Having an Affair with the Protagonist [Main Attack]
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There are various types of backgrounds. In short, they all have an affair with the protagonist. This protagonist includes the original protagonist, the attacking protagonist, the cp protagonist, the romance protagonist... Continuously updated.
The powerful double hegemons are always attracted by the first, and the arrow faintly returns in the middle and late stages of attack. Hot on the outside and cold on the inside, controlling the field, Su Gongx, decisive and cold, career madness turns to love brain. It's a beautiful and powerful attack. It's unruly and casual but also upright. Qin You's peach-blossom smile lured our Mr. Yan away (no). He's still very jealous, but Qin You's sense of security has always been very high.
The image-building, writing, logic, and moving details are all smooth and changeable. The plot of losing the horse in the later stage is still fun. This system is also relatively likable. The problem is still the classic ending problem. All the teacher's articles will get stuck in the ending (). However, this text is okay and making progress. As for the extra chapter, although it is said to have an open ending, it is too open-ended. It feels like it is just the beginning... I can only say that if I really want to continue writing, it will be very long, and it would be great to have an extra chapter ()
Overall, this is a very good and excellent novel. A young couple cares about each other. The arrow when being chased is very thick. In the later stage of the attack, the arrow gradually returns to the arrow. In the end, it is discovered that you both loved each other very much from the beginning (laughs)
Bed can be regarded as two strong players. When each has the upper hand, I personally like orange in terms of xp, but others can accept it (there is a chapter where the attack is weak, but I easily passed it). The gazes are mutual, and most of them are caused by condensation (cotton seeds bt wow), but there are also normal people observing and liking their lovers.
A dom like Xiao Yi that is gentle and bright but has a bottom line and a desire for control + a little bit of s-aggression is really rare these days. Cottonseed is a bit more than the introduction: Damn mine man. And brother, your Long Aotian taste is really good ()
The character design is very interesting and worth pondering. Although I continued watching it after a while, I still remember the shock and joy of the moment when Xiao Yi was nineteen years old and foreshadowed his spiritual growth. It was a very real and smooth transformation.
The plot also maintains a consistent style, and the foreshadowing continues to kick back until the final stage. It is very enjoyable to watch. Although there is a knife, many points are rounded off, including the negative psychological condition that exceeds the limit. I like this kind of thing where everything has explanations, reasons and logic, kkk
But of course there are shortcomings: although the logic is passable, it is still relatively hard in some places, including the presentation of characters, which can also be seen as a relatively obvious xp release (such as the frequent oral habits in individual chapters that affect personal perception). There is indeed room for improvement in the writing style, especially in the early stages. The handicap of language organization is too serious. It is probably guessed that the real movie enthusiast should be the author (?) - The scenes focus on the visual sense, the transitions are also very cinematic, and occasionally the transitions are very subtle, and the shooting is amazing. But sometimes the rotation is a little chaotic, or is it too frequent? Although I understand it, it doesn't affect the viewing experience. After all, it is words. I feel that the techniques can be common, but it still needs to be adapted to local conditions.
But this is the author's first book, and it's already great! Totally doting on it! Looking forward to the next book www
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I read the announcement of the new article next door and felt that I couldn't wait to cry. I read the extra to catch up. I am very interested in the PA who wears the original book. Although it is not finished, the attitude is generally revealed and the character is very stable. The high school PA is also very good, she is a green young man, and the other cookies are also sweet and can fully feel the love. The more controversial if. After all, they grew up in different environments and were very young. Both of them have inappropriate considerations. I can understand it. Avoidance is indeed a typical development, but the overall response is pretty good except for asking the other party to write 3,000 handwritten reviews every day in high school.
Women's clothing beauty gong x love brain dragon Aotian Shou, body feeling favors each other and favors attack, Shou has the ceiling of combat power, gong is a normal modern good person's mentality, but he will not be sloppy. It's not purely weak in terms of combat power, but compared to being weak, it's a pity that there's never been much room for improvement. But it's rare to find a book that is so naturally charming and not annoying → "You can tell she's a princess." The women's vest lasted until more than 60%, and it didn't completely fall off in the end. The bed is weak. But the feeling is really very restrained, and the intention of attacking comes first, which is a bonus.
The settings are all round, the ending is a little rushed, but overall it's okay, with a little bit of past life in the cookie.
