That's Just How I Am

I hate this trap. Why don't you update it?

Is this about opening up? And what are these three points about?

That's how Northeastern dialect is, it's so earthy and scummy, haha. I said it too.

This title is so reminiscent.

Oh my god, why did I have a convulsion twice = =

Well, I just finished reading these four chapters, and I was struggling with the author's previous articles. I still couldn't hold it in for a long time, so I came to speak harshly. As a lover of general attack articles + weak attack articles, the appearance of the author makes me very happy. In this age when there are too many main-sustained essays and scumbag essays are prevalent, there are few who write general essays and even fewer who write weak essays. So I listened to the recommendation and read your first article - "Life Like Water". The name is good, and the setting is also good. Grassroots Farmer Attack is my favorite, so I opened it with great interest. But, although the author has marked the word "bland" in the label, I didn't expect it to be so bland! To this day, I can't even recall the main character, the supporting characters, or the plot. I only remember the Tom Sue male protagonist and a bunch of inexplicable side-effects, as well as a series of sick sentences and very fascinating punctuation. (Sorry for being mean, I took a selfie.) Su Xiaogong, Guitie Shou, and Xiaobai are not my favorites. Since this is the author's first article, the writing style is somewhat lacking in normality, and there are only a few hundred thousand words. Although it is a bit lengthy, I persisted in reading it. ​Then let's talk about your second novel: "Treating People with Your Heart." The setting is time-traveling weak attack, and my favorite Emperor Shou. Yes, they are all my favorites. But after watching it, I really wanted to vomit three liters of blood and roar like a horse leader: Are these people emperors or royal family? Yes, yes, yes? Could they be more retarded and flat-chested? So all the conspiracies and fights are as childish as children playing house! (I'm excited again, hey, continue taking selfies) Emotions are pale, love always comes too quickly, and there are so many bugs. Forgive me, I couldn't help but click the cross button halfway through. In fact, don't make it so complicated and long. It's good to tell a simple story. I think this is more suitable for you, the author. This new article feels good, the small attack is very decent, and it is my fault. It can be seen that it is an improvement over the previous articles, but there are still some old problems. For example, I hope you can pay more attention to the choice of words and sentences in the future, and you can go back and read it after writing a paragraph. There is no requirement for the writing to be sophisticated, at least it should be concise. Just like the first chapter I read today, it is two thousand words long, that is, the protagonist has entered the city. It has nothing to do with the full text and there is no need to write it in such detail. For example, the part about his parents can be described in profile. If you write everything down, it will easily turn into a running account, and the key points and cute points will not be apparent. There is also a pattern when you write dialogue: quotation marks + content + quotation marks + description. The dialogues throughout the article all look the same, which is really painful to look at. You can add some descriptions of scenery, appearance, details, etc. To increase the readability of the article. The setting of the author can poke my cuteness, and you are very diligent in writing, and I can see that you are making progress. It is really rare to meet an author with the same cuteness in the vast world of literature, so I think of you deeply and sincerely hope that the author will write better and better. My sharp tongue is based on my high expectations for you. Please forgive me for being mean. If you don't like it, you won't waste so much time writing so many words. I hope you can write better works.

Well, I just finished reading these four chapters, and I was struggling with the author's previous articles. I still couldn't hold it in for a long time, so I came to speak harshly. As a lover of general attack articles + weak attack articles, the appearance of the author makes me very happy. In this age when there are too many main-sustained essays and scumbag essays are prevalent, there are few who write general essays and even fewer who write weak essays. So I listened to the recommendation and read your first article - "Life Like Water". The name is good, and the setting is also good. Grassroots Farmer Attack is my favorite, so I opened it with great interest. But, although the author has marked the word "bland" in the label, I didn't expect it to be so bland! To this day, I can't even recall the main character, the supporting characters, or the plot. I only remember the Tom Sue male protagonist and a bunch of inexplicable side-effects, as well as a series of sick sentences and very fascinating punctuation. (Sorry for being mean, I took a selfie.) Su Xiaogong, Guitie Shou, and Xiaobai are not my favorites. Since this is the author's first article, the writing style is somewhat lacking in normality, and there are only a few hundred thousand words. Although it is a bit lengthy, I persisted in reading it. ​Then let's talk about your second novel: "Treating People with Your Heart." The setting is time-traveling weak attack, and my favorite Emperor Shou. Yes, they are all my favorites. But after watching it, I really wanted to vomit three liters of blood and roar like a horse leader: Are these people emperors or royal family? Yes, yes, yes? Could they be more retarded and flat-chested? So all the conspiracies and fights are as childish as children playing house! (I'm excited again, hey, continue taking selfies) Emotions are pale, love always comes too quickly, and there are so many bugs. Forgive me, I couldn't help but click the cross button halfway through. In fact, don't make it so complicated and long. It's good to tell a simple story. I think this is more suitable for you, the author. This new article feels good, the small attack is very decent, and it is my fault. It can be seen that it is an improvement over the previous articles, but there are still some old problems. For example, I hope you can pay more attention to the choice of words and sentences in the future, and you can go back and read it after writing a paragraph. There is no requirement for the writing to be sophisticated, at least it should be concise. Just like the first chapter I read today, it is two thousand words long, that is, the protagonist has entered the city. It has nothing to do with the full text and there is no need to write it in such detail. For example, the part about his parents can be described in profile. If you write everything down, it will easily turn into a running account, and the key points and cute points will not be apparent. There is also a pattern when you write dialogue: quotation marks + content + quotation marks + description. The dialogues throughout the article all look the same, which is really painful to look at. You can add some descriptions of scenery, appearance, details, etc. To increase the readability of the article. The setting of the author can poke my cuteness, and you are very diligent in writing, and I can see that you are making progress. It is really rare to meet an author with the same cuteness in the vast world of literature, so I think of you deeply and sincerely hope that the author will write better and better. My sharp tongue is based on my high expectations for you. Please forgive me for being mean. If you don't like it, you won't waste so much time writing so many words. I hope you can write better works.

The ellipsis... Facing... Indicates that the pear is very big

I feel a little dizzy watching the full dialogue.

You're taking advantage of someone, you're drunk