57
After reading the author's two subsequent clear-cut books, I clearly feel that the author's writing has improved a lot. The plot of this book is incoherent, with a hammer here and a stick here and there, and the story is just average.
But the next two clear cuts are very nice.
41
This palace fight plot. . .
Even if you want to show that the heroine is smart, you don't have to make the people around you and your opponents look so stupid, right?
25
After reading a lot of mine clearance, I still couldn't resist reading this one, so I was already prepared to read something that was not a fun read.
So I think the comments about feeling aggrieved are not necessarily because the heroine's behavior is not "enjoyable" enough, but more because she is aggrieved by the contradiction between the heroine's awkwardness and the contradiction between the "no" in her mind and the "ok" behavior.
Maybe the author wanted to express the heroine's powerlessness in this era, but what was shown was a mess.
If the heroine wanted to live a low-key life, why did she take out glass and other eye-catching things? If she wanted to do something in that era, why didn't she prepare for force protection?
Children hold gold in the busy city!
33
Um, the emotional line is a bit disgusting to be honest.
Maybe it was very popular back then.
Looking back after 25 years, I feel very, very, very uncomfortable.
8
This is the reason that discourages many readers.
-The prices are outrageous
-The cooking process is unreasonable
I don't understand that a novel with the tag business food can be so outrageous
Moreover, there are so many authors who have made suggestions in the comment area who have not changed/responded at all.
37
The emotional line is not good, the male protagonist showed his contempt for women when they first met
After having thoughts about the heroine, he used the convenience of being a neighbor to eavesdrop on the conversation between the heroine and her brother. . . . Too far off the mark
It is very different from the author's other Red Mansions, but readers' eyes are still sharp.
105
The early stage is good, but the wording in the middle and late stages is weird? ? ?
The plot is very good
The author's other article "The Red Mansion" is very interesting. It is the one with good data, and the reader's eyes are sharp.
46
It's so embarrassing to see the princess saying "I am the princess..." Every time she speaks...
Earlier, the author said that the princess was incapable of strategizing and needed the protagonist to go to her; later, the author described the princess's stratagem to deal with Liu's corruption case. . . . And according to the author, she will have great power when she becomes queen. . . . ? What a changeable personality
69
It started out very well, and then the supporting characters became more and more intelligent, and the protagonist had a strong aura and was very popular. . .
65
The plot is average
The wording is not clear and clear, see, only see, but see... Appears very frequently
The slap-in-the-face plot was so embarrassing that all the members lost their wits
131
The career line is very similar to the author's other book. Some of the creative plots are very detailed, but if you look closely, they feel empty;
The emotional line is pretty good
24
First of all, there are huge logical loopholes;
Secondly, there are a lot of chapter names at the beginning of the chapter and the author's name Jinjiang. It's just for the number of words... Is this still the case after entering v??