It's a pity that compared to the main storyline of sweet sister-brother love, my taste is more inclined to the traditional point of view of Brother in the Past Life. The youthful spirit of the past life is portrayed, and the plot of the two people fighting hand in hand really irritated me.
Cold, rational and controlling, Su Gong x Love, Brain Jealousy, Desire, Dissatisfaction, Acceptance. It's really funny that two people always don't agree with each other. By nature, he is very self-centered and tends to be overbearing. In the first world, he pretended to be the best, and he really worked hard to chase his sweetheart (laughing). Later, his true nature was slowly exposed. Although he was restrained, most of them were tolerant and indulgent in the end, and the bottom line was getting lower and lower, Mr. Lu.
Unfortunately, the main plot is not very clear, and the later missions are in vain. Some worlds are too routine and not very detailed, which deducts points slightly.
She is frail and beautiful and has a millionaire crush. She has many clay sculptures of navel oranges, and there are plots of intimacy between Gong and other people (Gong will not refuse her job requirements, and she only got to know Shou later). Shou is completely attack-oriented, and has high control and no brains. She is very happy and can be rated as five stars. The key is not to use brains, don't use brains, and don't use brains.
The three small world routines of Samsung Dunk in the later stage are basically the same, and there are a lot of whitewashing logic that can be said to bully my outlook on life. I gave up once because I still had my brain to watch it at the time (?)
Pure love, I don't know why it was divided into multiple categories.
Classic weak attack and popular attack, stupid beauty? Although he is weak, he is still hard-working and well-behaved. Sekai Sanyou feels that he has been forced to change his mentality. Achievements in solid attack and mud attack, many tricks of XP, very good driving skills, and because of the plot setting, it is simply a variety of reasonable "persecution". It originally had four stars, but the plot development in the later stages of World 2 and World 3 is really a bit abstract and logical. Of course, it is very comfortable for XP. It is absolutely five-star.
Ps: World Three has the setting of pregnancy (not giving birth)
The plot and characters are pretty good, the post-apocalyptic beauty Qiang Gong x Qidian Wen Long Aotian, who is cold on the surface and a little bit evil in reality, but has a good heart and a strong mentality. He doesn't mind women's clothing from the beginning, and he is fearless in changing the original plot. The master and apprentice are suki, and in the later stage, there is a honey trap to trick the shou into changing his ears and tail and come out to play with him. It made me laugh so hard.
It's a pity that the writing still has room for improvement. I feel like I'm writing whatever comes to mind. The plot of the middle and back together is a bit scattered. The writing goes through the Qidian novel, and it is indeed similar to Qidian's writing style in all aspects...
It can be considered an early article, and there are some stereotypes in the text; in the end, only a few people knew about women's clothing. Sometimes the small details are confusing, but it doesn't affect the overall situation.
Ps: There are more deputy cps
Beauty Attack x Dark Suffering, the reborn protagonist becomes dark and forces beauty to attack weakly. Logically speaking, the xp is quite right, but why is it not impressive? Is it because it is too short?
The protagonist of a career straight man x black bt, the protagonist is forced to be lazy at the beginning and basically eats oranges all the time. Of the first three worlds, the first world is the most detailed and reasonable. He is so well acted that it deserves to make people fall in love with him. The rest of the suffering will gradually make me laugh to death. Although the second and third worlds are be, the xp explodes! Later, because of painful lessons again and again, I slowly learned to treat my lover's feelings normally. The fourth world is sweet and happy, and the fifth world is xp and slice hehehe.
The detail response is also very good. For example, the car accident in the first world and the male protagonist in the second world have PTSD about the car. The delay in the beginning was probably because he could not ride in the car. It is really detailed. It is true that the world behind is a little less delicate in comparison, but the flaws are not concealed, and there are many extras that are very enjoyable to watch!
Ps: I read abo's extra comments and got a lot of criticism, but I think it's understandable. It doesn't feel too bad because of the character design. It's just because of the if line. Once Shou's character returned to before liberation, Gong lost the memory of strategizing and the attitude of staying away, so he seemed passive. But it's really different from other worlds. It fully shows that if you don't have the ability to suffer from this kind of temper, it's better not to mess with it (laugh)
Career brain attacks (but knows how to take advantage of loopholes to facilitate myself) x Love brain does 0 feelings for love (and has a lot of pornographic thoughts, laugh to death), at the end of the second world, the official attack in the third world confirms that the hearts are going in both directions. Personal taste prefers the first two worlds. There is an explanation in the end, Shou's identity is foreshadowed and recycled, and the logical and emotional lines are quite complete. It's obvious that there can be several worlds. I quite like this combination and Gong's character, but I don't like it.
