
Song of Four Silences
四寂歌
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 247k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
47Chapters
327Favorites
1.5kClicks per chapter
248Comments
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Lion, it's finally over. Touched. Touched. I was also sad when I saw the cemetery section. It really touched my heart. From the beginning of the year to the end of the year, It was Si Jige who accompanied me here. Every time I read Lion J's articles, my heart surges. How wonderful. Hey-hey. They're all what I like. Sister, you have worked hard. Big MUA.
Copywriting The author is very careful to cover the main context of the story, but as a copy it is still a bit long. Some things are best expressed through articles step by step. The disadvantage of this is that once the copy is not to the taste of others, it may be criticized directly. Listing the three male protagonists of this article one by one is a bit verbose. In short, the copy should be more concise and concise, but at the same time, it does not lose its highlights and is fascinating. Writing. As a modern romance article, this article follows the line of a drama. The writing style should be realistic and steady, and should not be dreamy or exaggerated. The writing of this article is fluent, with many cute features, and can be appropriately arranged throughout the text. It is neither boring nor exaggerated and immature. The description of the characters is very good. The three male protagonists of the article all have completely different personality traits, which makes it easy to distinguish them. However, the female characters are slightly lacking. Although the image of the heroine is very real, it is still not clear enough. I can only say that after reading the full text of more than 200,000 words, the image of Xi Yue is still vague and difficult to locate. In addition, there are large explanatory sentences in the article, which gives people a sense of pale powerlessness. Even if some backgrounds and hidden lines are explained in the novel, this convenient but monotonous method cannot be used. Remember, the author is reading a novel, not watching you explain an event. Content The opening chapter is very original and full of interest. It easily leads the readers into the story that the author wants to tell. Without falling into the cliche, Zheng Yehang is introduced with one sentence in English. As for the heroine, who is almost a third party, although the author mentioned that she is helpless, she is just a simple college student, but her transformation from being aloof at the beginning to facing reality and accepting reality also reflects the fierce collision between material desires and three views in the current society. I have never liked third parties, but I don't like men who have affairs even more. The first wife is a bad character similar to a stepmother in most novels, but she is always the saddest self-deceiver. As for the entanglement between Tang Yige and the male protagonist, as well as with his sister-in-law, it is very vulgar and boring, but it is the most touching when you watch it. After all, there will be many men who love you in this world, but there is only one person who truly cares about you without reservation from beginning to end, and that is Tang Yige. In fact, in this story, everyone has everyone's troubles, everyone's helplessness, everyone's laughter and tears. The heroine finally moved forward towards her dream. Zheng Yehang had her own family. Tang Yige did not leave the world with regrets. It was his love that gave the heroine the motivation and hope to move forward. Ou Qiqian finally had her own child. Maybe these three men all have something like Yue in their hearts. Although it is difficult to measure which one is more important, but love But that's not it, loving is enough. The heroine may really bravely pursue love in the end, leaving readers with endless reveries and prayers, but the result must be beautiful, because as the copy says, I believe that people who hold the beautiful belief that tomorrow will be sunny will never give up their sunny day. He and she are each other's sunny day. This article seemed too long at first, but the more I read, the more I felt moved. I have seen such a male protagonist, I have seen such a story, I have seen such a love, but I am still moved by the author's excellent writing style and touching descriptions. The article is HE, and it also has a positive meaning. It is inevitable to encounter ups and downs in life, but as long as there is sunshine and hope in your heart, tomorrow will definitely be better. I hope the author can continue his efforts and bring readers more good works. [Long review author: Corn Sauce]
I also think this is a big misunderstanding. How could Hu Fei fall in love with Ou Qian? NO.. The ending is really unexpected. This chapter... Is so confusing... Lion... This chapter made me sweat... Your Tang Yige will definitely die in your hands... No way... No way... I think silently... It's gone!!!
I really hope Tang Yige raped her. Tsk tsk. From the beginning of this article, I have always been optimistic about Tang Yige's image. But when it comes to life. I still hope it's Ou Qiqian I have always supported Qian Yuelian, - -//.. In fact, I feel very sorry for Tang Yige. I always feel that Tang Yige is the most twisted person in this article, but after reading it carefully, I feel that he is the cleanest. Whether it was for Zhong Wen before or for Si Yue now. But I really hope that Siyue and Ou Qiqian can live a good life. Human beings are such a contradiction. After reading Lion's articles for so long, this one is my favorite. I always feel that this article shows the contradictions and distortions of human beings. Tang Yige. The more I look at you, the more I fall in love with you. Real. Everyone seems to think so. I always like Tang Yige or Zheng Yehang unconsciously. But everyone hopes to live with Ou Qiqian. It seems that everyone likes a dull life. Xiyue is really the hardest to guess. It seems that he doesn't love Ou Qian that much. In comparison, I think she only liked Zheng Yehang in the last chapter. As a result, he was also ruled out. It would be great to be with Zheng Yehang. ><.. Ou Qiqian, I don't seem to have much hope anymore.==... Sadness. Finally, I still want to say Xu Aosen.><.. You damn boy. How wonderful it is to be with Hu Fei. How can things be so messy now!!!! But I still love you. Oops...
