A very wonderful female fairy tale, suitable for replenishing positive energy.
It's a bit short, and the foreshadowing is a bit unfinished, but it's fun to watch.
The article is fluent, the characters are logically online, the protagonist has a full personality, the salvation story + the comfort story, the plot of the copy is a bit sloppy, it serves the crisis and the protagonist's sense of satisfaction but is logical.
The heroine is very likable and the writing is logical.
It's a short and medium story, the plot is fast-paced, and the middle and latter parts are a bit rushed, so it's half a group portrait.
4.5 Stars
There are no flaws, it is suitable for girls to read, it is a female-oriented article, there are many excellent female characters, and the writing is relatively comfortable to read.
As for the storyline, it was quite amazing in the early stage, but dull in the later stage. The setting of spiritual energy invading old myths and fantasy things reviving was over before it even started. The technological cheats were too open. Heaven, which I am more interested in, did not appear. Mythical creatures such as Kunpeng, Phoenix and Dragon, as well as mythical figures such as Nuwa, Bodhisattva, Buddha, and Taishang Laojun also have no faith at all. They mainly focus on the underworld and some demons and monsters.
As the protagonist accepts the system of cultivating immortals, you can go through some Qi-refining and foundation-building pills. You can see a little bit of writing in this regard in the early stage, but the difference between those with "spiritual roots" and those without spiritual roots is that the former has better physical fitness and can identify ghosts and some abnormal phenomena. There is no emphasis on personal heroism. It can only be said that the golden finger on the technology side is wide open.
In one go, mom, I saw a miracle
Women and men are equal, but the focus is on group portraits of extremely high quality! ! Not a single gun in the time loop comes out in vain! ! ! The author of Chapter 68 has something to say. You must read it! ! Logical online writing, smooth writing, rich characters, and a plot that can be played
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gb, Lei Men Double Star/Female Dai Saibo Niu Niu enter with caution and no counterattack.
The main line is about falling in love and making love. The career line, friendship line and interstellar mecha mental power settings are almost the same as the background board. It can be used as a bedtime story.
Ps: Some of the extras are about scarves, there are kidnappings, forced injuries, so be careful.
The previous work of Slime Jane Fish, no negative comments x
There are occasional insults to women and swear words. In the early stage, the supporting cast is all male, and there is a one-way ambiguous line (but the lack of charm of the male supporting actor is a bit annoying). At the end, it is praised by men as a favorite.
3.5 Stars
The author of Chapter 40 said that after a plot point, there is a golden finger, which is fun. I've finished reading, what exactly is Golden Finger? ? ? ? ?
I couldn't feel happy after that, and I felt frustrated for many chapters. The only extra chapter that could be called enjoyable was just revenge on the scumbag, and it gave the scumbag too many eyeballs. Logically speaking, in normal novels, this kind of revenge and scumbag plot is usually in the early and middle stages of the whole book (referring to important scumbags, small scumbags will die after appearing in three chapters), because it is necessary to make space for the protagonist's exciting experience. It's okay to take revenge and abuse the scum, but it shouldn't take the spotlight.
The plot line is weak. On the surface it is anti-federal and anti-human experimentation, but on the inside it is the healing of the relationship between the original family and the deformed parent-daughter. Especially at the end, the plot of dragging the whole world into the protagonist's nightmare and launching a wave of counter-attacks was a bit childish and rushed.
Babies who have concerns about their original family can read this book. Those who are just looking for refreshing articles and want to read the imaginative settings should be cautious.