The writing at the end was very exciting, but the writing at the beginning was just mediocre. I almost gave up, but luckily I couldn't bear to read on. I deducted one star because I feel that many places can be written more excitingly, and the transitions in some places are too abrupt, but overall it is still very good! Gong is really a sick girl.
It's quite good-looking, the writing is beautiful throughout, the interaction between attacker and sufferer is particularly touching, and the scene descriptions are also very good, but there are some plots that left people confused. . . . . . . For example, in the end, Wanwan, the female snake demon who liked Shou, was killed. You said that Wanwan did something wrong, but she didn't. In short, I feel that many passers-by are part of the two male protagonists' play. Such plots make people feel very uncomfortable, but the setting of the world of cultivating immortals is like this, so I can't say that the author made a mistake. I can only say that I personally don't like such plots.
The advantage is that the interaction between the male and female protagonists is well written, and the feeling of the budding relationship from childhood is very warm and beautiful. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, there are logic bugs in many places, and the male character is always willing to flirt with others. . . . . . . . All in all, it's average. If it wasn't good, I wouldn't have finished watching it.
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