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It's more about attack and control, and likes to be favored and attacked, especially Yinshi 0 and chase 1. Due to the scoring rules, those with three stars and above are all very fond of it! I just finished reading the ending, and I had a lot of complaints.
I really like to attack this kind of male big man. Ah, just a few words outline a very cute little baby. He is so cute that after looking at it for a while, he puts down his phone and takes a few deep breaths.
The setting is suitable for writing a medium-length novel, but the writing may not be strong enough. The suspense atmosphere in the early stage is very strong, but the revelation of the truth that has been foreshadowed for dozens of chapters is very sloppy and dull.
There is a certain element of being favored, but I really hate that Dihualiu, a genre created for heartthrobs, only has one love line for the protagonist.
The plot is top-heavy and the bond between the protagonists is not deep. The pairing is too natural and the tension is not as strong as the protagonist and the adoptive father. Especially as it goes towards the end, the protagonist becomes more and more abusive. The purpose of the plot is confusing. I don't understand where Shuang Wenshuang is. It ends in an anticlimax. Uh, no wonder the score is so low. I knew I had read the comments first. Isn't this tricking people into killing them?
Alas, as a fan of field control attacks, I didn't like this article very much and didn't read it any further.
In the early stage of the attack, you don't know anything at all and can only follow the rhythm of the attack. It's too passive. This type of acceptance is also true. Logically speaking, it should be nice to have a father who is pampered and study literature, but his lavish support makes people uncomfortable. This father looks like a real father. He has no sense of pampering. He seems to have no ability. He only has the innate advantage of being reborn. He pretends to be inscrutable, like a real father in reality, and has ptsd.
I originally wrote a paragraph before, but it was inexplicably deleted. I hate it! !
Anyway, I vaguely remember that it was a veteran cadre, a young straight man 1, and a stupid second-generation rich man 0 who cheated on him. . . 1 Is very smart. Everyone thinks that 0 is not worthy of 1. In the later period, 1's identity was reversed. This book is a brainless snack suitable for sister gk.
The writing style is very ancient. . It's like going back to the time when I secretly read novels using Notepad on my desktop computer 10 years ago. . It's not suitable for gk to watch. Well, I don't think it's suitable for anyone to watch because it's not good-looking. It feels like hard work without any merit.
I watched it because a straight man attack that lacks common sense is my strike zone. . It's actually completely different from what I imagined
It can be seen that he tried hard to show the humor in his writing, and interspersed many popular Internet memes, which are not funny and embarrassing. I think the creator should try to avoid this when writing, because it will look very corny when you read it a few years later. . Belike blue skinny mushrooms and the like are out of date
The plot is childish, and I decided to write it like this as soon as I slapped my forehead. I feel that the author is not very old.
It's been a long time since I saw my favorite main article. Although the writing style is a bit childish, it's still within the acceptable range.
In the first chapter, I thought it was a Dragon King plot like a down-and-out veteran being slapped in the face, but suddenly the author seemed to have opened up the two channels of Ren and Du and started to charm Jia 1. It was so cool! ! Who is the strongest empire? Who is the star of tomorrow? Who brings victory and hope? I don't care about fame and fortune. Give it all to me.
Especially the occasionally interspersed masculine-flavored forum sex scenes are so funny. It's really fun for me to watch. I really want to call him "brother" too, hehe. It's so charming. .
From the whole story, it looks like an honest straight man was deceived by the cunning sentry into walking and jumping into the warm water.
It feels like the author doesn't know how to describe the emotional development of two people, so it ends inexplicably. Don't worry about it, I forgive my brother for being cute. . .
I skipped reading this. The writing was not very attractive to me. The plot setting is very interesting. I love this character very much. He is so pitiful but so strong. He is so pitiful but so strong. The beautiful, strong and miserable protagonist is the best in the whole series in terms of combat power and IQ. It is so good!
The disadvantage is that she is too pampered, and IMHO, there is nothing attractive about being pampered. It seems that there are two strong men, but it is actually the traditional main and shou story. Although the shou is strong, he is backed by a husband who has a deeper background and is more invincible. It feels like the author is completely immersed in the feeling and can't extricate himself, but this is the main article TT
Even though I have a miserable life experience, I am always ready to solve problems for Shou. In fact, I prefer the protagonist's best friend to Shou. The friendship line arrangement is more reasonable. I believe it will be more delicious if the setting is no cp!
I didn't read it any more. The words and sentences were embarrassing. I really can't stand this kind of crookedness. It's like the cute baby literature written by Bao Ma.
I read an article before, but I can't remember the details. My impression is that this attack has a very male-feeling feel to it, and it's very refreshing! Who knew that the animal shape is a snake? It's so exciting. Hehe, and this man is actually very afraid of snakes. He was scared to death by his own prototype. Oh, how cute. . .
This novel is a bit delicate as it was written in 2007, with a kind of naivety, naivety, simplicity and ignorance that does not suit the age (it is derogatory), but after all, it is a little rabbit. If it is a fluffy little rabbit, then I can tolerate it for a while.
