These were frustrating to read. The protagonists keep getting hurt and berated. I'm keeping track of how I felt and helping friends with similar tastes steer clear.
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My mother-in-law did not suffer, she was a literary superstar who was very deliberate. From the first chapter, her house was ransacked, she was arrested, she was taken away, she was threatened, she was pointed at the neck, she was tortured to extract a confession, she was kicked in the face, she was told by neighbors to get out of the house, she was forced to break into the house privately by reporters, she was yelled at by the press conference in front of her house, and she was insulted and beaten after the service. He was pressured by the kid who was following him to the point of vomiting blood. The way he chose to avoid the life-and-death crisis was to end up in jail... To say the least, the protagonist needs to be strong. He doesn't respect himself and always chooses solutions that are not very beneficial to him. Although there is mental illness in the text, this is just an excuse for the author to deliberately create suffering for himself.
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What's the ending? I keep typing wrong names and similar names in the article. What's the point? The plot develops as it comes out. Two points are for the characters, not the author.
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To borrow the words of the sisters' comments in Chapter 15: Just say, if it doesn't work out, let the protagonist burp... I tried very hard to treat him as a normal fellow earthling, but maybe he would be less likely to collapse as a delicate burp.
If you don't like this hack, it's none of my business if you like it. Don't jump on me. If you can't understand human speech, I will delete the comment.
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I was tricked into writing about the author's father-in-law and his mother-in-law's left and right brain exchanges. I was originally looking forward to seeing the protagonist's father-in-law's perspective as the fourth natural disaster, which is very confusing from other people's perspectives. However, in fact, I feel that the protagonist is a scheming mother-in-law. Can you please stop giving others extra expectations and give money to buy shit?
Personally, I don't think it's very relaxing to read the label. I think it's not worthy of deducting the label.
Although you are a player of the Fourth Natural Disaster, but you have skipped all the plots and it is clear that you are a purely game-intensive combat player, your combat is not very flexible, right? To be honest, the writing about Lars is quite charming, but is it a little too much to describe him being repeatedly scorned by the assassins of the League of Assassins and compared to rice himself? You have to take a step back and say that the player is really not listening, but the other party has repeatedly spoken and provoked you in the face. From the perspective of you as a player, can't you be a cunning person and kill this NPC? If you are worried that the force value is not enough, then there will be a scene later in the article where Lars orders the protagonist to knock a large number of Assassin Alliance soldiers to the ground. Are they really convinced? Has your reputation really increased? Has the protagonist really established his authority in this camp?
By Chapter 22, most of the content has been deflated. From being slashed with a knife, to being punched by the Winter Soldier, to being shot in the chest by Crossbones, being prevented from taking revenge by Batman, being repeatedly nauseated by Dr. Zola, including but not limited to drawing blood that exceeded the normal blood volume of the experimental subject and almost dying of too much blood, or the diluted version of the Lazarus Spring Water of the researcher to survive (even this researcher had a depressing plot of drawing too much blood), He was thrown into a space full of monsters for a trapped beast fight. When teaming up with the Winter Soldier, he was read a brainwashing word by the opponent. Then the Winter Soldier was brain-controlled and betrayed on the spot without knowing to cover his mouth or stop Dr. Zola's reading message. Then he was severely injured by a punch from his buddy and was left with only one breath (big brother knows how to interrupt the monster's reading message when playing games, don't let him read the big message The range attack skill, are you really a combat player? There is even a Winter Soldier here who clearly knows that he is being brainwashed, but the player just stares blankly at his expression and action description. This is not a short time, right? Does it have to be written in such a depressing way?) And he hasn't really paid attention to it after what happened. , Get rid of this NPC that hinders you everywhere (with all due respect, when normal players are fighting monsters, they will generally clear out all the mobs that have been harassing them, and then concentrate on fighting the more difficult monsters, right? Author, do you think what you wrote is correct?) Also, the left and right brains of the father-in-law are fighting each other. I personally think that you are a scheming grandmother.
Before v, you kill monsters when you see them, kill people when you see them, and turn things over when you see them. Players act like locusts. But how come you start to crazily deflate after entering V? Is this right?
After reading Chapter V, I felt that in so many chapters, apart from feeling better in front of Lars, things didn't seem to go smoothly. I could really accomplish whatever the protagonist wanted to do.
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The first half was okay, but the end was unfinished. It was finished just for the sake of completion. There were a lot of typos, and the article was sloppy. After one chapter, the plot didn't feel like it was advancing at all and the logic was stiff. The cool points in the copy were not well written, so I faked my death for no apparent reason, I came back for no apparent reason, I was moved for no apparent reason. For example: The author of the original novel in the original text said earlier that the protagonist was out of control and wanted to kill him. Because the sequel was so bad, I vaguely remember that the author knew that the character was alive, so he insisted on writing the protagonist to death even though he knew this. Then the protagonist's revenge was just to go over and beat him up, and then let him go lightly.
I'm really speechless. I won't go into details, but in short, he is bad. If you are interested in seeing how bad he is, you can read the longer comment in the final score. The criticism is very pertinent. The evaluation is: Full order, 70 yuan. The author should pay me some money. You should pay me the compensation for seeing this.
The three points of the rating are for the characters in the original text.
The final score says a lot
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I feel aggrieved. Why should you, a Chinese, be manipulated by others in a foreign country, constantly making promises and being forced to sign inexplicable contracts? I still remember a plot in which the protagonist was forced to sign an unequal treaty on his head due to the inexplicable damage caused by the battle in a neighborhood. Do you think you are very tolerant? ? No, this is very strange, boss.
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As of chapter 61, the protagonist is crazily eaten up, choked by the evil sect master, injured and blocked by a nouveau riche, and his spiritual power is blocked as a slave. He is choked and controlled by the enemy's bodyguard while exploring the secret realm. After becoming a disciple again, he is looked down upon by NPCs. No, don't you think this is very sad, inspiring and strong? Boss, this makes the protagonist feel humiliated and aggrieved all the time. Then let us look back at the tags of this article: cool article, relaxed (.) Haha. Thank you for tricking me into coming in.
I'm still looking forward to the second episode of the Leisure Meeting
Editor 2: Haha. When I went back and read the second half of the chapter, I was shocked: he was caught by the enemy and then the enemy asked another man controlled by him to take away the protagonist's innocence. No, why does the author like others to bully the protagonist so much? Then he likes the protagonist just because he looks good and says a few words, gives him gifts, helps him, and accepts him as his disciple. Is it a routine that has no changes at all? (I think this is quite cute in the eyes of the protagonist, the male swordsman), but he is a child who doesn't know much about swordsmanship. He loses his sincerity easily, so his eyes shine brightly without knowing it. A puppy close to you is cute, but if everyone else follows this routine, I feel a little bad. ) [Covering face, laughing and crying]
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