Well, I couldn't sleep most of the night and I thought about this article with a thousand words of negative comments in my mind, hahaha.
The author's setting is okay, and so is the worldview. The shortcomings of insufficient writing are particularly prominent in this "okay" worldview setting. I understand what the author wants to write, but I just can't empathize with it or write about this "feeling".
Well, then, when new characters are introduced, four or five of them appear in one chapter, it gives me a headache. I don't know if it's because I haven't read a novel in more than a year or what, but there are so many characters and so many pitfalls can be created at once. To put it bluntly, I can't even remember what you filled in later, and I can't experience the feeling of sudden enlightenment. There can be four or five characters in one chapter, and they appear in so many appearances. They can also be called by that hair color without giving names, which creates a sense of mystery. I understand, but what do you think of blue or gray? It gives me a headache when I see it. I don't know what's wrong with you. All I know is that I didn't have any feelings for this character when he appeared later.
When I read this article, I felt like I saw the template and memorization materials of my writing set back then. The template is set, and none of the materials are correct. Really know what you want to say, but can't feel it. It's obviously a very good narcissus setting, and I also like the infinite world view, but it failed because of the lack of writing power. I felt dizzy and went to enjoy it.
The world view set up in the early stage made me watch it all night, and I gave it five stars. In the middle period, the more I read, the more tired I became, and I really wanted to give up writing. When I thought about spending money, I was reluctant to give it up. The sunk costs were all there, so I chose to endure it and finish reading.
It's not that I haven't read Jinjiang's poor writing style, I just haven't read such a writing style with a good world view setting.
So broken. I spent thirty bucks to read this article. I really want a refund. . . . .
The ending was very rushed. I feel like I could have written a few more chapters. It was too rushed. The process was okay. It was quite interesting. But when Yin didn't know that the man in white was Xie, he slept with the man in white and used the man in white as a substitute to avoid the idea...
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