Watch It Fully Booked (Pure Love)

1 与 Parallel to You Guihong LuoxueDanmei (BL)558k WordsCompleted 46.6kFavorites33.5kClicks/ch167kNutrition

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"Good, very enjoyable reading" . Narcissus wonderful wonderful The writing is still as online as ever. The emotions and plot are still as compelling as ever (but the "easy" mark of this book will work harder) [dog head] The psychology of the characters is well shaped, very real and exciting (the writing is very impressive and delicate in this aspect, and the sense of immersion is so strong that it makes me die). The writing style makes me feel like I am watching a movie. The perspective changes, the combination of movement and stillness... It is very picturesque [hugging my thighs] . Guihong Luoxue shaped the god of Narcissus I am not gay, I fall in love with someone, and he happens to be another "me" . I really like the copywriter's sentence [He is doing well, and you are not that bad] . It's the first time I've been following it from the beginning all the way to the end. It's a great time to guess the plot and be a clown (bushi) with my friends in the comment area. Stable updates are guaranteed. I'll follow the next one [continued] . The following are the recorded comments about Orz (may contain spoilers) ·The development is wonderful, but some things feel a little different from the copywriting (?) (To give a vaccination to friends who can't accept it, it's not the traditional "well-behaved and old-fashioned") ·Maybe it's because I'm following up on updates, and when I watch it, I might get a less comprehensive impression than when I watch it all at once (?), So sometimes it feels weird, but I don't know what's weird and I can't put it into words. Maybe it's the overall rhythm? [It just doesn't have that hearty feeling] (In fact, I have a similar feeling to Kanxue's other completed works before. If I catch up with the update, this feeling will be more obvious (especially in the middle and late stages, which is a bit high and low)) () (When I have time, I will re-paint the overall quality) (Purely personal opinion, flaws cannot be concealed) In my personal opinion, this book has five stars in the early stage and 4 stars in the later stage (orz). I feel a bit regretful? ·(I feel that ending the plot by chatting and confessing suddenly lowers the quality! ... Of course, emotionally I am very happy that 2010 finally opened up my heart [poor] (about Chapter 100)) ·(The last few chapters feel a bit like they were written just for the sake of completion? Do they feel a bit rushed? It's not just to catch up with New Year's Eve, right (?) Looking at the three words [End of text], I always feel that there are a lot of things that have not been written, but when I think about it carefully, it seems that everything that needs to be explained has been explained (?)... (I feel that it is because there is a bit of a gap in the early stage of foreshadowing, but the recovery efforts in the later period have not kept up. Some foreshadowing settings feel like they have been written in one stroke? A bit like thunder and rain, but little?) (Regret)) . All in all, it was like watching a gorgeous fireworks display. The prelude aroused expectations, and the middle section was stunning and explosive. But when it ended, there was only a wisp of smoke left. It came in a lively manner and dispersed in a hurry... [Hug] finally Wish you 201099~ I look forward to Gui Hongluoxue's next book being better~

3 花 Flowers Bloom with Lingering Sound Lin YushanDanmei (BL)139k WordsCompleted 36.2kFavorites35.1kClicks/ch24.3kNutrition

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Simple words, gentle story [Three Flower Cat Head] The anxious social animals were quite emotional after seeing this and could calm down slowly. The early period was in Yunnan and the later period was in Beijing. Fall in love at first sight, redeem each other I feel that the author should be a very delicate person, with a very delicate writing style. He may have collected stories in Yunnan. The description of travel in Yunnan is very detailed, and the protagonists are also very careful. They are two mature men with long mouths. Soul mate soul mate ah ah ah Like Yunnan In the Beijing article, I like the part where they took "wedding photos" at home The pure love god of war fell to the ground . A long-lasting life, staying together because I love her, not for kissing me and me. Intimacy is just a subsidiary node of the relationship... This is reflected in this article. Nowadays, many articles about love feel like they are superficial and follow the process... . (What I don't like very much is: For example, some women who behave like traditional marriages (male chauvinism) are subject to the stereotype... The Beijing article describes how to cook and laugh when you want to buy a bed, and when you buy a bed and listen to the shopping guide's explanation while Lu is waiting on the sofa, the sense of sight is the strongest. (But they have a "focus on the inside and the outside", so this is considered a routine operation? This article was written a few years ago) It is purely personal perception, and may also be affected by the writing style. She is soft, and because she is sick, she is also a gentle character, so she has a strong sense of sight) (In addition, there are uncomfortable words of objectification [picking my brain] [minus one] in their conversation when they decided to do before the operation, such as "touch me" and "get you") (The avatar and text can feel that the author may be from an era when there is a generation gap with contemporary young people (?), So the emotional details in the article have a sense of "age") Personal rating B+