Interspersed with some child-rearing sessions, there must be a child in the love story! Can't we go on without children as a booster? But I endured it again. When I first read the main article, I couldn't bear it.
Well, the advantage is that 1 has no idea that he has entered the world of orcs, which makes 0 so excited that he thinks he is just rescuing a stray bunny. 0 I was thinking that the two of them were in a relationship, but it turned out that was not the case at all. Hehe, I just like to post 0
I couldn't read it anymore. The writing is not good. The most taboo thing about writing this kind of campus-related stuff is that it's too Jacky, as if it's like you've never been to school.
Originally it was a social animal that I really like, and it should be pretty good-looking as a human being! But I didn't read it. . . It's hard to describe this feeling. The whole article is so light that I don't have the desire to read it. The plot flows through my brain like water, just like an apple. Maybe it's delicious. I'll try to come back to eat it when I'm short of fruit.
Because it's free, I kneel down and apologize for everything I say next. I'm sorry, author.
Then let me start haha. This book just tricked the main character into killing me. Who is recommending it? ! I've already read the main story of Interstellar ABO, don't you understand? I want to watch The Invincible Heartthrob A. I want to read All ABOs Love the Protagonist so much that he can't help but write me another perfect A. Chasing after the old man. O Try it.
It was originally my favorite type B-type A who is gentle, courteous and humble, coupled with his calm personality and tolerant way of dealing with others. Hehehe. Anyway, he is a type B with perfect personality. I almost thought I had found someone who could rival Rong Jing, but it turned out not to be the case at all! Attack him! Eye! Blind! Ah!
Forget it if you don't give the double-S protagonist a ss or sss! It's actually an S-class omega several times older than him! Who would dare to believe that Shou's brother's child is in the same year of college as the protagonist? Shou is so old that he can give birth to the protagonist even if he works hard. Haha, the delicate lines at the corners of Shou's eyes have been written over and over again. He still loves his parents very much. I am really desperate for this age-loving world.
The most important thing is the drama of him chasing him and escaping. The protagonist is chasing after him for ten years. I clicked on the main point of view of the article details and watched it for a long time. Haha, it was my sister who paid by mistake. The world view and background in the back should be quite big. The plot may also be very ups and downs, but my sister has no strength to watch anymore... Sisters who have more control than me must not click on it.
Didn't read anymore
The first is the author's portrayal of female characters. The women who appear in the first few chapters are not very good to watch. I personally don't like this kind of plot in BL novels where women are treated as a play part or vicious female supporting characters...
Secondly, the author's punctuation is very strange, with inexplicable parentheses and a large number of commas, including the use of words that are often awkward. There are too many descriptions of Ningshou. After only a few chapters, I was so fascinated that I became dizzy. Who the hell is posting this?
The third point is that after eight years of being heterosexual, Gong was sexually assaulted in a bar and saw Gong acting like a maniac. Under this background, it's a bit unbelievable that he actually committed sexual intercourse! The most delicious straight male attack! This is it! Do you have to keep a clean number for attack? It's so tasteless! !
Overall, I don't recommend watching Attack and Control Sister.
Hey, I personally like this kind of first-person style of writing that is light and sick. . . The beauty 1 of mourning, impotence and mental illness paired with cold humor is particularly good! !
In fact, going around in circles is still a popular figure on campus, a happy family, everyone loves it, 1 redemption, and a dark frame background 0. Although this kind of plot is relatively cliché, but I can't stand it, so I just like this one.
When I was reading the article, I completely escaped from the identity of the protagonist sister. I can no longer comment on their love in sharp words. Anyway, I really like Gong's slightly dead look. It was only later that I realized that this 1 was originally sunny and cheerful. Hehe, I like this sense of fragmentation...
The whole emotional line is like a drop of ink slowly spreading out on the rice paper... The young couple is really speechless. I propose a toast. When I read it, I felt like it was in my heart. You must be happy.
Alas, this is a more traditional Zerg husband-chasing literature. The author's writing is very good. I was fascinated by it after reading the first few chapters. It has a very astringent and tired elitist flavor and occasionally has a little humor in his words. . .
Such a charming and perfect control 1 is simply the master level (the master is still a former straight man, so nice that I like straight men 1). Countless female insects have already prostrated themselves under the master's suit pants.
There is indeed a trace amount of mud 0 elements, but it will not make the attack and control sister uncomfortable. Yes, that's right, my perfect master must be equipped with perfect 0! This 0 is very wet and good at licking! I especially like the plot of the ruthless, powerful, arrogant, powerful and beautiful woman who surrenders for love! Love is perverted and humble. This completely highlights the charm of my master. The little admiral can handle it easily.
However, in the middle period, I started to feel that one of the characters was a little OOC. I couldn't understand the conflict between the two of them, so he started to run away and the other chased. Maybe the real reason for the divorce is not as simple as the copywriting said, but I can't figure it out. . . I've already ordered them all, and I can't let go of them. I'll wait for Wenhuang's ending again.
