Chapter 35: Abandonment, the clay sculpture is very beautiful and cute. There are so many beautiful pictures, how can I choose this as the cover.
Reason for abandoning the article: The writing was too flat, and it was a pity to abandon it because it was tasteless. I felt that all the foreshadowing before was written in chapter 35. I don't know how I could finish it in chapter 80. The copywriting is so right to the stomach, and it nourishes the stomach as soon as I read the main text. It is also quite powerful that the pseudo-compulsion in the early stage can be written so plainly. The character of the attack is a bit of a fight between the left and right brains.
Chapter 165: Abandonment, a strong Niangege flavor, a charming little fox, and the story of Twelve Seats made me burst into tears. The reason for abandoning the article is that I feel that there are too few descriptions of Shou's growth and career lines, and they are all described very strangely. The description of the game, which can highlight Shou's force and strategy, is too conservative. I think the barrage in some live broadcasts is also more interesting, but the author either omits it or doesn't write it at all. The movement and psychology of Shou in the last paragraph before his death escape are not enough and the emotions are not highlighted to the maximum. I feel that Shou's death is light and airy, and I feel a breath of anger in my heart. The author said that Shou is very strong, but I don't know where the strength lies. Also, the emotional line is too blunt and I can't tell why Shou likes to attack.
Chapter 83 Abandoned, I licked the pink-haired princess cat and entered it, the barrage forum was very delicious, with a relatively low concentration of the underworld flavor. The reason for abandoning the article is that the game is like the diamond game I played. People watching it feel numb and embarrassed. I am too old and the attack is so greasy. Every time I see it, I jump. ??????
Chapter 183: Abandoned, Shou'er is a peerless cat fighting scene that is perfect for cleaning clay sculptures. The writing is very touching and ranks among the top 3 fighting scenes in my heart. The reason for abandoning the article is that the response arrow is too fast and too thick, the character design seems to have collapsed when we fall in love, and the relationship line between attack and response is too confusing and the writing is awkward and greasy.
Abandoned in Chapter 99, given 4 stars to Shou, Mengmeng is a heart-throb, handsome and super charming brother master. Reasons for abandoning the article 1. I am already in the shape of Mengmeng Duwei. 2. Attack is so annoying that I want to puke when I see him. He is too confident and can't stand it at all and cares too much. This Mengmeng is too nice to this dog and it makes me very annoyed.
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