Great, well written. Especially the period when the two were pushing and pulling each other before their relationship was confirmed, it was written very delicately. Therefore, after the two people confirmed their relationship, the description was not as good as before, revealing a strange feeling of being at a loss. However, the description of the rice circle is very down-to-earth, and it can be seen that the author has been in the circle for a long time.
A good novel, the setting of "Guarding Sweetheart" is very interesting. There are a lot of shojo manga that can be seen with the naked eye, and most of them are simply explained. Some of them I wouldn't be able to react to if I hadn't read them. The description of the worldview is acceptable, and it can be seen that there are a lot of settings, but they are not reflected in the text. However, it is indeed humorous for an American to move the Chinese people through his patriotism with the help of the heavy Chinese people who are wearing the shell of a small-time person.
It's really rare that the class monitor has a lot of scenes, and the male mother setting makes him common again. The black organization's elevation is barely acceptable. In fact, it relies on another protagonist to brainwash the red side to forcibly elevate it. The overall setting is not sustainable.
There are still some shortcomings in the description of details. In some places, the emotions are not conveyed enough, and it seems a bit stiff and monotonous. The author has the habit of swallowing words.
Overall level: mid-open and low.
Advantages:
The career part is a bit idealistic, quite reasonable, and it is enough for the standards of a cool article. The early part of the career line is very attractive. The rhythm part of the article is pretty good before the idol part, and the details highlight the author's research on this aspect. The emotional line is okay, and some of the plots are cute.
Disadvantages:
In the rhythm section, starting from the idol stage and ending at the actor node, the overall rhythm of the article is slow, the protagonist is offline too much, and the supporting roles are too large. This is actually also reflected in the pre-V chapter. After describing the perspective of the protagonist Su Ning for a few chapters, he suddenly changes his perspective to describe Shen Mingzheng. After the actor node, the rhythm of the article begins to get out of control. Once it turns to outline writing, the rhythm takes off.
The main character of this article is unstable, specifically Su Ning. "Rebirth" is like a decoration in some early stages. It only becomes reasonable after the readers raised questions and the author made changes.
This author prefers bloodshed, especially on the emotional line. In the main text, there was a phenomenon of breaking the character and throwing blood in order to advance the progress. Although the author was reminded to modify it in the end, on the basis of having read the "original version", the revised part still tasted very good.
In the extra chapter, the author completely let himself go, completely exposing the two problems he currently has. The first is that there are specific nodes first and then the plot. The characters and plots that connect the nodes come later. Refer to the first extra chapter involving the forum. Second: He is particularly keen on bloody things, and he will not hesitate to destroy his character for the so-called bloody things. Please refer to the subsequent blackening extra.
Summary: The article is readable, interesting and cute, and you can get a good experience without worrying about the rhythm and some emotional lines.
——2023.11.15.07.51
The writing is good and the atmosphere is okay. The transition in the later period is a bit abrupt, which may be a problem of the short story and not being detailed well.
Daily use Ke Tong, warm and healing. As mentioned at the end of the article, there are many possibilities in the world, and I wish all of us are lucky enough in life.
The overall writing is acceptable, but the settings cannot support the entire length of the text, and the later stages are flat.
It's okay. The protagonist's motivations were written unconvincingly in the early stage, but the wife was able to listen to her suggestions and I also commented on my previous message well. I'm really happy. I wish my wife better and better.
The protagonist's ability is really great, and it is a brute force to break the plot line of the original work. The emotional line is okay, but the details elsewhere are lacking and lackluster. However, if you just like cookies, you can give it a try.
Generally speaking, the game settings and the like are a bit white, just like the old white style of Dianjia, which has a cool literary flavor from the past.
This author's writing is not good, he makes random promises, and always breaks his promises and breaks his updates. The article as a whole is also awkward.
Not bad, the description of the move to destroy Little Japan is a bit idealistic.
The heroine's golden finger is quite big, and the villain setting is a bit too simple and crude, a bit brainless.
The writing of Empress Dowager Xiaozhuang is inconsistent, which shows that the author has a one-sided understanding of the character.
The ending is rather hasty, and overall it is a self-pleasure article. The world consciousness described in the article is too partial to Dazai. Since it is asking the protagonist to do something, this is the way to do things. And it is obvious that the author likes Jiaoye very much, and it is amazing to write a novel without cp like this.
It's okay, it's still mild in some aspects. The author may be a fan of "idiots", so there are still filters. In the remaining part of the plot, the heroine appears twice sleeping without supervision, and the plot is not rigorous. The career line is well written, but it's still a bit too simple. There are more male idols and less female idols. The heroine has been described many times as having a good figure, but I don't like it a little bit. Others are okay.
2025.9.28
Not bad, but there are bugs and inconsistencies in some places, mostly caused by the author's inability to remember. The career line is well written, but I don't really like the if line, and it's not finished yet [cheek support]
2025.9.10
It is a very good comprehensive English and American novel. Let's talk about the advantages first: Madam's writing style is very graphic, and she narrates the detective, the era he lived in, and the stories that happened to him. The writing style is humorous, the pace is comfortable, and it is a rare article with a good ending. The detail processing and foreshadowing are also just right. As a novel with events as clues, the story is well connected, the characters are exquisitely created, and the interaction with the original characters is natural and interesting.