4 对 To A Guihong LuoxueDanmei (BL)240k WordsCompleted 32.9kFavorites58.2kClicks/ch14.3kNutrition

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In the midst of a book shortage, check out the column of Gui Hongluoxue and read [A Dog's Head Holds a Rose] Old articles in 2019 1 The setting is interesting. In just 247,000 words, there are several ways to play AA, AO, OA and OO. The plot unfolds slowly... It's a sweet story... It's towards the end that the writing focuses on the plot. (Some logical foreshadowing has been omitted, and it is not suitable for serious people to read) (Extra story about technology giving birth to children) ao changes, in some plots it can be seen that Gui Hongluoxue was also very happy at that time [glasses], the changing contrast is very funny 2 This is an earlier book, and it is obvious that the writing style is relatively white and has a very green feel (I personally felt a little awkward in the first few chapters, but I continued reading because I was curious about how it will develop. After reading it, the writing became smoother [like]) There are some plots that have an ancient feel to them, and they made me laugh (nostalgic) 3 Now I roughly know why I sometimes feel that the rhythm is awkward when reading Gui Hongluoxue's writings. In this early writing, I have a more obvious feeling: I made a meal of dumplings stumblingly for a dish of vinegar. The copywriting is the dish of vinegar, the writing style is the twists and turns of the dumpling skin, and the content is the stuffing inside. The ingredients in the stuffing are not lumped together piece by piece, and the rhythm is piece by piece ()/ (From the earlier fragments of Gui Hong Luoxue, we can feel that writing general short stories is very good, but when expanded into a book, it is easy to stumble and not smooth, haha) But this is already great as an early novel. Should this be Gui Hongluoxue's first novel? Looking at the earlier columns, there are only those short stories () Gui Hong Luoxue has been making progress, and now Gui Hong Luoxue is a master of making dumplings smoothly! I am often shocked by Gui Hongluoxue's writing style~

5 恰 Just in Time Guihong LuoxueDanmei (BL)369k WordsCompleted 116.1kFavorites138.2kClicks/ch61.3kNutrition

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Narcissus A sweet story about mutual redemption, with a good setting [Three Flower Cat Head] "Love Yourself" I read "Parallel With You" first, and I can see that the writing style of parallel writing is more mature. Some flaws in this early article are more obvious () (Xue [Three Flower Cat Head], which is always improving). It is also a modern novel in the Wucheng series. In my personal opinion, the first few chapters of this book obviously contain a lot of boring vernacular, but as I read on, the writing becomes better and better. Nice . (It's still a matter of rhythm (?). The strange feeling in this book is more obvious when I read the middle part of the article...) (But the short stories in the extra chapters are very smooth, maybe because the short stories are more general, and writing a book requires more expansion...?)) (Don't read the review, there are a lot of spoilers...)

