A very literary Western fantasy novel by a very talented author.
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Not bad, Gong is very charming, but Shou is not enough for me. () The author also has a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot. He always writes something I like to read when I am almost out of patience (
The only shortcoming is that from a personal taste point of view, it is not enough to hate Hai Qingtian, the sourness is not enough, and it is too easy for Gong to forgive Shou () However, it is true that Shou is aware of his mistakes, and it also makes Gong realize Shou's feelings for him, but it seems that the system and the original plot are a bit over-emphasized, and the system plays the role of an assist.
Hey, I really want to see the daily interactions of a family of four, and I really want to see the story of two insect cubs growing up!
Come on, it's been a long time since I saw an article with good writing style on the new book list. The writing style of this article is really something, it feels natural and eloquent, and the interweaving of some jokes is also very suitable without being awkward and blunt. I have seen too many articles that deliberately create a "squidward formal" style of writing, and my eyes lit up when I read this one.
The character creation is also very sophisticated. I have always felt that the character creation should not be too full and needs a little space for the readers' imagination. The characters in this article, especially the characters, are very well described, as if a person with such a character would act and speak out in a certain situation, rather than labeling the characters and sticking them to the characters. They have quite charismatic personalities, but neither of them is perfect, and even have very flawed personalities. I really think they should both see a psychiatrist.
He probably wants to follow the "hate the sea and love the sky" style, but since there is no detailed description of the past between the two of Gong and Shou, as well as Gong's character of being hot on the outside and cold on the inside, despairing of all desires, and Shou's paranoid nature, super invincible gravity system, it seems that the only thing he can do at the moment is hate the sea and hate the sky, so I can only say that I look forward to the follow-up development!
Not bad! A very pure and delicious Western fantasy piece. West Fantasy West Fantasy we like you! The grand leader is the kind of person who, from a distance, feels so kind and gentle, as if he is radiating light. But if you get up close, what the hell, this person is setting himself on fire? ! If you like this kind of character design, go watch it! Innocent
Beautiful! Dark-bellied, gentle, young, fishing-type gentleman, Duan Fang, Prince Gong
The author's writing style is very good. There is no deliberate imitation of ancient times. Everything comes out naturally and is very interesting to read.
It is also a group portrait that I like very much. The author's character creation is also outstanding. Everyone has their own complexity and shining points, without any facial makeup. Xiaoyan's character arc is very full. He has been slowly growing up, and finally completed the mission of himself, his ancestors and even his country. In the end, he can also guide others and teach his own students.
Let the emotions and plot be intertwined! The effect of pushing each other forward is delicious.
It's basically sweet. The love between the young lovers has always been sincere, as delicate and gentle as jade, as warm and unquenchable as fire (but I still prefer the occasional sourness as a modifier). The occasional bitterness is also revealed naturally and fits the situation and characters. In short, it is not torture for the sake of torture.
Very nice! Very worthwhile little words and big trees
I was so speechless! I felt very uncomfortable after reading it, and there was a lump in my heart.
I particularly like the early and middle stages! I feel that although it is a classic recipe, the author has created a different flavor. It is delicious. The characters are also very lovable and cute at first glance. The author's writing style is really worth it!
But in the middle and late stages of the performance, I felt that the rhythm and character control of the entire story were not that good. . . I actually scanned many passages.
When it came to the last famous scene, the feeling of being unable to get up or down became even more obvious. Perhaps it can be said that this emotional outlet should only be reserved for the two main characters, or a group portrait, or follow the mainstream of JJ and leave it to Xiao Diao. But the author finally left it to his senior brothers...?
The highlight of Guiqing was attacked earlier, but the senior brother could not come out. The final emotional breaking point was given to the senior brother, and the cute academic qualifications were hidden and did not come out. Why did the senior brother kill the junior brother? Why do you want to induce your junior brother to kill you? The motivations of all the senior brothers feel like they are protecting them. I force you to do things you can't do, I do it for you, and I help you do what you want to do, because I understand you best, because two hundred years of love cannot be handled lightly. What does it mean? Shou said that he wanted to establish his own way, but in the end he still followed Gong to the Gate of Heaven. After reading this, I couldn't summarize the reason like I did to my brothers [angry] and said lightly because he loved him? Without Shou's growth, the character's arc has been cut off until the later stages. Attack is because of his senior brother's achievements and he has completed his own path. Shou has always been invisible. What does this mean?
