Collection of Personal Complaints

2 成 After Successfully Blending in and Beating up the Enemy Guest The Coffee Jelly Is AmazingRomance906k WordsCompleted 26kFavorites41.3kClicks/ch30.5kNutrition

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Now, I haven't shown it to readers yet. What kind of character is the protagonist? The story of calling the system dad directly appeared. It really makes one doubt the author's ability to create characters.

3 神 The Son of God Was Reincarnated in Meteor Street Sadness of Life and Joy of DeathRomance509k WordsCompleted 16.4kFavorites33kClicks/ch16.1kNutrition

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Every time I read a novel like this with a relatively weak protagonist, it will definitely fall apart. From what I've seen so far. Let's talk. It's always indifferent, and then suddenly it changes its character.

4 差 I Was Almost Beaten to Death by an Enemy Guest and Starved to Death White LightRomance567k WordsCompleted 11.4kFavorites17kClicks/ch11.7kNutrition

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I really had a headache watching it, it was a bit too tortured. The plot is a bit too unexpected and hellish at times. But I think it's okay for the protagonist to feel the power of growth.

5 [ [Hunter] an Ordinary Office Worker's Travel Notes GoodluckNo CP1.0M WordsCompleted 5.2kFavorites2.2kClicks/ch8.3kNutrition

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I don't remember the plot anymore, but my emotions about this book are not very good, so it should be Isn't the treatment of the protagonist very good? But I enjoyed the relationship between the protagonist and the golden retriever vice president, but other than that, my feelings about this book seemed quite complicated. For me, it's probably not a book that's more interested in me. It's probably a bit ugly to me.

6 揍 Beat the Yangjiao of the Enemy Hakka MeludalNo CP685k WordsCompleted 1.1kFavorites644Clicks/ch321Nutrition

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This is even more torture within torture.

8 佐 Sasuke-Kun Said the System Ruins Life BacteriaDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 22.5kFavorites79.7kClicks/ch111.9kNutrition

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I haven't read Naruto, but the character of Sasuke gave me a weird feeling. In short, when I wrote this book, I felt that the author's power exploded.

10 路 The Growth Record of the Passerby Heroine Lucky Bag PartyRomance973k WordsCompleted 11.1kFavorites11.4kClicks/ch42.2kNutrition

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The heroine spent money to buy services in the early stage when her character was not yet full. But a certain tsundere character was worried that her friend had been deceived, so after learning the news, she was too shocked and did not save the picture. Then she chose to follow the heroine and blocked the service staff downstairs in the small hotel. Finally, after buying clothes from the service staff, she served the heroine. After the heroine finished touching her, she remembered her original target recording. Yes, as expected, the recording was not started. The heroine gives me a strange feeling I thought that Tian at the beginning was a classmate from school, because the wording didn't look like he was a good friend from junior high to high school. And this person is really like the vulgar man in many games and anime, whether he is evaluating boys on campus or buying services in that kind of store. The feeling the heroine gives me is really weird. I feel like this is not one of those conversion stories where the gender is changed and the heroine is written better. It almost killed me, but I'm really convinced

11 [ [Tutor] I Feel Like Tsunako Is so Cute! Mugino RyoRomance799k WordsOngoing 16.6kFavorites46.3kClicks/ch869Nutrition

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This one is really clever, especially the action of knocking off the 80 water bottle is not what 27 would have done. The writing is not like the second issue at all, more like an original heroine, and she is also an original heroine who is not very likable and stiff in writing. The writing is really bad.

12 吸 Vampire Tsunayoshi-Kun GarshgaNo CP1.5M WordsOngoing 11.2kFavorites34.2kClicks/ch13.9kNutrition

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The author often forgets to set the settings, which leads to always saying that it is okay or okay at the beginning, but then suddenly it becomes impossible or impossible later. There is also the common problem of calling someone stupid, regardless of occasion or place, they call you stupid anytime and anywhere. It was also said that Tsuna will be strong and not weak, but in my opinion, he has always been weak. Sometimes he is strong, and sometimes he is weak, but the overall result is that he is always weak. I really can't stand it anymore, I really can't bear to see this kind of frustration.

