A High-Ranking Marriage in the Sixties

The male protagonist and supporting characters are both vividly written, and the female protagonist is written like an autistic person (not in a derogatory sense), and her behavior and speech are different from ordinary people.

Why do I feel a little messy?

Hey, this heroine makes me a little angry. Angry and unwilling to fight

The plots are overlapping and contradictory. At the beginning, the heroine is getting glasses without telling the hero. The logic is illogical. She doesn't know whether the prescription has gone up or not, so she needs to change the glasses. The glasses must be replaced for some reason, and she buys them without telling her. She also needs a medical examination form. Later, it jumps to getting glasses with the hero like the East African Rift Valley. At the end, it is repeated content. Don't send it out until you have written it down.

I think what you wrote is actually very good. It may be a bit contradictory, but take your time.

This heroine is more useless than a quail

Why do you have to kill others? The consequences are very serious. Won't your family be targeted and resented by others?

Update soon, it's very beautiful and the water flows smoothly.

Why is it so heavy at the back?

The setting is really good, but I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not in place and it doesn't feel sweet enough.