6 过 Yunnan Bridge Noodles Kung Fu Steamed BunsDanmei (BL)472k WordsCompleted 11.3kFavorites14.8kClicks/ch920Nutrition

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Ancient police and gangster stories, mutual attacks (not Shuangjie), anti-narcotics police × gangster informant It's a serious drama, the writing is online, and the flaws are not hidden. The narrative style has the feeling of watching a movie and telling a story. It's my first time watching a criminal investigation type work, and I personally feel that it is very good () The author has not finished it here (he has finished it elsewhere, and there is also a physical book), and the emotional drama and R are extremely stretched [Rainbow Fart]

9 在 I Saw the Online Article I Wrote on My Boss's Computer. Hair Ball ODanmei (BL)197k WordsCompleted 35.8kFavorites31.6kClicks/ch58.4kNutrition

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"Only personal reflections, no criticism" [Good Luck Lotus] [Good Luck Lotus] It's a short, mindless short story. It looks funny at the beginning and feels a bit dry in writing (later I saw that the author said it was a new style of writing practice. It must be that everything is difficult at the beginning, haha?), But the setting is so advanced that it makes people want to continue reading. The writing in the middle is not yet Wrong, the plot is funny and poignant at the same time. Maybe because it is a writing practice (understand), some parts in the back are awkward and sweet, hahahaha, and the writing style is a little bit fragmented in some fragments (the next few chapters are very different from the first half of the text, and even the intervals between paragraphs are very different) Wow) (I browsed another article of the author and found that the intervals in the second half are what I am used to?, And the intervals in the front should be a new attempt. In this way, I vote that the reading experience of the intervals in the front is better, and it is not tiring to read [spray]) (No, I browsed another one and found that it is different (only the first chapter), so is this the only one that is a combination of the two intervals) (Huh? Is there a QY beside the author who is poking fun [question mark]) Generally speaking, I personally think that the middle part of the article is the most beautiful [spreading flowers] (four stars), and the second half feels a bit watery (three stars) [helpless] (See how time flies when you fish at work (suppressing laughter challenge))

11 圣 After the Death of the Holy King Ma HuzijunDanmei (BL)392k WordsCompleted 119.5kFavorites129kClicks/ch49.1kNutrition

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It's an okay little sweet article. The quality of Mahuzi-kun's work is high. Maybe it's because I read several of Mahuzi-kun's books at that time. The same author's jokes are more or less the same, and the style of this article feels very free. Plus, the jokes written earlier don't feel natural? I'm a little tired of aesthetics, but it's still delicious to read back after a while. It's easy to crush on each other, and the plot is quite satisfactory. It took too long to hold on to the vest, and it took until the second half of the tug to completely fall off the horse. Although the process of pulling the horse off to the extreme is interesting, it is a bit tiring to watch it for too long [Good Luck Lotus] In the early stage, Gong's character was a cold-blooded guy who was ruthless and not very talkative. However, after knowing Shou's feelings, Gong's behavior became a little bit OOC, and he was closer to Shou's sand sculpture character. It is understandable that he behaves differently in front of his lover and in the eyes of outsiders, but the plot description did not differentiate between the two situations. Most of the offensive scenes were played by Shou in front of him, which was a bit different from the previous stage, so it felt OOC. The author said that the dramatic development of this book is indeed quite dramatic, but I personally think that drama cannot destroy the character (everyone has different feelings, here are my personal reflections), but this book is just a comedy, so it is reasonable? I saw an interesting and relevant chapter review in the middle and I want to share it: "... The opening chapter is extremely funny, and the ending is extremely offensive. It echoes the previous and later, and has a complete structure. It contains a selection of excellent compositions by primary school students." Hahahaha

12 绝 Remember to Be My Boyfriend After We Break up with Each Other DioscoreaDanmei (BL)177k WordsCompleted 71.8kFavorites71.3kClicks/ch33.3kNutrition

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It's a sweet, no-brainer piece of writing that focuses on daily life with a pure emotional line. The big words are really hilarious and the jokes are natural and funny. It's very well written to push the limits of feelings. It's about secret love and being in love without knowing it. The restraint between the two before they confirm their feelings for each other is well created. It's really sour. (I think it's a small climax at this point, and then there will be more.) After a long period of struggling with various self-strategy processes, I think this section is a bit too long, and it is a bit long-winded, which makes the excitement in the front a little bit awkward) (But it is still very sweet, the pure love god of war fell to the ground in response) (The description of the intimate affairs of gay men in the second half is a bit more realistic. I will die for gay men in the first and second dimensions, and I will thank you for being a gay man in the third dimension)