Oh, by the way, abos mark each other's plots. Gong has experienced too many worlds, and he doesn't care about the various settings of the small world, such as the body. He is even very questioning and researching about abos that he has never heard of. It makes him laugh to death.
It has the tone of a fairy tale, and there are generally no problems with the logic of the story. There are foreshadowings (although the foreshadowing is quite obvious) and recycling, but it ends a little too fast in the end, but it is still very sweet. Flaws do not cover up strengths.
Gong is a smart and outstanding person, but also an ordinary good person. In the early stage, he would feel guilty and pity, and he would take care of Shou (but later he would be obsessed with Gong and give back a lot.). The system was very constrained, and the mission and the original intention were very conflicting, which led to a lot of conflicts. However, after the system was half offline in the middle and late stages, it was really sweet for the young couple to fall in love, and except for the restricted system part, they basically talked straight, and they also respected each other and put themselves in each other's shoes, which was very comfortable. There are plot points of torture, but I feel like I tried to describe them as little as possible. There should also be a few pairs of obscure sub-CPs, but they are not mentioned clearly, so you can just ignore them if you don't like them. (It should be noted that the group portrait part at the beginning is also very exciting. I can remember that many people are also concerned about their development, but there is not much explanation at the end. Damn it)
It was written in ancient times, but it is a classic. Villain The emotional line is average, but the plot is quite interesting, especially in the early stages. It's a pity that the outline was cut later. The practice is going according to nature, the writing style is not too serious, the writing is smooth but there is still room for improvement, there is a little bit of a running account at the end, and the imaginative design is quite logical, but it is a pity that the progress is too fast.
Wearing books "saved" Shou, but in fact, it was only after the two established a relationship that Gong found out that he was going through books. It is most suitable for people who want to study in school, hahaha. The character setting is very good! The psychology is very real and delicate, ambiguous and pulling? The early stage is very good, the only thing is that the ending is a little sloppy later.
[Part 2]/Listing books, I found that I have revised the article, and I have time to read it again//The story and characters are really well portrayed. The second world is amazing, and I am so good at writing. I will deduct one point because the writing style always makes people suffocate. I was tortured by the story and the writing style while reading this article [Smoke. Jpg]
Okay, okay, it's just right for bts like me (?)
If it can be better, the writing is a little rushed in the later stage, and the emotional change is logically reasonable, but it may be better to have more descriptions (.) But xp is rated as five stars! !
The protagonist is more of a villain than the villain, Raku. Although An An is gentle, he is really stable to a terrifying degree (a compliment). Only this kind of attack can treat such a sickly patient into submission.
I wrote it in ancient times. The writing is average but the impression is quite funny. It's a classic straight man versus a mysterious and scheming man. XP is quite suitable for my taste.
Cookie, a little bit cruel or because of the mission, it feels like it doesn't last more than one chapter, so it's suitable to read without too many brains. Sick, weak and beautiful, I attack my xp. At certain times, the character design is a bit strange, sometimes smart and sometimes silly and sweet. Although he was favored by women in the early stage, he basically concentrated his attacks. The concentration of favored attacks was quite high, and he was also favored by the world.
Purely sweet article. A relatively innovative reverse cross-dressing pattern. Gong is the beautiful, powerful and miserable demon king, and Ue is the original harem protagonist of the true sect. The characters of both sides are actually quite common. Gong can stand up well, and I like the xp. I like the portrayal of Shou very much. He is kind, sincere, generous and naturally delicate. After enlightenment, he has the belief, perseverance and courage to move forward. The way of love is also generous and calm, proactive and not pretentious. The overall reading is relatively comfortable and there are no major mistakes.
The disadvantage is that some parts could be more delicate, and the plot does not need to be pushed too quickly. It is a bit sloppy in the later stages, which is more obvious. The writing will be better if it improves. The climax is a bit hard and not high enough. The extras don't quite stand up to scrutiny.
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