The Emotional Lines Are Delicate and the Writing Is Interesting (Mostly BL)
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A selection of high-scoring works, with subjective reflections (AKA post-reading writing expert), and unpopular works in nook and corner; focusing on emotional lines, it is not surprising to be partial to science.
It's very well written, and I'll briefly explain why it's so good.
Narration, without this writing method, the whole story will become bloody, vulgar and boring. I have seen articles written in a similar way before, but they are far inferior to this author's grasp of details and writing structure.
Turning into a cat meme, this routine is not uncommon. But what is the purpose of the transformation routine? Which part of the novel does it serve? I always think that transformation memes are interesting because they show the different forms of the character. This change of image gives the character more dimensions to explore. Image change itself is not an end. Image change implies some kind of dynamic change inside and outside the character. This is the end. Therefore, form changes should lead to a deeper exploration of the character. Once the in-depth construction of the character is lost, the transformation routine will become completely vulgar. The character must be like a deep pool of water or a stream, so that he can be real and change.
As for scene setting, in fact, there are no more than five main plot scenes in this book, and there are only 1 or 2 really important scenes. Why so few? Is it because the author is unable to show more of the colorful world in the book? Of course not. Because the focus of this article is not the stage itself, the scene serves the people on the stage. A scene and place are just a flat stage at first. In the process of repeated occurrences, the author continues to enrich them and become more real. But the really interesting part is here. What did the author use to describe Fengrong, a village in the city? After reading the full text, we have no idea how big the urban village is, how many people there are, and what its layout is... The author hardly describes the scenery on the stage, instead describing abstract contents such as atmosphere, mood, social relations, etc. The only thing these abstract contents have in common is that they are related to the protagonist.
Exploration is the biggest feature and core of this book. For readers, although the state in which Luo Min first appeared is shocking, the essence of his character is empty. We are tempted by various plot tensions to continuously explore the character "Luo Min", retrieve his memory, pain, and perceptions... And then understand this character. In terms of writing, the information is broken down and scattered throughout the text, allowing readers to directly experience the protagonist's situation and thoughts through abstract descriptions of perception related to the protagonist. Therefore, the pain of the protagonist is not directly described, but the reader can feel it; the likes and dislikes of the protagonist are not written, but the reader can be aware of it... At the end of the full text, the direct expression of "Luo Min" is not only an outlet for the emotional catharsis of the full text (whether it is the character's or the reader's), but also a reward for exploration.
The process of readers' exploration is also the process of the author's construction of prosperity. In the article, its manifestation is the process of "Luo Min" being healed. If the character wants to be fleshed out, he must be intermittently "mute," and his thoughts must be expressed for him by someone outside the book. Once the character is constructed, the disease is cured, you can express yourself, and the article is complete.
A very good main drama, which is rare. Revolution in Another World also handles the emotional line better in the main drama. It can be called a hexagonal warrior, covering all aspects.
Miaolaosi is such a good person... It seems like he is working on a daily basis, but in fact he is a guide on marriage and love, and his ideas are too right. Even the AI looks pretty. When will the real AI develop like this? Tears will fall from the corners of the mouth~
Nowadays, it is rare to find a unique hexagonal God of War novel with balanced nutrition, revolutionary theme and serious drama direction, plot line, emotional line and logical line, and full character creation.
This wife has always been characterized by her imaginative thinking. This is one of her works that has a very good interweaving of emotional lines and imaginative plot. Ye Feng (the author's former pen name) never bothers to describe plots or people that are too flat. She never stops at the point. However, if she deconstructs a certain phenomenon or thing, her ideas will often make me shine. She is particularly good at switching various perspectives to look at the same thing.
What is love? Is it the attraction of the soul? Are similar thoughts mingling? Or is it an impulse to change oneself for this purpose... This question is too abstract. The emotional line of this novel almost shows a state that has elements of realism but is difficult to appear in reality. It seems that reality is beautiful. One cannot help but believe that if there is love in reality, then there must be the kind shown in the novel. But many years after reading this novel, it is no longer easy for me to have such belief. I always agree with my wife's views on relationships in this novel, but it is difficult for me to have certain expectations for reality, so some of the ideas in this novel become even more valuable.
