The Dragonfly Touches the Water and the Road Collapses
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Record why you abandoned the article. The scoring will refer to the chapters you have read, the writing, plot, characters, etc., But the overall point is that you abandoned the article.
The copywriting is not consistent with the actual product. The writing is really attractive. I borrowed a sentence from the comment area for the text. It tastes very milky.
The thief chasing me at the front got up, but I stopped thinking about it after the break. The character design was also a bit thin, and there was too much pulling. Although I like emotional pulling, I don't like the kind of "Ah, so you like me." It's too ridiculous.
I read this book because I read the villain. The emotional development was really slow. I was still following the serial at that time. The main reason was that I personally felt that the brother described in the book may be in love with Shou. I didn't like this, because in that article, I felt that what Shou lacked the most was family affection. If the brother was so good to him because he liked him, I would feel a little distressed, if it weren't for the fact that I didn't say it. But in the villain's book, the brother's affection is quite strong.
I read half of it, and it was quite interesting. I think the sense of comics is really difficult to grasp. I thought this one would be like Shabu Senpai and Fu Keng, but the writing was too suspended and empty, so I closed it after reading half of it and never opened it again. The setting is quite suitable for that kind of writing, but comics + down-to-earth + non-pretentious sand cartoons are really difficult to write.
The age setting of the heroine is too young, and I am incapable of accepting it, but I really like this kind of plot. I have read all the romantic and danmei movies, Academy City, and have not read the ancient ones, but the heroine in this book really likes the second male lead, which is quite consistent with the setting. However, the setting of the heroine is quite different from what I imagined and not attractive enough. I just remember to write that she looks good.
I like the setting, but the writing, writing and plot are really old-fashioned, which makes me wonder why it is even on the list and has a rating of 9.1, Which is not polite at all.
At the time, I thought I had discovered a treasure. The writing was very detailed, but later I found that the prose-style descriptions were a bit like seeing flowers in the mist, and there was not much plot. The characters were also very hazy, which made people tired to read. It seemed that there was a foreshadowing and plot, but in fact there was no plot at all. It was a bit like a book-dropping style of writing.
It's still the same author who wrote the village map of the Song Dynasty. The setting is interesting, but it's not very thought-provoking, and it's a bit bland. The article is bland and I don't want to open it after I close it.
I like the meme, I thought it was the kind of article that criticizes the boss Jack Su Shou, but I don't know why the doctor turned into a heartthrob. He can eat melons and complain, but it is quite alienating when the owner of melons becomes himself. It is kind of the controversy caused by Wang Ma's short video before: complaining about being a worker and turning into the opposite.
I only remember the beauty of the heroine. The writing style is very similar to a village painting from the Song Dynasty. It is not a particularly pretentious way of writing ancient proverbs, but the writing is not romantic enough and the logic is flawed. It is just like playing.
This setting really attracted me, but the sense of separation between the real middle school students and reality was very serious. I thought it was just passing by, but suddenly there was a gunfight, and the style of painting suddenly changed. I thought it was the middle school students, but the social animal taste reappeared, and I shook my head.
I remember this author, and I also like the jokes, but the beginning is really not good. A large number of people appear on the stage, and the story is not laid out well. I gave up.
PPT style group portrait, I wanted to write a group portrait, but there was no foreshadowing for each person, it was very hard, even the male and female protagonists were not good enough, it was just a very streamlined account, which was boring to watch.