Next, let's talk about the shortcomings: As a fan, for the sake of the integrity of the article, it is not as easy to understand as other fans, and there are some reading thresholds.
The setting of the case is more imaginative and puzzle-solving, requiring you to interact with the author in some places, making it easier for readers to get tired while reading. Readers who are chasing the end should be careful, as you may need to adjust the reading rhythm by yourself.
Nothing else, thank you for your creation!
Fortunately, I have read this one carefully, and I don't have many subscriptions for the remaining works. I didn't expect that there would be problems with your position.
Okay, the article overall is two stars.
The writing is mainly good in two aspects. One is the game setting and content, which are very attractive and make people want to play. Games like Midnight Sound and Natural Disaster, as well as the following large-scale games, can all be written independently. The author is also digging into the high-tech aspects of holography. For example, Sensi and Tiandao describe the playability of holographic games brought about by high-tech capabilities, which is a little better than those mindless games.
The second aspect is that the protagonist's life experience is solved neatly and neatly, which is very good. I hate the kind of stories that slap you in the face and let the villain mess around for several chapters, but this one is very good.
For the rest, this article has little merit. The overall outline style of writing, the running account style of updates, a lot of content is not expanded, the career line is laid out without thinking, the emotional drama is equal to nothing, and there are countless shortcomings.
In short, I only read it for the game settings. The author's game settings are very good, and it can be seen that he has designed a lot. But the author's perfunctoryness in other aspects is also very obvious. In the later period, the writing became more and more concise, and the article ended abruptly, so I will not give this article a too high score.
——2025.7.3
This author's chronic problem is that her writing style cannot support the setting. I have read several of her books, mostly for the wonders of the setting. This is the only one I have finished reading so far.
Collecting and cultivating, and upgrading step by step are my favorites. The settings for alienated objects are very good. The protagonist didn't encounter any setbacks along the way, it was a traditional upgrading story.
The writing style of this article is really a big failure, and I guess the author can't improve it. I think the latest Ma Jia article still has these old problems, and is even more serious.
The article changes scenes frequently, the narrative is fragmented, and characters appear in the early stage without distinctive characteristics. The reasoning of events always gives the camera to the mastermind behind the scenes, and then does not introduce the characteristics of the characters. For readers, it only increases the reading threshold.
The whole text is full of stream-of-consciousness writing, and there is no foreshadowing for the emotional advancement. Suddenly the person disappears, a sudden event breaks out, the emotions suddenly rise, and then the protagonist wins the prize.
The early stages of each event were short, and the climax of each event was pale, rushed, and ended in a hasty manner. The final battle in the later stage was also not written satisfactorily, but the rich rewards were what kept me here. Once again, the main character's trick settings are really good.
The description is always from a third perspective, the so-called God's perspective, but it does not give full information when advancing the incident, and only reveals the so-called backhand when the incident is about to be resolved. The protagonist is a passive type. She basically does not take the initiative to participate in events. Especially in the later stages, readers definitely know that nothing will happen to her, but they do not know what kind of power she can exert by standing still. This makes the article's portrayal of the protagonist's combat power very weak. If it were not for the clear division of the levels of the monsters and the very detailed setting of the monsters, the attractiveness of this article would be greatly reduced.
The character setting of the protagonist is still very thin compared to the supporting characters. It may be because she is underage throughout the entire article, but her lack of character is also a very obvious problem in this article.
In terms of advancing the event, the early stage relied too much on recorded text, and diary-like clues appeared three times. There are many common sense bugs in the article. Later on, when an alien planet as big as Jupiter hits the earth, it has no impact at all, which makes people laugh.
The writing of this article uses events to advance the characters, just like watching a puppet show setting up the stage. Whichever character is needed is pulled up to perform. The wastage rate of characters is very high, especially the characters with medium to high combat power. There is basically no shaping and no role is seen. The flatness of these supporting characters that support the events makes the description of the events linear and thin. In addition, the author is weak in describing the big scenes, which also affects the creation of the protagonist who solves the events.
The whole article is only supported by the setting of the world view. It has only a slender frame, not much flesh, blood and skin. It is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless.
However, I still finished reading this book. It's okay to read it as a mindless and cool novel from the early years. There are not many female videos in this genre. The writing of this article is actually much better in the later period. The author's 24-year-old Ma Jia article was much more serious than this in the early stage. The smoothness of the writing during the period of writing Apollo is completely lost. The author has regressed obviously, which is disappointing.
——2025.1.13
The writing is quite good, and the roles of the two male protagonists are well grasped. Maybe it's because I'm following the serialization, but the writing pace is slow, and the writing is a bit delayed in some places. The later stages are not as good as the early stages.
It's well written, and the emotional line is much better than the other one I've read by my wife before. The main reason is that it has a double arrow from the beginning, the ambiguous period is short, and the rhythm is good.
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