You're finally done~~~But I like the result~~~Hmm~~~I feel a little bit~~~I finally feel a little bit That feeling was none other than the feeling of an opera~~a new beginning~~~everything Lion JJ really likes this article of yours. From Forbidden Land to Purple Stars to Four Sacrifice Songs, along the way, I have cried, laughed, felt heartbroken, regretted, been happy, fantasized, sweet, and waited... I have watched Purple Stars no less than 6 times, and I cried completely every time. I really like Lion JJ's Wenwen, and the Four Sacrifice Songs is now my favorite. I feel very sorry for Tang Yige, but the ending is also very good. This article gave me a lot of feelings and understanding, ah... It's so uncomfortable, I want to cry again, 555... JJ is so touching. . . . Lion JJ, you have to work hard and write extras. I won't be a diver anymore, I will just surface obediently Come on come on!!!
Wow~ It's been a long time since I've had one Looking forward to the head-to-head confrontation between Si Yue and Ou Qi Qian. Misunderstandings can really kill people. I still hope that the young couple can be happy, although I am really reluctant to let go of Tang Yige. But I still hope that Siyue can get the ordinary happiness that she wants to protect. Lion, please let Ou Qiqian come out and deal with it~ It's not easy for Xiyue~ Seeing this, you plan to write Tang Yige to death? Then I support Ou Qi Qian, so you can write to your heart's content~ Shi-chan, I'm so scared to see the ending now... Confused... Please help Si Yue and Ou Qi Qian come true! Also, I want to ask, will Mr. Shen still appear?
Why why why... Dead... I felt quite depressed after reading this chapter. From the moment Si Yue thought Ou Qi Qian had betrayed her a long time ago (I felt very aggrieved and helpless when I saw it) If I knew Tang Yige... (Tears welling up in my eyes, I can't tell what it feels like) Even if there is no rainbow, I believe there will be a sunny day. Ending is coming soon 55555555555 Lion J, you are so cruel Tang Yige was killed~~~? This ending is not good at all Not good at all? Even if Siyue and Ou Qian are together in the end, wouldn't it be good? Tang Yige is dead Our lovely Tang Yige is dead Ah
I really hope Tang Yige raped her. Tsk tsk. From the beginning of this article, I have always been optimistic about Tang Yige's image. But when it comes to life. I still hope it's Ou Qiqian I have always supported Qian Yuelian, - -//.. In fact, I feel very sorry for Tang Yige. I always feel that Tang Yige is the most twisted person in this article, but after reading it carefully, I feel that he is the cleanest. Whether it was for Zhong Wen before or for Si Yue now. But I really hope that Siyue and Ou Qiqian can live a good life. Human beings are such a contradiction. After reading Lion's articles for so long, this one is my favorite. I always feel that this article shows the contradictions and distortions of human beings. Tang Yige. The more I look at you, the more I fall in love with you. Real. Everyone seems to think so. I always like Tang Yige or Zheng Yehang unconsciously. But everyone hopes to live with Ou Qiqian. It seems that everyone likes a dull life. Xiyue is really the hardest to guess. It seems that he doesn't love Ou Qian that much. In comparison, I think she only liked Zheng Yehang in the last chapter. As a result, he was also ruled out. It would be great to be with Zheng Yehang. ><.. Ou Qiqian, I don't seem to have much hope anymore.==... Sadness. Finally, I still want to say Xu Aosen.><.. You damn boy. How wonderful it is to be with Hu Fei. How can things be so messy now!!!! But I still love you. Oops...
All the protagonists appear in the same place at the same time, and they are completely mixed. In fact, until now, I don't think there is love between Ou Qianqian and April. I always feel that April does not love Ou Qian, maybe she just likes her. It is the so-called, looking up to her. Personally, I prefer April and Tang Yige. In fact, they were in love when they were in school. However, at that time, April only had Lao Zheng in her heart. Up to now, I don't know what I expect from HE. I always feel that I can't go back with Tang Yige. It's also weird with Ou Qiqian. Oh, the last scene, no, don't write off Tang Yige. Although he knew that the outcome had been decided, he still begged Shida. . Show mercy, Tang Yige. You can't hang up. . If Tang Yige still died. Why. From now on, I only have two wishes: let April know about Tang Yige's departure, and then be with Ou Qian. . .
The scene in the next chapter should not be ordinary chaos -0- It's hard to imagine what kind of ending such a chaotic scene will lead to. It's scary to think about it now -0- Shi-chan, I've been chasing this article for a long time, please don't let me down~ We must give happiness to Tang Yige and Siyue~ (I'm worried there will be changes...) Alas, my Ou Qiqian, I don't have much hope... I gave up painfully... I'm looking forward to the end~ When will the last male, Young Master Yin, appear? I'm looking forward to his heroic role (in Infinite Fantasy...)