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Mainly Danmei/Often mean/Highly recommended with 4.5 And above, 3.8-4.4 Is worth watching, 3.0-3.7 Is a way to kill time, others please avoid lightning
It was too short, and I was kicked out before I had time to enter the mood. What's amazing is that the relationships, characters, emotions, and details can be shown one by one in such a short space. You can really feel the hidden pain caused by orthopedic taboos and have a sense of atmosphere.
"When you see him smile, hear him speak, or be called affectionately by him, it will hurt you. When you stand and sit with him, many tiny needles seem to be born in the air. Others can't see it, and you can't see it, but you feel them invading your body, piercing the skin, and flowing out colorless Invisible blood, they are smart spies, roaming in the blood vessels, traveling all the way to the heart. They stick to the heart, and you will not adapt to it at first. Over time, you will find that they are beating with your heart, and the burning pain becomes a part of your body and cannot be separated. "
The chaotic world of ghosts in the prosperous age. The short story really reflects the author's writing power. The structure of this piece is complete, and the plot is slowly unfolded using the retrieval of memory as a clue, and the emotional explosion at the end is natural.
"'Yes, I remember,' he said, saying words that could never be remembered the moment he said them."
So far, so long... Just to see you one last time. "
I really feel what good writing is. Successful writing is anchored by characters, plots, and emotions, rather than a collection of flowery words. In Du Yingmei's opinion, Yao Tieyun is the most important, but the emotional writing in the plot is restrained and non-explicit. You have to wait until the moment you finish reading to feel the stormy waves under the long stream.
I also like that the author pays attention to the "minority groups" such as middle-aged people/elderly people/married women, and some unique Chinese native lilies.
"If there is a river in your chest, let it flow out."
"You are the impossible among the millions of possibilities. You are the only light at the intersection that does not exist."
Short and sweet, no nonsense. The most ruthless emperor family saw a comment that took this story to another level and level of cruelty.
"Actually, I had a heartache when I dreamed about it at midnight. However, when that time disappeared, I didn't feel anything. My love for Su Zi is only a short life, and it is no match for the eternity of my family and country. If I think about Su Zi under the underworld, crossing the Naihe Bridge with a cup of soup, she may not miss me, a heartless and unrighteous person. It's better than this platycodon, which resurrects every year, and there is no need to make love for it every year."
4.0/5.0
The writing is very smooth. To defend a country for one person vs. To devote yourself to one person to defend a country.
"Isn't it because I love you so much that you come to me?"
3.3/5.0
It's as light as water, and the narrative seems to be trying to achieve a simple and vague style, so it seems messy and I didn't understand it.
4.4/5.0
Such a lonely and lonely article, full of imagination: a desolate world, a language without emotional vocabulary, disconnected individuals, life and death, and the North and South poles are the head and rim of the drum...
The postscript talks about the inspiration brought by the elevated commute to and from school, and it feels like the author is feeling and touching the world with his tentacles. I was only in the third grade of junior high school when I wrote it, and it seems to prove once again that talent can create barriers between people.
1.0/5.0
I wonder if what I actually wanted to read was another "Gun on Patrol" but I opened it by mistake. The characters and writing are very retarded, and the plot is messy. I don't understand why I gave up after reading 70% of it...
4.9/5.0
I can't tell you how much I like this article. I gave it a high score after reading it for the first time, and I was still moved after reading it the second time. A master of narrative, a master of telling stories and writing emotions. I originally thought it was earthy and bland, but only after I peeled off the cocoon did I realize that it was so delicate and heart-wrenching. The understatement depicts the quiet affection and helpless sadness. Such a short length can let people enter the ups and downs of the protagonist's mood. The restraint of secret love is treading on thin ice and deceiving oneself that this is the best ending. The reality is a bit uncomfortable. There are no useless pens, and there are many details, making it suitable for repeated use.
"If everything hadn't started, he could have watched him spend his whole life, and when he got old, he could meet up to drink tea, smoke, and play cards; if he was sick, he could go to the hospital to visit him; if he died, he could cry in front of his coffin - no, maybe he would die before him, so at least he could see him before he died. Anyway, he would be too old by then and no one could care about him, so maybe he could hold his hand and say goodbye to him.
How long will it take to reach old age? As long as you endure it, it will pass.
How hard can it be to endure? When he wants to talk about his lovely girlfriend, he just puts the microphone aside and pretends he doesn't hear. If he wants to go out to play with his wife, just don't go with him.
Just don't let him know that he's thinking about him too.
When morning came, the person behind him finally moved. First his breathing became quieter, then he turned over, and finally sat up. The hand that reached out hesitated on his shoulder, and finally patted him gently.
Zhou Yuan pulled the quilt over his head, patted him reassuringly with his hand, and followed his usual loud voice: 'Ruyi, get up! '
Yes, that would be nice. "
3.4/5.0
From the beginning of the story when you call me "Honey, Wife" on the bed to the indifference off the bed, you can tell that this is a character/cute story, and you can see the end at a glance. It is similar to Li Shumi of "Beautiful Friend" (not a copy), but the slow attack in this article is sometimes annoyingly confident. If you think about it, Songhe's life is quite miserable... I really can't stand it.
3.7/5.0
The perspective changes are well chosen, but the story is not very accessible. The author always writes with calm restraint, but there are turmoils inside.
3.8/5.0
I finished reading it in one gulp and will read it again when I have time)
"Do you really know what loneliness is?"
One person's unavailability becomes another person's unavailability.
4.0/5.0
It can be seen in the early works that the depiction of emotional lines is not so fluent and natural, but it is still at the level of the best.
3.7/5.0
It's old-fashioned but the writing always makes people laugh. The plot is a bit bland and the emotions are too straightforward. Overall, I feel like there is a lack of energy everywhere. However, the character of Chang Ning is well created.
4.7/5.0
Making full use of the careers of Ng Teng Fong and Chen Ze pushes the emotions and themes to another level, and the collision and combination of science and theology is wonderful. A true sense of destiny.
1.0/5.0
The writing style and characters are very childish. The writing should be far away from the language of the time, otherwise it will be impossible to read it ten years later.
4.0/5.0
Looking at the front, I think it's too trivial, and I can't enter that area. But when the relationship and emotions slowly unfold later, it makes people want to stop. (Inexplicably, it brings a similar feeling to "The Development of a Common Girl", the time flowing among a group of people, faint but very profound)
3.8/5.0
Smooth bloody writing with a high degree of completion. When I was tagging, I realized that I had piled up so many memes in one go. It was a collection. Although I have watched it several times, I still feel slightly tortured when I watch it again...
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