Although Ye Feng is my favorite wife, I have to admit that when I paid attention to Ye Feng, she had begun to become less attached to the emotional line. In my opinion, this novel is a milestone work in Ye Feng's original novels, because after this step, my wife's description of the emotional line is already perfect. In this novel and the novels before this one, it always contains various discussions on emotions, which is very classical and philosophical thinking in the early days of Danmei. However, after that, my wife rarely wrote about these emotional lines. Maybe my wife has found her answer after discussing it in many novels; or maybe he has given up and has given up, and there is no such beauty in the world; more likely, she feels that she has already exported such a concept, and if she writes more, she will not be able to express other opinions, so she simply stops writing.
Ye Feng's books may have this characteristic, allowing me to immerse myself in the world of novels but at the same time have to face the reality that exists all the time.
In any case, many of the ideas in this book, or the description of emotional lines, are still very good. Quite worth a look.
It's rare for an author to write a boring and pure emotional story vividly and lively, but this one does it. The author's use of words in this article can be called cute, probably to the extent that it will make people smile knowingly, and it is not a bad joke. If a sword is used as a metaphor, in this article, the wife is like a swordsman. Her swordsmanship may not be very good, but the swordsman uses the sword as well as his fingers and arms, and there are many unexpected and wonderful strokes.
The logic is strict, the emotional development is very reasonable, and there is a rare emotional line with brains.
This wife seems to have been working in the romance industry for a long time before writing this book. I have not read any of her romance novels, but I think the partnership conveyed in this article is worth thinking about. I think it is partly because of her romance writing.
In terms of content, it is one of the rare genres that can integrate plot decryption, power and stakes, and emotional development without being inconsistent at all. The completion level is very high and the integrity is very strong. In addition, the length of the novel is controlled at around 700,000, which means that the effective information rate in the entire text is very high. In other words, there is very little useless nonsense in the entire article. This wife has great control over writing, and she really has two brushes. If anyone has read this wife romance novel, I hope you can share your thoughts in the comment section.
The writing is pretty good, and it's free. If you want any bicycle, I recommend it.
Ps. Duan Pingqu Ji Dade, a memo that is suspected to be lost by the protagonist, focuses on true fragrance literature.
It's strange that this author's other paid articles tend to be high-end and low-end, but this one is the most complete, as if it was written by a different person.
Talking about the content: The plot is interesting first and foremost. Of course, I think what makes this piece special is that it stabilizes the characterization of the protagonists throughout the whole process. The basic tonality of each character does not collapse during the development of the plot. The most taboo thing about this kind of robbery-style novel is that the protagonist has inconsistent tendencies and changes from day to day. This is one of the reasons why the high-energy setting of this article does not collapse throughout the whole process. The final effect is that the whole process is interesting but not brainless.
Another point is that the concept is relatively normal. Forcible marriage and robbery usually begin to collapse in the later stages of chasing the wife (husband?) And the crematorium. One of the reasons is that the overall concept of love that they want to express has deviated. If the abuse is too much in the early stage, it will never come back. So this tells us that forced marriage and robbery require mastery of the degree of abuse (no), and it tells us that only people with relatively complete minds can love/experience love.
To take a step back, I don't care much about whether the values of the novel are correct or not (the special subject matter is inherently unrealistic), but I care more about whether this value tendency can be implemented in the writing: if it is changed, whether the logical motivation can be improved.
A good relationship must be between two mentally healthy people. This article is a demonstration of the phrase "love is restraint".
Moreover, the character settings are well written. There are no romance-minded teenagers who are nearly 30 years old, and there are no teenagers who are old and mature before they are 20 years old.
There are a lot of jj locks, but fortunately you can find the uncut version on the website.
It's good-looking, not OOC, and it also completes Sasuke's ending in the original work.
The plot development of the overall background is closely integrated with the emotional changes. It is very powerful just by itself. Fan texts with strong logic are rare, and the character of the protagonist is quite accurate. I won't say much about Gojo Satoru. Underneath his seemingly unreliable external character, he actually has a very powerful core. As for Sasuke, I personally feel that it has written the character development that Sasuke should have after the Fourth World War. Of course, there are also people in the comment section who feel that this article is OOC. This can only be said to be a matter of opinion. But compared to the Sasuke presented in Boruto (all kinds of logical errors, character collapse...), This version of Sasuke is not too reasonable, and I agree with him anyway.
It's nice to watch, but I'd be hard-pressed to find a main reason to recommend it. The logic is clear, the structure is complete, and the setting is quite interesting. It is like the Ghost of Tsushima in the novel world. It is above average in all aspects, so overall it is good.
It's good-looking, and it feels like watching Japanese comics. The wife was particularly good at portraying the situation between the two parties during the writing stage of this book. The plot settings of contradictions and conflicts are just right, and the whole show presents a very delicate emotional flow.
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