The group portraits of the supporting characters are not well written, and they are still in a state of neither good nor bad. The author may feel that writing about the main path can only be done by those who are closest to the main path, just like a typical example in an argumentative essay, but instead it is separated from many things, which makes me feel quite suspended and uncomfortable. The villain, attack, support, supporting roles, and group portraits are integrated and diverse, but the distribution of plots, scenes and even writing skills are not even satisfactory.
Everything seems to be changing concepts secretly, which makes me feel extremely uncomfortable...
It is also a very interesting article, mainly focused on the first person. Who can understand it?
The characters of Gong and Shou are very charming, and I really like Gong, a free-spirited and free-spirited fun-loving person (Hey!). The teacher is a bit tsundere (hmm)
fragrant
It's still good-looking, and one thing that's especially good is that Shadrian has not changed from the beginning to the end. The red hair has always been flamboyant and romantic, and he has always been a tyrant. Like his red hair, it burns like a fire, lighting up the dark night before the white snow; as brilliant and brilliant as a rose, he will burn this rose and dedicate it to the snow - before the white snow, everything begins with a rose and ends with a flame.
In contrast, in Ashley's article, I can see the traces of time on him, from the youthfulness of the enrollment period, to the calmness and self-control of the graduate school years, and actually still retaining an innocent heart, to the faint sense of madness after changing identities, the sense of widowhood (er) hesitation (?), And finally the author's finalized sentence of "a once young youth."
I'm going! Doctor, I feel like I'm much worse! ! !
Why! Due to personal reasons, I didn't read this article very carefully, which really feels like a pity. The foreshadowing is always present throughout. At the end, when I suddenly recalled the previous article, I suddenly felt like "wtf", good articles are like this! [Crying]
A very worthwhile book, dedicated to the magnificent rose and king
It's beautiful, I really like Ning Fei's character design. What impressed me deeply was the scene where Ning Fei stabbed out the wire and rolled on the spot. It was very cool and hot!
Beautiful, very beautiful.
The author's writing style is particularly good. All the plots and characters in the book are combined like a strange tale about the medieval ocean. It has a sense of telling a story. It should be a story with ups and downs and even a legend, but in the author's writing, the plot is like a sea in the text, containing all the foreshadowings, so that it reads smoothly without losing the rhythm.
It's a really subtle foreshadowing, the kind that I can vaguely realize it's foreshadowing after reading it in one go, and recall the previous part in the subsequent reading. While reading, I often feel enlightened or in awe. It feels so wonderful!
I also like the character design very much, a brave, calm and sharp control person, a scheming maniac, a dark crawling mermaid Shou. It's a very external feeling, and it's an attack on my xp. Ok ok
The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage. There is always fear in the strange stories and monsters on the sea, but only courage can make seagulls fly, let the ship set sail, break through the fog and sail into the distance of the sunset.
Please believe in fairy tales or blessings
Why! I really like Dafeng's writing style. It is leisurely and elegant, very relaxed and leisurely, but it is not suspended but very down-to-earth, and even has a sense of life.
The writing is very magnificent. When I read it, I was amazed by the author's talent and imagination.
I also really like the character design of Shou, just take a closer look.
One of my favorite articles is still the same sentence: Still water runs deep.
The author is also a very gentle person
Ji Huan is also the type of person I particularly like. He is cold, indifferent, but delicate. It can be said that he is a little cold on the outside and hot on the inside (? He is always strong on the inside, but also has his own softness.
If Ajin's words in the book were used to describe Jihuan, it would really be: quiet, clean, strong, always stubbornly pursed lips
Ajin is really a very complicated person. If I had to sum it up, she would be a very evil person! It's hard to see through and guess. The only one who can understand him and interpret him is Ji Huan... The relationship between the two can only be tasted from the daily words between the lines.