13 直 Live Streaming! After the Godfather Killed Through the Terror Dungeon Fireflies on the MoonDanmei (BL)508k WordsOngoing 15.4kFavorites16.4kClicks/ch25.7kNutrition

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First of all, I personally think the description of the characters in this article is quite good, but some of the words in it are really lacking in quality. To be honest, the swear words are not abrupt, but they do make people feel uncomfortable. The low score for this book is not because it is not well written, but mainly because some of the words that appear are really annoying to me. After all, this is the first time I have seen the word career line described in a novel. The shaping of male and female supporting characters is also completely different. 210,000 Words currently does not have a single outstanding female supporting role, but there are two male supporting characters. The ratio of men to women in various scenes is also quite large. There are dozens of men appearing. There are not even 4 female originals and original works combined. The descriptions of some characters in this book are pretty good, but the supporting characters, especially the female supporting characters, are completely ignored. It's basically just a formula. I really can't imagine how the only female guardian will be described later. This book is updated irregularly and unstablely. This book doesn't even have 300,000 words. There are not many words, the updates are unstable, and some words should not appear. Although it does not have the flavor of male condensation, some words are really not suitable to appear in this article.

14 [ [Jojo+tutor] Sawada Tsunayoshi Doesn't Want to Be the Boss Aconite Licorice CandyDanmei (BL)211k WordsOngoing 4.1kFavorites11.3kClicks/ch752Nutrition

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4. I don't know if this is the same as the previous one. Overall, it's a bit puzzling. There are also some attitudes towards the Guardians. This is all done with the May Day battle. How could he have that kind of attitude towards 69? Since the battle, his partner has been the same Ring Station who suffered miserably and warned Varian not to go too far, bully the little leader, and let the leader I feel so bad for 69. In the end, this attitude feels even worse than when I just finished the Black Yao battle [laughing and crying]. I haven't watched Jojo, but I feel that the overall attitude of 27 towards the guardians is wrong. It doesn't even talk about love. Your normal feelings of bonding are not reflected at all. The emotional line between this pair of Lalang CPs is also a bit inexplicable.

15 是 It's Science, Not Superpowers! Want to Eat Fried Chicken and Drink CokeNo CP333k WordsCompleted 39.7kFavorites70.1kClicks/ch35.7kNutrition

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I really haven't watched everything whether my birthday was more than a year ago or more than two years ago, but if you want to give it a score, it probably won't exceed 6.4.

16 钻 The Correct Way to Polish a Diamond Ice LingyuDanmei (BL)548k WordsCompleted 19.5kFavorites40.3kClicks/ch19.3kNutrition

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Nothing written by this author is quite right. If you give me a grade, you won't get a passing grade.

19 我 I Can Still Survive [Interstellar] A Little SleepyDanmei (BL)1.7M WordsOngoing 277.8kFavorites443.5kClicks/ch1.3MNutrition

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If 6 points is a passing score, it is impossible for me to give 7 points, which is probably 6.3. This author has written two books, and it feels like he is writing about the same person in different periods. The other book I read by the author just felt very strange. Sometimes the character changes are not very understandable, and I have not experienced those things in this book. I can understand the shadow of love, but the subsequent character development made me feel a little too homogenous. The author is not a newcomer who has only written one or two books. The author has written several books. This is the second book I have read by the author, but it gives me the feeling that there are still some logical illogicalities and problems, and the majesty of the emperor. It's not written out either. The protagonist's adoptive father and his family were demoted, but they developed later. Some scenes and rituals in the family need to be expanded to make people feel more reasonable. However, the author still wrote it in a way that makes people feel that some parts are not very logical. I said before that the biological father is so powerful and the adoptive father is so powerful, but that kind of power Yan Gan has never written about the family environment. He only talks about describing the scene for a while, but in fact it really makes people feel haha, a bit inexplicable. Some places really make no sense. It really doesn't make sense. This problem is really serious, so I repeated it several times.

20 ［ [Tutor] Bystander AlderDanmei (BL)458k WordsCompleted 9kFavorites23.4kClicks/ch249Nutrition

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If the two stars are divided equally, it would be about 3. What is the purpose of a super-sounding insult? It is really a super reading experience. Who likes to use swear words just by looking at it, and the swear words are inappropriate for the scene? What is the purpose of it? How? What exactly is going on? It really feels inappropriate. To be honest, the sudden appearance of swear words at certain times is too unnecessary, which will lower the viewing experience. The author did not consider trimming those swear words when editing the article, and did not care at all about affecting the viewing experience.

21 [ [Comprehensive] Butterfly Effect BacteriaDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 13.6kFavorites34kClicks/ch22.6kNutrition

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Generally speaking, there are not many flaws, but there are some points that are unacceptable to me, so if I pass 6 points, I will give it a 6.1. I feel that the author's writing in the early years was really wild.

