I also have the same problem: readers commented that the dialogues I wrote were too long, and I often used dialogues to express my personal opinions. However, they wanted to see the plot advance quickly, and did not want to see "the debaters on both sides please have a free debate for three minutes each" like the debate during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. I reflected on it and found that this is indeed the reading hobby of Internet readers, but because I I like to write long dialogues. If I don't write like this, I won't be able to write articles, so I really can't change this problem [covering my face and laughing] Fortunately, although the dialogues I write are relatively long, they are all discussions of hot topics on the Internet like Xiaohongshu. In addition to not advancing the plot, it is not that difficult to read. At least loyal users of Xiaohongshu may be interested.
The amount of information written in this scene has already met the acceptance of online readers, and it has also reflected the meaning of the author. It is very good! It looks vivid, vivid, and interesting, and it is easier to read than a long explanatory text.
Hahaha, I read a few chapters and then read your novel. I thought it was more interesting than your article. Maybe it's because I only read the beginning of the novel. My friend asked me to read your novel, and I thought it was a good novel, but a bit dense. The opening chapter is indeed dense. But it's hard to find authors who like hardcore science fiction. It's really not easy, so I'm here to leave a message!
I also have the same problem: readers commented that the dialogues I wrote were too long, and I often used dialogues to express my personal opinions. However, they wanted to see the plot advance quickly, and did not want to see "the debaters on both sides please have a free debate for three minutes each" like the debate during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. I reflected on it and found that this is indeed the reading hobby of Internet readers, but because I I like to write long dialogues. If I don't write like this, I won't be able to write articles, so I really can't change this problem [covering my face and laughing] Fortunately, although the dialogues I write are relatively long, they are all discussions of hot topics on the Internet like Xiaohongshu. In addition to not advancing the plot, it is not that difficult to read. At least loyal users of Xiaohongshu may be interested.
The amount of information written in this scene has already met the acceptance of online readers, and it has also reflected the meaning of the author. It is very good! It looks vivid, vivid, and interesting, and it is easier to read than a long explanatory text.
Hahaha, I read a few chapters and then read your novel. I thought it was more interesting than your article. Maybe it's because I only read the beginning of the novel. My friend asked me to read your novel, and I thought it was a good novel, but a bit dense. The opening chapter is indeed dense. But it's hard to find authors who like hardcore science fiction. It's really not easy, so I'm here to leave a message!