It's a heart-warming and cute story. It's a cute and intellectual story. It's a waste of money to abandon it before reaching Chapter V [laughing and crying]. The author is star-chasing, so the talent show and the experience of being star-chased are not bad, but the emotional line and the plot both have intellectual aspects, which makes it unbearable. Abandoned
Warm Heart Store Illiterate Book, 4 stars and one star deducted for conjunctions, it affects the reading experience too much, normally I would not finish it.
With a little bit of translation accent, the grievances between wealthy families in the early and middle stages of the plot are interesting, but in the later stages the focus is on raising children, and Gong Zhen leaves the family to start his own business, which is very boring. Isn't it fun to attack this character and make everyone fly equally? My relative, my grandfather, couldn't bear to see Gong still being unable to get rid of him. He was protected by his older brother, and the younger brother couldn't help but show affection to his older brother occasionally.
The overall plot is smooth and smooth, the characters are not clever, and the author is also good at expressing different characters' personality traits in dialogue.
Narratively, there are too many excesses in the article! Many! Deleting the connectives "but", "however", "because" and "so" will have no effect:
"So I am her son"
"So it really wasn't you?"
In Chapter 63, there is a section where two words can be seen. I feel uncomfortable listening to the book. Isn't it uncomfortable for the author to read it back?
And "enjoy" whatever else you do
The writing is both good and bad at the same time. There are a few extra chapters that are slightly better. The deputy CP brother's AA romance is quite tense. I hope it doesn't refer to real-life homosexual research on "surrender rituals" and "right sharing". If it does, then let's make the story interesting first and then add value, okay? OK
After reading Chapter 27, the emotional line was a bit abrupt. The draft is pretty well written. The accompanying memes are interesting but not written to accompany the reading and the change in mentality
A heart-warming collection of treasures. Nice! The personality is interesting. Both attackers and sufferers are smart people. Nice! But has the author stopped writing articles in JJ?