22 室 Why Do My Roommates Look at Me Like This? Young Master Yu GeDanmei (BL)490k WordsCompleted 236.4kFavorites421.2kClicks/ch309.5kNutrition

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The character collapse was so sudden. It even broke down at the end of the show. It only scored 6. If I pass, I would give it a 5.6. At first, I thought it was cold and uncomfortable. But by the finale, the contrast between the character before and after was huge. After falling in love, I became delicate and weak, and I became so fond of the sweet life. You still don't want to talk about it, and you still complain. Isn't this just deceiving readers? The character collapsed at the end of writing. It really means spending money till the end, and eating till the end. Two stars still can't be voted out. ( ?_?)?⌒●~* And one setting is probably used too much, because it became popular and I kept writing this type of thing. Your number is probably between 7.7 And 8.3. It would be inappropriate to choose one with a high score. Although the first part is pretty good, the second part is a big failure. I have no interest in second brushing, I can only say

23 咒 Mudslide in the Magic World Three Thousand LivesNo CP1.9M WordsCompleted 101.6kFavorites250.7kClicks/ch981.5kNutrition

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It can only be said that this author is not good at writing the original characters in some anime with too big filters, and he is also good at breaking down the relationships between characters in some original plots.

25 温 Win Wayne [Comprehensive British and American] Even ThoughRomance639k WordsCompleted 35kFavorites141.3kClicks/ch73.9kNutrition

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I was reading this kind of article recently, and then I saw that this article was ignored by the circle. I found that the reason for the criticism was that the character description was not good enough, the original world characters were ignored, and the protagonist was not well portrayed.

28 天 Genius Operator [Holographic] Li WenjiuDanmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 188.5kFavorites174.7kClicks/ch1.4MNutrition

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It feels like an old routine. It doesn't feel like I'm reading something from 2025. It feels like I'm reading something written several years ago, at least three or four years ago. There aren't any attractive supporting characters. Overall, it feels like the writing is average 6.3

29 职 Professional Young Master, with an Annual Salary of 30 Million Fully Automatic Code KeyboardDanmei (BL)863k WordsCompleted 174.8kFavorites221.5kClicks/ch331.2kNutrition

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It still doesn't feel like something I saw in 2025. The writing is too cliche and has no emotion. It's very ordinary. To be honest, 6.2

31 夏 Wizarding Life in the Shire Mo YunqingDanmei (BL)204k WordsOngoing 1.7kFavorites8.4kClicks/ch774Nutrition

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Two Hearts, the author of this book definitely has a very strong malice towards the original characters of Harry Potter. When I saw his revised serialization on another platform, later on, I found that his malice towards the original protagonist suddenly became less strong, and gradually became lighter, but for some unknown reason, it suddenly changed back to its original state. I really felt that he was too full of malice towards the characters in the original background. The description of Ciel's family, especially his father, felt too white. The timeline also feels a bit too confusing, and I can't tell whether it's in modern times or in Ciel's anime era.

32 非 Atypical Redemption [Quick Travel] Xiao WujunDanmei (BL)1.3M WordsCompleted 280.8kFavorites430.2kClicks/ch625.5kNutrition

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Well, it is also a book that has been promoted. When I came to take a look, I found that it is a relatively average book. It should be considered normal. I won't comment too much. (This kind of normal ones will not be scored)

35 鉴 Identify the Male Protagonist of Honkai Manga When to Go to BaichuanDanmei (BL)1.5M WordsCompleted 46.8kFavorites37.6kClicks/ch223.2kNutrition

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It was attractive at first, but the more I watched it, the more bland it became.

36 权 Rose of Wands[infinite] No Crazy WordsDanmei (BL)2.4M WordsCompleted 120.4kFavorites152.8kClicks/ch78.9kNutrition

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Before 5.8, I was attracted by the recommendation on the Internet and collected it. I checked it out in the past few days. In the eyes of outsiders, Shou seems to be a relatively cold person. But from the perspective of our audience, the protagonist Shou's inner dialogue and the system are not cold at all. My personal feeling is that the protagonist is a bit dull. Moreover, the author gave me the impression that the protagonist was very powerful and awesome. But from what I've seen, it's a very old routine. When reading this kind of unlimited streaming, I basically don't know how to skip the copy, especially at the beginning, but I basically skipped through this book, which has about twenty or thirty chapters. Because this book has quite a lot of words, I first looked for a free version elsewhere. I wanted to test the waters first, since I wanted to buy it later, but I found out that I was lucky I didn't buy it. It may be that the author's writing style is not very good, or it may be that the subject matter and the character are not very attractive to me. And the brothers are really not that attractive to me from the first few chapters... Do they have to be written later to make it more interesting? Moreover, there are too many brothers, and the early stage did not create any charm. Instead, it made me feel too masculine. And this kind of whole family is a big boss, I don't know if the protagonist knows it, but I feel that this kind of drama is really cliché, and the first part is also relatively poor in my opinion. I don't have the patience to read the kind of poor writing in the first part. Unless I have listened to the radio drama first, I basically won't read further, because I don't know whether the later part is really exciting or unchanged.

