Heaven's Justice Simulator [Cultivation]

What's nice is that the new chapter is about whether his argument is too long? Take my dream back to when I was in high school and write an argumentative essay

Oh oh so delicious. Tasty. Got a potential stock. I will order all your articles from now on. To be honest, there is a big difference between the first part of the simulator and the second half of the in-depth experience. Reading it feels like reading another book. But maybe because I'm an omnivore, I don't object to this. When I watched the first half, I thought it was very interesting. It was The Sims. When I watched the second half, I also thought it was very interesting. Whether it's the course design or Bu Xinghe's character creation, I think it's very good. Including the later design of the little junior sister Hanchan, and the subsequent shaping of the princess. I think they are actually very good, and I feel like you get into that state as you write. It feels very smooth to write. But the main problem is that I think your outline and details may need to be enriched. Then control the detailed rhythm when writing. The pacing of that part of the simulator felt too fast for me. But the second half is very slow if you experience it in depth. It makes people uncomfortable. Although I personally can accept it. But it may not be so good for other readers. Another reader said that your writing style is too beautiful. It is indeed true. Some parts still require some basic knowledge of classical Chinese to understand. Put it in the context of the novel, it is actually inappropriate. Because everyone may abandon the article because, for example, there is a long paragraph that she cannot understand. The reason why I gave up writing before was basically because there was a section that was particularly cumbersome to write, and then I couldn't stand it any longer. I got a little lazy after reading it, and then I probably gave up. Or there was a section that was particularly difficult to understand, which made me very distressed, so I gave up. I think your book is well written. Maybe it's because I can experience your state, so I think it's not that complicated. Moreover, my basic knowledge of classical Chinese can keep up and I can actually understand it. But when most readers read novels, they actually enjoy the relaxing and joyful feeling. Solving the puzzle, then entering the secret realm of the stone gate, and then meeting the princess is indeed a bit too complicated. This kind of paragraph is actually very easy to lead to abandonment of the article. Because you are quite busy recently, so when you make revisions in the future, you will need to make more changes and less changes. Briefly summarize a large section of the text. You can add some interesting course content to fill it in. The princess here tries to use simple language to summarize and explain her in one stroke. Some of the more exciting ones, such as the part where she walks along this road, her relatives gradually disappear, and finally walks to the end with her mother and grandmother, are very exciting, so try to keep it. Others that are less important are like the fire burning platform and the previous one of pushing cups and changing cups. Just use a few short words to cover it. I saw that other readers in the comments asked why the princess's parents were so good, but the kingdom still perished. I personally feel that the rise and fall of a kingdom is not only related to the person in power. Even if it is a wise king, there will be natural disasters, man-made disasters, and foreign enemies. Or there are other reasons, or just a wrong decision, which may lead to the demise of the kingdom. Do your best to obey fate. It doesn't mean that if I do my best in human affairs and destiny, it will definitely be mine. Therefore, a wise king may still lead to the destruction of the kingdom. And the death of the kingdom does not mean that the king must be fatuous. Don't rush, take your time. Take your time when writing articles, and work slowly and carefully. Good works don't need to be produced quickly.

You are very talented. Don't give up writing. I'm waiting for you to finish the book. Come on 💪

I remember that this book had great potential in the early stages, so I wrote the two chapters before entering V and after entering V as a stream of consciousness. In fact, you can save the full text and overhaul it and release it all at once 💪 Card V will update chapters in a few months and continue writing slowly. Once the manuscript is full, it will be no problem for me to release it. [Gotou] Author, can you give it a try? The early stage is really a high-quality and fragrant article. 😭

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i-i-are-the-comfort-point-point-where-where-the-point-point-where-the-point-point-point-point-point-point-point-point-pointing-point-point-point-point-point-point-point-pointing-pointing-point where does ah ah ah ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, I understand it's easy to write about comfort zones. When the simulator stops writing, you start to enter the real body, gradually, gradually, and then enter the chapter before V and the first three chapters into V... I am not good at Chinese, I really, these three chapters are a bit difficult for my Chinese level. Please Xiuxiu, don't be so... Graceful... I really hope this article can fly. The early stage really hit the point of the simulator style that I like to read. This article is from the simulator period. The writing is concise, the plot is compact, the simulator style, all checked, and it is not an argumentative essay, not an essay, and it is not a big deal. This strange simulation cycle that the real body has entered is about to end, and then don't go off topic, can you write about the simulator? Please [cry][cry][cry] No nonsense, refined language, The plot is compact, Not digressing, Don't write argumentative essays, Don't write prose

If you write the chapter before entering V and the first chapter of V like this, it will drive away customers 😂 If you move these two chapters I don't show you the real plot in the first chapter before entering V 😂 The real simulator in the early stage is really good. Since I started to join the game personally in this life, I have started to feel that the rhythm is weird. The last chapter was argumentative and this chapter's prose style, I feel a bit foggy, dear 😂 I even thought that if I bought a chapter, my subscription was not enough to prevent theft 😂 We are readers, not authors, and we can't provide writing guidance, but it is true that this operation is a bit of a crowd-pleaser 😂

Baby, you can change your writing about nunwu. You really have great potential. I hope you keep writing.

Personally, I feel like these two chapters are a bit hazy and like a stream of consciousness... Let me tell you, I don't know how to change it, but I didn't bother to read it carefully at all, compared to the previous chapters.

I still remember that I have to pick flowers for a task in the sword flying class. What happened in these chapters? Suddenly a new secret realm was opened, and a lot of words were spent describing other plots. Is now the time to explore the new secret realm? The primary and secondary priorities are mixed up. The previous question about the war spirit gave me a headache. I didn't want to read in detail what historical celebrities the author had written - in fact, I didn't understand most of them at all. I bit the bullet and read a little bit, but when I turned over, I found that there were a lot more. It almost made me vomit blood. In short, the details are there, and it can be seen that the author has a strong literary foundation and a deep understanding of history, but is it really appropriate to be so procrastinated and complicated here?

People who read these two chapters are so confused