The subject matter is quite interesting and the collection is quite high, so I went to try it. Emmm, if you are a newbie, I won't say anything, but after reading a few chapters, I went to look at the homepage. Teacher, you have written so many books and still haven't made any progress? All the villains who have appeared so far are very flat. They appear just to be slapped in the face by the protagonist. If you are beaten, you will be beaten. The ending is already known as soon as they appear. In addition, I personally like the setting of live barrage, but the proportion of live barrage is too large, and the speeches are very brainless. It is also designed to be slapped in the face. Finally, there is the issue of the names of gods. Some teachers said that this part is slightly problematic, but I don't know much about it, so I just mentioned it.
Finally, the free chapters in the early stages of a novel are difficult to attract people to continue reading. It is really hard to believe that the subsequent development will be good.
It seems that the review is quite high, but because the article was written too early, there will be bugs in the timeline. It seems a bit weird and I can't read it. I am worried that I will forget the reason why I abandoned the article, so I put it in to make a note.
I have read Chapter 57 so far.
Overall, it's okay, but it just doesn't hit my mark. I thought it was a comedy, with a scene where everyone was in disbelief after the horse fell off, but I didn't expect that the horse would not fall off from the beginning to the end. It was a bit embarrassing to the point where I dug out a castle with my toes orz
At the moment, I can't stand it anymore, and I don't like this kind of setting. Also there are a lot of typos.
I haven't read much of this book, but as soon as I see the name of the power (sends an invisible slash forward), I want to laugh. It's so casual and too dramatic [covering my face, laughing and crying], I just can't stand it anymore when I think of this name. However, judging from the ratings, it seems that it started high but went low. I can only say that I was lucky that I didn't finish watching it at that time. I still followed the series. Speaking of which, God's book actually feels like it's going high and low, but I can bear to watch it, and I didn't expect that this one would be more serious.
I have seen the fourth copy so far. The first copy is the best, the second copy is slightly worse, and needless to say the third and fourth copies. I personally feel that the more I write, the worse it gets. It makes people no longer want to spend money to read it.
First of all, the male protagonist in the second dungeon suddenly began to worship the heroine, and later on he also blindly believed in the heroine. If it was because the heroine killed the boss instantly and felt that the heroine was powerful, a description of this part should be added, instead of suddenly turning from a stranger to a bitch like now.
Secondly, in the fourth dungeon, the personality of the Water God appeared without any foreshadowing, and it was so powerful that it could almost be said to kill the Dragon in a matter of seconds. There was no description of what preparations the heroine had made to acquire this personality. Even though these were originally part of the heroine, it was really surprising that there was no direct description in the early stages.
In addition, there are many live broadcast elements, which account for a very large proportion compared with ordinary ones. But this is a matter of opinion. Sometimes I still like to watch a little bit of mindless barrage, but if it accounts for too much, I think it will be watery.
The perspectives are confusing, and although the main character is Albin, there are many other perspectives. And the protagonist is really a bit too helpful, self-devoting, and daring to sacrifice, and is simply referred to as the Holy Father. At present, I have read more than seventy chapters, which is more than half of the content. I personally feel that the advancement of the main plot is minimal, and even the time in the article has only passed less than three months. Maybe the content in the future will be better and more exciting, but the current content doesn't attract me to continue reading.
Although I like to watch the plots of cubs whitewashing their relatives and friends and slapping villains in various live variety shows, this variety show is really hard to accept. Throw a group of people into the rainforest and let them survive and go through the rainforest to win the final prize. This type of thing has only been seen in survival novels or infinite streams. I didn't expect to see it in group pet cubs one day. Although the main character is very strong, she is only a three-and-a-half-year-old cub. To allow a child to participate in a rainforest survival variety show is simply insane. People throughout the book, from family members to the organizers to netizens, are all mentally ill, just for the sake of fun. As of Chapter 35, I have encountered bees, venomous snakes, poisonous spiders and even bears and other poisonous insects and beasts, as well as heavy rain, high tide and other bad weather. It is completely illogical and irrational. As a normal parent and relative, my brother and sister will not encounter these things again and continue to survive in the rainforest with their cubs. It should be said that I will not bring a three-and-a-half-year-old child on this show in the first place. I cannot understand and accept it, so I abandoned the article.