Oh My, What a Sweet Treat 老天奶，这小甜饼

1 投 Feeding the Frail Male Supporting Character 投喂病弱男配 Cola Ginger Soup可乐姜汤Romance297k WordsCompleted 89.7kFavorites169.2kClicks/ch30.7kGifts

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So beautiful

2 靠 Healing the Frail Governor with Good Food 靠美食治愈病弱督主 Owe Three Taels of Gold欠金三两Romance530k WordsCompleted 52.6kFavorites72.9kClicks/ch38.3kGifts

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Happy!

3 始 After I Toyed with and Abandoned the Frail Immortal Lord 始乱终弃病弱仙君后 I Know the Undercurrent知我暗涌Romance207k WordsCompleted 38.7kFavorites41.3kClicks/ch22.2kGifts

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3.5, A short sweet article that lacks writing skills, but is better because there is no procrastination.

4 听 I Heard That I Am the Reincarnation of Bai Yueguang 听说我是白月光转世 Good Umbrella好伞Romance323k WordsCompleted 16kFavorites13.7kClicks/ch15.7kGifts

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I thought it would be a bad ending, but I didn't expect it to be so bad. The three points are set. This is no longer a high opening and a low exit, but a high opening and a negative exit.

5 剑 Sword Cultivators? Not Even Dogs Would Date Them 剑修，狗都不谈 Good Umbrella好伞Romance616k WordsCompleted 75.3kFavorites57.2kClicks/ch159.8kGifts

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Can I finish writing a book normally like a human being? All books seem to be gone just halfway through. Is it okay to write an outline and end before starting to write? What's the point of starting a book with only the beginning in mind? I have been deceived three times. I won't order it again until I open the rating and see other people's opinions.

6 狠 After Brutally Torturing Black Lotus, I Escaped 狠虐黑莲花后我死遁了 Cola Ginger Soup可乐姜汤Romance454k WordsCompleted 62.6kFavorites73.1kClicks/ch24.1kGifts

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Love sweet essay

7 她 Her Beta Adjutant 她的beta副官[gb] Another Year Comes又逢年Romance748k WordsCompleted 36.9kFavorites38.3kClicks/ch52.3kGifts

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Not bad[cat claw]

8 A AB Love Is Never Going to Work [GB] AB恋是行不通的[gb] Wen Yuan问远Romance391k WordsCompleted 28.2kFavorites24.8kClicks/ch16kGifts

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Love sweet essay

9 不 Don't Fall in Love with the Starting Point Hero 不要爱上起点男主 Lost in the Clouds云迷Romance344k WordsCompleted 19.7kFavorites21.1kClicks/ch8.8kGifts

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Love sweet essay

10 我 My Junior Brother and I Are Destined to Be in Conflict with Each Other 我与师弟命中相克 Raise the Knife to Shine on the Moon提刀照月Romance782k WordsCompleted 2.7kFavorites2.6kClicks/ch1.6kGifts

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It can be seen that the author is very sincere in the early and middle stages. Compared with many pure mixed books, at least he is carefully conceiving the main plot and the process of revealing the mystery. However, the ups and downs of the story and the bland rhythm are just like the outline and ideas are directly reflected, and there is a great lack of control over the lens language and rhythm: the former mostly relies on direct description of settings and verbal dialogue to create scenes. To use the analogy of TV series and movies, a new director only takes close-ups of the actors' faces and upper bodies. The latter has no concept of ups and downs in the narrative of the story. It is not low enough to make the climax, which is not high enough, not high enough. The conflict may be too exciting but no one is caught. The ending of the person who should be killed is unknown, and the ending of the person who should be kept is unknown. The weirdest thing is that the conflict has a sense of humor that is not resolved at the end! Let's talk about the later stage. First of all, the ending makes dumplings based on the title of the book, but the twist is very blunt. The ending of the characters, not to mention the side characters, even the main characters have no whereabouts. Secondly, in the later period, I wrote anxiously but read slowly and bluntly, and the information was trivial but incomplete. All in all, let's settle down the writing a little more. Since the main line cannot be digested if it is too huge, you can start with a simpler main line. First, master the three aspects of rhythm, ups and downs, and lens language (building scene actions), and then try to challenge the main drama. Finally, the emotional drama also lacks the above three aspects, which has the same shortcomings as the plot line.