The emotional line is as light as Chunfeng Yaoyou's, the content of the copy is okay, and the overall quality is above average. The shou is cute and the gong is also a good man.
I really like your book White Peach Crisp. The copy of Earl of Winter in the middle is so beautiful that I must read it every time I re-read it... Next time, please don't write about slice attack again, okay?
The dungeon plot and puzzle solving have been significantly improved compared to the previous identity card, but there are still problems with most of the unlimited flow in the middle and late stages of the game, and the pace becomes faster, but the overall fluctuation is not big. The setting and background of the explanation are also clearly explained, which is better than 60% of the settings in the middle and late stages of the infinite flow that I [personally] have seen. After reading it, it is really exciting. I have a good brain and the operation is very complicated and exciting.
There are still relatively few emotional lines, which are a bit pitiful. I feel that the emotional transition of the other party is also very blunt, but I can understand it with Infinite Flow. If the copy is well written, I can dote on it (I like this copy very much).
Originally, based on the above, I could have given this book four or even five stars. My personal four-star rating criterion for Infinite Streaming is that the plot/emotions are good enough to cover up the shortcomings, and the story is not completely unfinished, so that the story can be retracted. Five stars means that both the romance and the plot are both above average, or one of them is particularly good and can cover up the shortcomings of the plot/emotions (this book is the latter), but the main reason is that no one told me that Slicing Attack is cut off like this and it is not suitable to go back! ! ! ! !
At that time, I thought that I would finish reading the extra chapter by the way, but after opening it, a CP sister who only watched 1V1 quietly broke into pieces. I was really broken that morning. I felt that the nearly a week I watched seemed to have passed with the wind... If the copywriter told me that the slices would not fit together, I would definitely not click on Chapter V. Even if the plot is well written, it will not be because it really jumps in my thunder...
The threesome on the bed between An An and the two movies was too much for me. It looked like a pseudo-NP under the guise of being alone. Or maybe I was too conservative in my previous views, so the slice attack will become a whole in the end. Since this book, I have developed a shadow on slices. [Those who don't care about this can rate me as four or five stars.] The main reason is that I cannot accept this personally.
Pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger and slapping Su Shuangtian in the face, you can stream endlessly without any brains, and the difficulty of copy design is comparable to primary school arithmetic.
I read it three times. In fact, the copy is very average and the emotional line is just like that. I don't know what attracted me to it, but I liked it very much. I am such a tasteless person.