The plot was okay, but the later stages were weak, and the emotional drama was so well written that it was completely unsatisfying and I didn't want to watch it anymore.
The writing is pretty good, but the plot is just... I feel like the author likes writing in this book nrt [Tan Shou] I only found out after I bought it, so that's it
It's also a problem that the author's writing skills are not strong enough. I still need to practice more. I can barely read it, but it's only less than half of it. I'm running away first. Please come on.
The writing was pretty good in the early stages, but why does it feel like it's getting more and more confusing in the later stages [laughing and crying] The plot description is a mess.
The plot is unremarkable, the characters are unremarkable, everything is ordinary... Farming, but it's not very farming; adventure, but it's not very adventurous; fairy tale, it doesn't feel like a fairy tale. In short, it is just plain. This novel flew away smoothly in my mind without leaving any deep impression.
The first plot is very good, but it's a bit anticlimactic, and the later ending is a little rushed and looks a bit flat. But overall it's okay. Counting the first half, it's all wonderful [Like]
The second male lead is frivolous and confident, and he has a lot of scenes. It feels like a fly that can't be chased away. It's uncomfortable to watch.
It's okay to look at it, but when you think about it later, you realize that these big things all involve the previous generation. It's not like the family members are gone. One or two have no mouths, and they can't speak or ask. The dealings between the second prince and the protagonists are a bit like fights between primary school students, with a feeling of complaining at home.
The text is quite good, and the setting is quite novel. But I don't know why I can't like the female protagonist. The author doesn't write her as having a very high IQ, and I don't have any feelings for the male protagonist. The whole book just feels bland. She can't fit in with [Eating Melon], but it just doesn't make people immersed in the drama.
The article is very long. Except for the beginning and the end, I don't know what the author is trying to express. Why is it so messy that people can't read it?
Like a running account, the plot is bland, the character description is not rich enough, the author is not strong enough to explain the background clearly, and the logic requires readers to explain it themselves.
It's pretty good-looking, but I don't think I felt anything after watching it. Whether it's the character setting or the plot, it's a bit nondescript. It is a love story written under the guise of a national profession, and it is a very awkward love story, which is a bit insulting to these industries.
The beginning is a bit inexplicable, suddenly he becomes a dragon, and there is a friend (roommate?) Who just found out that he is a dragon. This kind of plot is very strange.
The follow-up talk about the director really made people look bad.
The plot and plot are a bit stiff, and the setting is okay, but the content feels like the author is gradually straying away and not hitting the point again.
It's actually pretty good to watch, but the plot is long and heavy, and I felt a little weak in the middle. I felt like I was indifferent, and I ran to read other articles. I didn't finish this one.
The plot in the early stage is compact, but in the later stage it is dragging and tasteless. It is purely a slap-in-the-face plot set up to slap people in the face.
Just the beginning alone makes people dig their toes in embarrassment. The heroine is super versatile. She can act better than a star. She also knows all kinds of swordsmanship without a teacher. It will make your brains dig out.
Brainless, the plot transition between the two worlds is abrupt and confusing. Even in the VIP part, the development at the beginning is not clearly introduced. It makes people accept it in confusion and continue reading without knowing why. It feels like the author is making things up.
The writing was quite exciting in the early stage, but it was strange to add the heartthrob Shura field for no reason later. The author was incapable of smoothing things over, and added the element of fast travel, which was mindless.