Arnold is very cute, especially the dash in front of his words is cute and funny hahaha. It has a very dreamy feel to the magical world, similar to Harry Potter, but very fairy tale
Great needless to say. But I felt a little tired in the middle, so I didn't finish it. But this character is really amazing. He is weak but arrogant and tough. He is not a flat character created by superimposing rhetoric. He is super charming.
Looks good! She is frail and fragrant, and she handles the sense of salvation by the white moonlight very well, but the group portrait is not very good. For me, the only drawback is that the late attack is a bit disappointing and I can't get it, but overall it looks good.
This is mainly because the infrastructure is beautiful. The characters are okay, but the writing is a bit white. After opening the map, I felt it was a bit routine. But the early stage is very interesting and can be recalled
It's very exciting and novel. The only flaw is that I feel that some points could be written to be more exciting, but it's a bit unsatisfactory if I don't write it out.