
What is it about the writing and rhythm that is so attractive?
The main character is a fujoshi, Da Lei. This is an otome novel but the main character likes to watch two men together. I'm disgusting. It's really disgusting to have this kind of setting in Yiwen. Can the author know how to write something? Is it possible that you are a rotten girl yourself? It's been 26 years and you still like to watch men stabbing men. Fujoshi should not write romance. Not highly recommended anyway.
Can any normal woman finish reading the first chapter?
Famous man who wears women's clothes, later claimed to be all back to him. The most disgusting thing in history. I don't know how the author came up with such a bad idea? It seems that the author of Chong Lei has not written it once or twice. Personally, I feel that men wearing women are basically rotten BL. When reading this type of article, is it possible that you are a woman yourself, but your gender identity is that of a man, so you see men wearing women's clothes and then falling in love with men? So I couldn't figure out whether the article I liked was about men or women, whether I identified myself as a woman or a man, or whether I had a wrong perception of gender and sexual orientation. Anyway, I didn't want to say anything, so I just scolded him.
Ancient Chinese literature is like this. The themes that were popular at the time are no longer popular now. If the subject matter is not popular, then it depends on the writing style and storyline. But this one is not up to par. And because it is more sensitive, in that era, the female perspective is also relatively weak, so it is not recommended.
It is only recommended to read Chapter 25 and 26! ! ! Why does the heroine's character stay with the group? She is actually already OOC. The straightforward, cute and kind-hearted Samoyed sunshine puppy later turned into a 88-year-old! Like Tuan, who kills all the clerks in the heroine's early store without blinking an eye, will the heroine kill them? Why did she join this group? I can't understand that even if the puppy turns dark because of things, it's still a puppy. The puppy's mentality is just like Xiaojie's, and it will return to the sunshine later. Moreover, Xiaojie's personality is actually a bit dark, but your difference is too big. Your personality change is too big, and I don't accept it! I wasted hours! It's a delicious subject matter and the writing is spot on, but I won't accept it! The heroine is a straight shooter in the enhancement department and has a strong sixth sense. The descriptions of various supporting characters in the series are not OOC and are very good. When you see Chrollo turning into a hamster, the character description is also very good. The heroine wanted to escape when she was caught in the group at first, but then she accepted this transition point. I didn't like it! One of the later copies in particular made me angry! Women are a gender, and losing power is a situation. It feels like eating daddy! If you want to watch it, try to stop watching it as soon as you see the hamster. Just treat it as if the heroine escaped. How could you write it like this in the later stage? But it is a 23-year-old book. It would be best if the author could change it, instead of making it all black or something like that. This kind of neither white nor black is a bit hard to accept. It doesn't take a day or two for people to kill people and set fire to exterminate clans. If you are a bad person, you are a bad person. There is no way to clean it up. No matter what the environment is like, whatever you do in the future, it will be your own choice as you grow up. Don't swing your sword at the powerful, swing your sword at the weak. It's because the weak are good at swordsmanship. Don't use those words that are all because of being second-rate in the world. I hope there are more articles on this type of enhancement series, but I really can't find them, otherwise I wouldn't rate him.
All in all, the romance aspect is bigger than the overall storyline. That would be meaningless. I saw 68 pictures. For those who like to watch light-hearted little sweet novels, you can go and watch them. It doesn't have much appeal to me.
It's a literary bar with an adult protagonist, but I don't think there are many adventure stories. I personally like to read adventure stories. I don't really like Hisoka. It's all about falling in love. I like to take risks or write more of my own stories, using the background of a hunter. Too many fan authors just want to follow the main line, which I personally don't like very much. The drama is already rotten.
The rescue scene was so bad, well, I probably stopped watching it after 38. Basically, I've read too many stories like Curse, Pirates, and Naruto, so it doesn't have much appeal to me.
