If you like fairy tales, you can read this. Generally speaking, the writing is solid but the narrative is too flat. It makes people feel sleepy when looking at it. The characters are not interesting, the background is not interesting, and the plot is not interesting. The "three noes" article
After enduring half of the article, I finally couldn't stand it. It's probably because of the discord between the characters. If this article had been written ten years ago, I would have loved it very much... As for the emotional line, I was a bit rude due to the venomous tongue in the early stage, and I liked it too quickly and greasyly (the bubbly sound of the Phantom Voice Hall). In terms of plot, the writing is okay, but it gave me a very novice's feeling after reading it. It was very superficial and unrealistic, so it's suitable for reading without thinking.
The black-and-white diode-shaped paper figure is quite interesting when it comes to describing Feng Shui, but when it comes to the face-slapping and emotional parts, it's replaced by a primary school student's writing style. The male protagonist has no sense of presence and no charisma. It's outrageous that he can fall in love with the canary that went viral on the Internet without even meeting him. The villain's brain seems to have been clouded by lard, and he is very bad. If you don't use your brain, you should be able to watch it. After watching it, the plot flows out of the stretched cerebral cortex like lubricant and no memory can be retained.
The author's modern thoughts and abo's background belong to the conflict between the left and right brains. Shou unexpectedly differentiated and asked Gong for help. Gong offered to send him to the protection center. Shou refused and forced Gong to fear that his identity would be exposed. In the end, it was Gong's fault. Gong hid his identity and accompanied this group of people around. Not only did he lose his favor after losing his vest, , On the contrary, even the previous favorable impression of the vest has been lost; halfway through the progress bar, Shou said that Gong is not even a friend, but Gong had just saved Shou once before, causing his own skin to be torn apart, but Shou was unscathed; in the middle of the attack, he was like that resentful woman who went crazy for love and changed her personality. She was decisive in killing in the early stage, and was later transformed into a coquettish wood spirit. The whole article is written in plain language and is so unbearable to be attacked, as well as the repeated "This is another story blablabla", which leads to a very poor reading experience. It is extremely controlled, so you can read it [holding your chin]
I don't understand why I bought this book in the first place. How can a sect be the leader of the right path if they are all villains? It was really just written to highlight the male protagonist. The plot description made my scalp numb. The male protagonist is miserable for the sake of being miserable, and the supporting actor is evil for the sake of being evil. The first 70% of the content is about how the male protagonist is humiliated. The look and feel is really bad.
The protagonist has lived for thousands of years and established a sect, and after being reborn, he can still be as awesome as a young boy. By chapter 100, he is still struggling in foundation building and illusions. How about changing the name to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? It's quite common. Rather than saying it is a story about cultivating immortals, it is better to change it to a story about fast travel. Whose good person cultivates immortality and still helps the original owner in the fantasy world to avenge and slap his face? The protagonist CP is like someone who met on a blind date and then compromised his fate to form a life teammate. The deliberate emotional description is like that cfy who is selling sex on the set. Anyway, I don't know whether the audience was attracted to it or not. I only know that I almost vomited after watching it. Go home, kid, go home.
It was painful to read. The writing is there but not much. Xiaobai's plot and Xiaobai's supporting roles feel that Xiaobai's attack is better suited to a certain red ingredient. It's a pity to throw it away because it's tasteless. The speed at which Gong fell in love with Shou seemed to be extremely sudden, and he would always insert some of Gong's mental thoughts and physical reactions, thinking that it was foreshadowing, but in fact he was so embarrassed that his soles of his feet were pressed to the ground. When Shou smiled at him like a genius, his whole body first shook like chaff, then turned red like shrimps, and finally had to say a cruel word, as if the game NPC had triggered some fixed plot. Don't call the golden finger you received gold finger, just call it golden big arm. Once you take the elixir, you will be beautiful as soon as you bow to the master. The villain has no brains. The supporting character should not believe it at first but still try to slap it on the face and lick it up. Next time, I will skip this process and just lick it. I am in a hurry.
The characters are off track as they are written. The holy father in the middle of the mad dog at the beginning does not have the power to care for the whole world. One's own enemies want to kill them all, while other people's enemies become individuals with human rights. He rushes to the next map before finishing talking about one map, as if his butt is on fire and he will die if he stays there for a while. A large map within a small map. I wonder if the author still remembers how many maps there are. It can be said that the essay writing skills are almost non-existent. The whole article is written in plain language. A quarter of the article is still a first-level apprentice, and there are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain.
The narrative is confusing, the golden finger is too big, the writing style is plain and simple, and it is a running account with no characteristics. When writing notes, I am even so dull that I don't know how to complain, because there is no plot that can stay in my not smooth cerebral cortex.
The writing is almost non-existent, the plot description is messy, the characters are erratic, and OOC can be seen everywhere. Talking about Mary Sue is just an insult to Mary Sue, and the preface does not match the followup.
The main heroine is pretentious, and the small world is a psychological description of the heroine herself. I don't know what the use is of writing about this heroine. The male protagonist has no personality charm. If the male protagonist is played by a supporting actor, the female protagonist may not even notice that the male protagonist has been replaced. It is a mess.
The male protagonist can't support the design (elite character design/beating people in public/ooc tone), the old slap-in-the-face style. Except for the pretentious female protagonist, the other characters are all background NPCs, and the quotations of the supporting characters are so stereotyped that it's laughable (all idols in love have become fans)
The writing style is like a Mary Sue novel written by a junior high school student sleepwalking in class. The male protagonist's personality is simply a mess (a male protagonist who is nearly thirty years old. He has never been in a relationship and doesn't know why he is heartbroken. He thinks he is sick). Inexplicable emotional lines, inexplicable slaps in the face, everything seems to be a shit-level masterpiece where AI has opened up its intelligence without emotion and tries to blend into human society.
It's so long-winded. Strong women are stronger than strong men. The master must be a worldly master who is dressed in rags, whose eyes sparkle when he sees a chicken, loves to drink, and looks like a stinky beggar. His greasy character looks uncomfortable.
It is a non-mainstream work of adolescent fantasy. The male and female protagonists cheat on each other at the same time. The male protagonist is ruined but the female protagonist is unscathed. The brother-in-law who has never met him falls in love immediately after saying he loves him, just like that autistic child who lacks love. A classic early-stage stereotyped, slap-in-the-face, scumbag article, written like that of a junior high school student.
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