The writing is a bit chubby, and the writing style is a bit choppy, but the reason for the Zerg's superiority and inferiority is very novel, at least I have never seen it before.
Ben people don't really like the idea of being gentle and treating others after seeing through the Zerg to win the love of the females and seek equal rights. This article does a good job of avoiding this. The biggest advantage is that the protagonist is male-oriented (?) And is surrounded by male bugs with distinctive personalities. The characters of the main supporting characters make people feel that uncomfortable feeling in their hearts again. Jpg
The top-level swordsman's cross-travel attack was not well integrated in the early stage and was a bit weak, but basically swept it from the mid-term, and it was more satisfying to see its invincible combat power. This 1 looks beautiful and distant, but is actually relatively easy to get close to, but everyone still maintains their fanatical respect for the protagonist (including other males), which I feel very relieved! ! You females, don't forget your roots (pointing and pointing)
The relationship line is not very attractive and the progress is very slow. Although I knew it was an official match from the beginning, there was nothing pleasant about it. It contained a trace amount of dampness. There is a favor attack, but it looks very awkward. The 0 arrow is not early enough. The early lick attack is more like a result of Zerg genes. The 1 arrow is later to barely make up for this.
This book is indeed... Somewhat unique! ! It is far different from the Wei Guangzheng that I recommended before. This 1 is super beautiful, talks a lot about cheating, and is very upright. With his face, he deceives people and makes 0 so cute.
There is a slight discrepancy between the plot and the writing. The ending is very rushed and some things are not explained clearly. It feels like it is inexplicably unfinished.
Being favored, he is very fond of a 0, and 1's bad nature is very cute to him. He will sigh that 1 is a little ancestor, and he has fallen deeply in love with 1 even when he really hates him.
In fact, I have read several books focusing on cultivating immortals, and I feel that there is almost no control in this type of writing. They just use the main point of view to write about young lovers making love in the past and present life.
This book is similar. The reason for recommendation is that the mental illness of the cow-cat figure 1 and the development like a runaway wild horse can't help but make people say "Huh?" The slightly dizzy rather than the heart-throb plot is really rare to be placed in the main text. I want you to give it a try.
Sisters who are more aggressive and controlling may not be able to stand it. Let's dote on each other, but I feel that the more aggressive and more favored you are, huh?
This 1 has unrivaled combat power, a field-controlling Su-attack type, and a tyrant in terms of ability. It is very satisfying to face all situations with ease... In the early stage, he was a very controlling executive husband. He covered his waistcoat very tightly and toyed with everyone in applause. It was relatively late to take the initiative to dismount. In fact, he is also Wei Guangzheng's little brother, but he walked alone and hid deeper in the darkness.
My attack and control enlightenment... This 1 is simply perfect, extremely brilliant, and it is still ranked among my best attack rankings. I have searched for meal replacements to no avail! !
In the early stage, Shou's psychological change from being a shady b who doesn't like anyone to being a yandere will make the offensive and controlling sister very happy. Occasionally there will be fanatical suitors of Shou, but there is no need to worry because most of them have fallen in love with 1! (Those who haven't fallen in love will also become the pavement to show this great righteousness) What kind of grumpy dog 0 years old sister 0 is also very good to eat... Although I support np, but this man is so great and righteous, he is destined to be loyal to his partner 1v1, and the heartthrob is the one who fell in love! !
The writing style is a bit frivolous, although people say it's a bit oily, but I quite like it hehe. Long Aotian is mature 0 in the senior year and is manipulated by younger brother 1 in the junior year. Who knows? ! ! I particularly like the 0 to 1 emotional changes and the painstaking seduction. It's all about this temptation... Being chased and pampered, the attacking sister is in a beautiful mood.
From a straight man (who should have a harem) to a crazy and cynical Yinshi, he pesters the "ignorant" one in this way and that every day in the name of friendly communication, but little does he know that this one is deliberately trying to catch you! ! ! This is so cool to control the field! !
Very cute landlord baby! It is a very heart-warming modern article, which makes people feel weak after reading it.... I can't find any meal replacement, I hate it!
This 1 has a huge body, looks like a cold and cool guy, but has a very angelic personality (there are some tragic childhoods, which are interspersed in the article, but the landlord's baby has successfully grown into a kind and cheerful sunshine puppy, it is really a great baby) He also loves cooking and is so cute haha
He is also the type of person who is pursued, attacked, and pampered. Oops, I just love some cunning and scheming people who try their best to attract the attention of the straight man 1... In the later period, the landlady's career also prospered and then he fell off the horse as he wished. I didn't see enough. I still want to watch more daily woo woo woo.
This is a short story that ended a little hastily and abruptly. Can you write more? ! Heartthrob 1. On the surface, he seems to be an innocent little white flower, but others are scumbags for him. In fact, it is all under the control of this man! ! ! The writing style is a bit dank and hits the mark. Every relationship stage is 1v1 and the ex-husbands love each other very much. In the end, it is a OE without cp.
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