43 职 Professional Villain [Quick Travel] Freeze SupermanDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 210.6kFavorites414.2kClicks/ch284.8kNutrition

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Can't stand pure evil people.

44 主 After the Protagonist's Luck Was Taken Away, He Was [Reborn] Happy EndingDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 191.9kFavorites236.1kClicks/ch168.8kNutrition

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5.8 The writing is simple but not as great as it sounds. The main character is also quite white. I have forgotten the content. I probably only saw less than 50 pictures. You need to practice your writing more.

45 穿 Dressed as a Sick and Beautiful Prince in a Torture Novel Liu XiaogeDanmei (BL)690k WordsCompleted 117.8kFavorites177.2kClicks/ch77.6kNutrition

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5.5 Is a book that cannot withstand the second brush. It really is, and it still has a bit of Haitang flavor. Your rating is also falsely high, so a 6 is almost enough for you.

46 特 Special Grade Magic Spirit Gravity User Ice LingyuDanmei (BL)333k WordsCompleted 21.5kFavorites37.3kClicks/ch17.8kNutrition

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5 Is said to be one-way CP, but currently I really can't taste the CP flavor. Even the basic partnership relationship was not described, and there was no sense of a couple or even their original sense of partnership. It's really hard to say that there is something wrong with the character design. There are several places that are suitable for describing intimacy and the feeling of a couple, but I don't know why the author didn't write it, as if he just didn't feel it. Everything written is um... I only read about a dozen of them, and some of the plots are still ooc. I have become very, very picky since I entered the Taizhong Circle, but this book really means that I am not picky. You have to be obsessive to read it, or it gives me the impression that you want to make money but your writing is not good. I hope you can't hide it secretly. No news has been found so far. All in all, the writing is not a novice, but there are some places where the description is not in place, or even a bit excessive. It's a shame, but I won't say anything unpleasant. And it's all what CP wants to describe, so it's even more impossible.

47 出 Let's Make a Debut, Hat Stand Nakahara Chuuya's HatDanmei (BL)594k WordsCompleted 19.5kFavorites55kClicks/ch15.7kNutrition

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5.1 Please understand the characters carefully before writing fan fiction. It takes a lot of effort for the two of them to establish themselves in the entertainment industry, and people cannot be so sweet. Author, I'm serious, if you don't know how to write, then don't write. Sister Cp's money is really good. This meal is so delicious, don't you plan to improve your cooking skills? It's really unpalatable and ugly. You actually got a score of 8.9. I'd give you a score of 6.3.

48 横 The Yokohama Singer Is Also Working Hard to Remove the Curse Today Nakahara Chuuya's HatDanmei (BL)487k WordsCompleted 17kFavorites47.7kClicks/ch5.8kNutrition

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5.2 Common problems with humanities. Real……

49 我 Let's Steal Another World to Raise You Reminiscences of LegacyDanmei (BL)975k WordsCompleted 13.4kFavorites27.1kClicks/ch14.4kNutrition

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4.4 Is really hard to hide, the Cp group tends to be too medium. It turns out you're hiding Orita inside, so it's not too disgusting. It's just that there are too few people in Zhi Tai, so you can't make much money. You just came to deceive our middle-aged lady, right? You secretly added other cp plots in it that you can't hide. This book was recommended by the book called Mysophobia. It's really disgusting.

50 港 Port Cadres Make Their Online Debut Ying PaperDanmei (BL)232k WordsCompleted 5.8kFavorites19.9kClicks/ch2.8kNutrition

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4.5. Wow, what are you doing? Have you ever seen Zhongyuan laugh at himself? Especially when I laugh at myself about my height. And the same thing was written by Osamu Dazai in yours. If you are not suitable for writing this kind of article, you can just change the name and treat it as a new book. I gave you two stars because the rating was too low and I couldn't submit it. Many two points are given for this reason. Whether it was written by Chuuya Nakahara or Osamu Dazai, it is difficult to criticize. I have never seen such a gentle and kind-hearted Osamu Dazai. I have never seen anything so sweet in Nakahara Chuya. Which of the two has the simplest identity? How could this be? Moreover, it is not very reasonable for the two of them to be in the entertainment industry. If you can't write, don't write. It actually has a score of 8.7. It would be good to give you a score between 6 and 7.8.