It does not focus on depicting cruelty and truth, but wraps up reality through group portraits and daily bits and pieces, presenting a warm and beautiful but not false sense of reality and life.
Spoiler
When I was reading the article, I felt like I was being instilled with single-body emotions over and over again by Lin. Some of the descriptions were really shocking, very romantic and very divine.
The most memorable times were when Maridis handed over the power of dreams, and when the real Moses turned into a pearl. The mirror connects the soul, and the dream carries the pain. The young god nurtures the pain into a pearl, which is a new life, a dream as clear as the ocean tide and full of hope.
There is also the time when the black sun gave away (what) in vain and weakly said "I am the sun, I am shining." He always longs to shine, because it was once the sun; He always loves the earth and mankind, because he once illuminated the earth with warm and boundless light for billions of years...
There are many more, and every character in the book shines like a gem, with their own shining point in this story. So I always like group portraits, and I like characters that are full of vitality.
A very good article that made my mind spin.
[Demining] 1. Pretend to buy stocks in the early stage, but the attack has always been planned.
2. It is not considered giving birth in the traditional sense.
The author's writing style is very good. The description at the beginning contains the atmosphere of the ancient times of the prehistoric continent in the lines. It is fascinating and the sense of fate between the characters is also very strong. The reason why the score is not very high may be because the pseudo-buying of stocks in the early stage was quite difficult. . . (?
But I really like the author's description of Tongtian. "People are like swords and swords are like lotus" which has a very juvenile feel. .
Although I still don't understand how someone as strong as Donghuang would fall to a childish person like Tongtian, I will always dote on childish and juvenile characters.
It's a great entry into the wilderness! On the basis of the majestic overall structure, there are also delicate expressions of emotions.
Otome novel but the male protagonist is fixed
The setting is very astringent, and the male protagonist is also very astringent, with a husband-like feel (hmm.
In fact, when I watched it, I even felt that he was a little broken and widowed (Hey!
The heroine is very charming, principled, and courageous, leading the bee clan to a new victory.
Some of the views on relationships (including same-sex and opposite-sex) in the article were quite touching to me when I read it. Yes, the heroine's views are breathtaking (praise)
Uh, actually I feel that it would be good to keep the gruesome horror atmosphere in the early part of the whole story, uh, in the middle and later stages. . .
If I had read this article when I was in junior high school, I might have regarded it as a treasure
It's a very interesting article. You can tell from the author's description of the characters and the plot that he is a very gentle person.
Both of the protagonists are my favorite characters. Gong is a cold and delicate leader with an absolute sense of control, while Shou is a rebel who still has an innocent heart and is of course very insecure even though he has been reincarnated a hundred times, been abandoned, stabbed in the back, deceived and struggled with inner demons to the point of collapse.
The plot is very smooth and flowing, but it also lacks ups and downs. It can only be said that the still water runs deep.
Highly recommended!
Nice! All the twists and turns in the early stages are really exciting! Although it is a first-person perspective, I can never predict what the protagonist will do next. It is also the first-person perspective that allows me to appreciate the charm of tyrannical girls. It feels really satisfying to follow the protagonist's thoughts and plot trends!
But in the later stage, I always felt that I couldn't take a breath, and I felt a little tired (personal observation)
The protagonist, Shou, is a very high-spirited swordsman in the world. Actually, I can't figure out where Gong's evil intentions are. Maybe some of Gong's little thoughts were pointed out by Shou on the spot (but the male mother is a real male mother, gentle and really gentle. I hate that there is no hate plot! (I'm sorry!)
Worth a look!
Due to some force majeure factors, I cannot read the full text in detail. The plot is actually a bit unclear to me.
But it doesn't matter, because I really like the character too
It's too difficult to summarize. Does Gong have a bit of a dull dom feel? The feeling of being at the bottom of the year but being at the top of the year. The face is cold and the heart is cold, but the blood and soul are always hot.
Shou is a delicate and shrewd woman, with a bit of a crybaby attribute. In fact, I feel that the whole article is more focused on attack. I know this is the main article, but if more emphasis can be placed on the success of the article, I think it will be better!
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