Mo Manor

Delos Did you look for me in Libra's column? Did I do something bad? Blushing

I took a look, and it's so badly written. Looks like I really have no talent!

Each chapter is too short and the descriptions are too simplistic. Plus, the constant use of "I" and "he" feels odd. Having read this far, I still don't know the male and female leads' names, and I haven't grasped any of the plot details. Let's give each other some encouragement! Keep it up!

Everyone's fighting over older and younger sisters Very interesting Continue, continue

The seemingly extraordinary younger sister

I can smell the stench of trouble. Who wrote the letter?

That feeling of confusion was captured very well. Just write whatever you're told to write. Too careless Drinking tea

It felt like I'd grabbed a lifeline.

Chapter One is very short. But that's enough to pique your interest.

Life is short, only a few decades. Don't leave yourself with regrets. Laugh when you want to laugh, cry when you want to cry, love when you want to love, don't suppress yourself. Write down your thoughts; sometimes, the truth can move the reader.