In Japan at the beginning of the 21st century, Akabane Kagura is a boy on the verge of collapse. A musician, Aichi Fuyuki, whose own talent has been dismissed, lures him into a band with money and drags him along. Thus begins the complex yet tender glimmer of salvation shared by seven boys. The boys use music as their pen to compose a passionate story of youth, expressing the truth in their hearts through music. Only they themselves understand the feelings they share.
Theme: Inspire everyone to keep moving forward in search of the meaning of life
Bao~ It is not recommended to write long paragraphs as this will affect the desire to read. Then the copywriting can also be changed. Pay attention to a blank line between each paragraph. Some words should be used and unnecessary ones should be removed or replaced. This is my evaluation after reading the first chapter. I may give more detailed suggestions after reading it. Do you accept it?