Men disguising themselves as women is a big minefield for me. If you are not strong enough, you will pretend to be a man. Is it because men are stronger in your mind? Even wearing a vest is unacceptable. We should learn from men's literature that there are very few female protagonists among male protagonists in various literary genres. There is a little bit of discrimination in this resume that they are not very confident about themselves as women and need to be compared with soft girls. I don't like it very much. Does the strength of women need to be compared with another person of the same gender?
Famous neurotic literature, the heroine has Electraphobia, a feeling of rejection towards her mother, an imaginary enemy, the whole text is self-destructive, has low self-esteem, the plot is serious, and it is m. Nausea and vomiting, uglier than a corpse that had been dead for seven or eight days. It was extremely disgusting and I would not recommend it. I had nightmares about it for a few days. The plot of self-destruction is particularly serious, there is a plot of disfigurement, and the heroine has been on a diet for a long time. After traveling through time, he was also physically and mentally abused. The heroine was mentally ill before she traveled through time. Her mother in her original family was mentally and physically abused, cold-blooded, violent and coercive. She didn't like to get married and was raped within marriage. She was like a rag. She traveled through time after X. Albino and mute grow up in a dysfunctional family. The whole process is characterized by serious self-destruction and low self-esteem, especially the abuse of women. The heroine gave people the impression of a corpse that had been soaked for seven or eight days. Her body was covered with maggots and flies, and her flesh was white and swollen. Every time I take a step, maggots fall from my body. For the heroine, death is the best liberation. It would be nice if the heroine in the first picture died, it should be the happiest thing for the heroine.
I don't like the protagonist very much. I don't really like this kind of hesitant person.
What do you really want from the arrogant and awkward protagonist?
The early stage was good, but after Chapter 99 I got a little tired of it. There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the pacing and storyline need to be strengthened.
The storyline is relatively simple, and I felt bored after reaching Chapter 8. I've seen too much of Hei Ni. The background of his story is relatively simplified. The characters are just not very smart.
The subject matter is very eye-catching, and the weakened depiction of women in the early stages makes people feel vomiting and annoyed. A feeling of being stared at, disgusting. I don't know why I can't read the comments, and I don't know why I just sat there and turned off the comments. I stopped reading after reading Chapter 1
I know why it can be combined with Swordsman. It has a very strange story development. It was quite novel when I saw 30 pictures. It may have been the subject that I have liked to read for ten years. Now I just think that the second grade is outrageous, especially the sad feeling of loving what I have given to the world. It may only attract children. Adults like me no longer like this type of topic. I discarded 40 cards.
Generally speaking, it is a kind of white hair healing film, but I don't like this kind of story very much. It is a bit too boring for me. I discarded them after seeing 20 of them.
There is no hook. It is indeed a 21-year-old article. Generally speaking, the writing quality is not very good, which makes people feel a little irritated.
It is a three-no type of novel, and the protagonist of the radio wave does not think like a normal person. It's a game mode again, there are too many hunter game modes, there are too many themes, and there aren't many hooks, so I discarded it.
I've probably watched it for about 30 years, but I personally feel that the pace is not particularly good, the writing style, and the plot are not eye-catching. No hook
You saw it, um, where is the Golden Empire? It's actually a bit boring. Chrollo's book is too simple, and actually a bit boring. His character is not that simple. The writing is too popular, but the overall story is quite enjoyable. It is the kind of person who takes care of you when you go to the toilet. I discarded it when I saw 199. It's a bit boring anyway.
The overall writing rhythm of 21 years old can't keep up with what it is now. In those days, there were no articles that could be read only if they were written by people who didn't want to be picky. It's a meme, but it's no longer popular now. On the one hand, the description is a bit weak and degrading to women, and the writing is too dense and there is no focus. After seeing 52 pictures, I stopped looking at them.
I like the character of the protagonist very much. There is a little bit of cultural legacy from that time. I like to call myself "grandpa" and I think of myself as a man. Maybe there is a gender barrier. This is quite disgusting, I recommend seeing about a dozen of them. There are many insulting words for women
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