13 这 He Committed the Following Offense on This A DioscoreaDanmei (BL)237k WordsCompleted 17.3kFavorites31.3kClicks/ch3.7kNutrition

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I really dislike the setting of the protagonist, who is cold, strong and smiling, but can overcome the superior (ahhhh). It's a pity that it's a short story, and many parts of the plot are handled a bit hastily. It's really a pity. Then look at the comment section, the author is still the best in this article (so the writing feels not smooth?), The quality is okay, the writing is easy, and it is a great book for those who are interested in copywriting. I'm also very disappointed with the cp, it's a double A, but the author didn't give any ink in the main text, and only made a meal in the final words [poor]

17 装 After Pretending to Be A, He Was Marked by the Shadow Guard. Chi LingDanmei (BL)99k WordsCompleted 75.6kFavorites172.2kClicks/ch41.3kNutrition

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Highlight: giving birth to a child Cool point: bottom overcomes top (looks good in the early stage) The writing is okay (a bit novice?), The plot has no major flaws and is quite smooth. It is a short story based on the supporting characters of another book by the author. Halfway through, I realized that I might have read this book and the Tyrant book a few years ago. I was obsessed with this setting for a while, hahaha. But now four or five years have passed, and my mentality has changed. The plot that does not involve pregnancy in the early stage is not bad, but some descriptions of plots that involve pregnancy in the later period will feel very awkward. (But this is not a strong character design, so it is understandable. This kind of similar article can easily describe the recipient as more traditional and feminine). The setting of male-boy pregnancy is acceptable, but I think the description should not be too soft. After all, the gender is still male (I don't know how to describe it) [Spread hands]

27 江 The World Is so Big Smile FadedDanmei (BL)324k WordsCompleted 251.1kFavorites367.9kClicks/ch211.2kNutrition

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It's an okay little sweet article. In my impression, it's just mediocre and has no major highlights. The quality is acceptable and there's a lot to read.

30 给 Grave Your Archenemy but Make Him Angry DioscoreaDanmei (BL)143k WordsCompleted 148.1kFavorites163.8kClicks/ch65.4kNutrition

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Funny little sweet article, hahahaha, warm and daily oriented, the interaction is very interesting, the pure love God of War fell to the ground in response Duplicity and tsundere attack (innocent 250) vs holding a straight ball in hand and being cold and accepting "Zhu Xiao, you stingy guy" "Forget it, I wish Xiao a long life." ——The meme in the comment section of "There is a Good King of Hell Underground" hahahahahaha Although it is a funny little sweet article, because of (Going to the Grave), it is still a little bit sad while being funny. . (The attack shape is a bit too slow) (If you have extreme mental mysophobia, watch the extra chapter carefully. In the extra chapter, the souls of the attackers who were ten years ago are exchanged, and there will be a corresponding and reasonable intimate contact plot with the victims ten years ago) [minus one]

31 天 Tianyuan Book ShanglingDanmei (BL)310k WordsCompleted 77kFavorites56.2kClicks/ch61.6kNutrition

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The plot of old enemies turning into lovers, surviving on a deserted island in the early stage, and landing on the beach in the later stage is not as exciting as the previous ones, but it is okay. It is a good no-brainer sweet story, the emotional line is very natural, and the plot mainly revolves around the relationship. When I first read the title and introduction, and then read the first few pages, I thought it was a kind of brain-burning to develop a career in the world.

32 今 I Also Want to Practice Spiritual Practice with Master Today Chi LingDanmei (BL)88k WordsCompleted 71.5kFavorites123.1kClicks/ch37.5kNutrition

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The setting of the copywriting, the writing style is still online, the short sweet article is very cute, the overall content is okay, but the detailed logic can be better, it is a short story, this setting would be perfect if it was expanded, but it is a pity. Then I felt that the description of the misunderstanding that the master was a furnace was a bit embarrassing [minus one], and the conflict setting added one star [poor], which is very restrained and a gentleman has a crush on attack [poor]