Heavenly Strategy

I feel that Tiance's CP and emotional description are very different. Even when it comes to attacking essays, the main character is generally the second protagonist. It is very important that he has a strong sense of presence. But this is not the case at all in this article. Wu Bufan's presence is very thin and he feels like a main supporting role. The description of his relationship with Gu Changchen is not attractive at all and has no highlights. From reading it, I just feel that Gong fell in love with Shou in a confused way. The article makes it seem like they have a deep relationship, but as a reader, I can't feel it at all and have no resonance. And then Bai Hongfei, who is unsatisfied, is described so well. He is very gripping and brilliant, and he almost becomes a being that surpasses the protagonist. Although the description is not that long, how can he have such a strong presence and gripping people? I was really deeply moved by him. All in all, the emotional plot of this novel is wonderful, and I really can't like Wu Bufan (I feel like the author didn't try hard to portray this character properly. Generally speaking, this type of character would be very good if written well), and the newbie was too catchy, which made me ignore the real character. . . I just don't understand why the author made such a special setting? The writing, description and plot development always give people a tendency and hint that they should like Bai Hongfei, but in fact they like Wu Bufan. It is a bit inconsistent, as if they are deliberately trying to make Gu Changchen dislike Bai Hongfei, but no answer can be found in the whole article. . .

Maybe it's because the first few chapters were too shocking, but I didn't feel the real story. This ending really made me feel pitiful for Xiaobai. The author might as well have given him a tragic death ending, which is much better than the final situation where the love he loves is just around the corner but he doesn't get it and is pitied.

The ending was so... Exciting. It was just like watching Lost. I originally thought it was a time-travel novel with ancient costumes, but later I discovered that it had a fantasy concept. In the end, it turned out to be science fiction with three levels of memory. I was a little confused! However, I strongly urge Chen Da to write the next chapter. I want to watch the happy life of Gu Changchen and Wu Bufan marching and fighting!

See also inception...

The ending is so sudden It's a good article from a fantasy perspective. From a Danmei perspective, the emotional line is a bit lacking. The relationship between the male protagonist and Wu is not touching enough Judging from the author's reply, the blind following of dialogue is quite disapproving. But even this cannon fodder that made the author feel that he had brought it upon himself still touched many people. Some hope that dying in vain would be a more merciful ending for him.

The male protagonist is very selfish, from beginning to end

The battlefield is my great love! The description of the big scene is very powerful. I just subconsciously thought about it and then suddenly became angry. The two main characters are very popular with men, and the emperor is a pity. The only thing I want to complain about is the Spirit Storm Dragon Riding Flying Dragon that comes out near the end. . . I originally thought that the Interstellar series was just the background of the universe, but I really came to Interstellar QAQ So online games + fictional ancient times + interstellar, what is this? But I haven't seen such a touching article in a long time. Go watch the first one

Why is there no extra story? Does this count as a 3P? I feel like I haven't even played it yet.

In Xiaoguan in the northwest, that night, Gu Changchen and Wu Bufan teamed up to defeat Sha Tuo's last round of attack, captured Zhu Xiezhi alive, and sent him to Bai Hongfei. Bai Hongfei was reading a book in his room. He had learned all the truth, remembered all the stories, and no longer had any hatred for Gu Changchen in his heart. On the contrary, he even felt that he was somewhat sorry for Gu Changchen. Seeing Gu Changchen come in, Bai Hongfei put down his book and asked, "What's going on so late?" Gu Changchen said: "Although I know that you may not care too much about this matter anymore, I still think it is necessary to tell you!" Bai Hongfei didn't even raise his eyes: "Did you catch Zhu Xiezhi?" Gu Changchen said: "Yes, I originally wanted to kill him with a knife, but..." Bai Hongfei took a slow sip of tea and said, "But Wu Bufan said, don't you do anything, just give it to me to deal with, right?" Gu Changchen smiled and said: "As expected, he is from the psychology department. He guessed it right." Bai Hongfei also smiled and said: "But do you think I will care about this kind of thing?" When Gu Changchen saw Bai Hongfei smiling, he felt a little weak and said bravely: "Well, that's not what I meant..." Bai Hongfei said: "I'm afraid you know exactly what I think, but this is Wu Bufan's suggestion, so you came here, right?" Gu Changchen was speechless. After a while, he asked, "Dr. Bai, are you so jealous?" Bai Hongfei clapped his hands, looked Gu Changchen up and down, and said, "What did you just say? Jealous? Who do you think you are? A heartthrob?" Gu Changchen could only remain silent, feeling that he really shouldn't be so busy. If he had known better, he might as well enjoy his retirement life peacefully. He had no choice but to lower his posture again: "Hongfei, um... Forget it, let's not talk about those things before... How are you going to deal with Zhu Xiezhi, right?" Bai Hongfei stood up, walked out of the room, and came to the courtyard. The yard is still the same as before, with wintersweet blooming and a faint fragrance. It seems that everything is no different from that year. Perhaps the only difference is the red, blood-like cinnabar mole between Bai Hongfei's eyebrows. Gu Changchen followed Bai Hongfei, and they both looked up at the sky: "Can you imagine that you can see another universe from this place?" Bai Hongfei shook his head: "The things over there have passed for so long that even I have almost forgotten about it. I am really tired of the war. There is no need to be too attached to the past things. How Zhu Xiezhi should deal with it should be left to the emperor's decision!" The two were talking, and footsteps came from outside the courtyard, but it was Wu Bufan who came with a jar of wine: "Changchen! Today is New Year's Eve, let's get drunk!" Gu Changchen was overjoyed and naturally put a hand on Wu Bufan's shoulder: "Okay!" Wu Bufan said: "Hongfei, let's have a drink too!" Bai Hongfei frowned slightly: "I don't drink." Gu Changchen muttered: "Hongfei, you are like this. You are so serious all day long. Aren't you tired? Finally got a chance, let's have a drink! It's so fun to get drunk!" Bai Hongfei looked Wu Bufan and Gu Changchen up and down. After pondering for a moment, he smiled at Gu Changchen: "Changchen, if you wait for a while and agree to my request, I will drink this drink!" Without thinking, Gu Changchen said loudly: "Okay! What's so difficult about this? I'll just do whatever you say!" Wu Bufan took Gu Changchen's hand and reminded him: "Have you thought about it?" Gu Changchen nodded, and Wu Bufan looked at him with extremely sympathetic eyes. After three times of drinking, Gu Changchen was already drunk, so he asked Bai Hongfei: "What do you want me to do?" Bai Hongfei smiled slightly and said without changing his expression: "Do it." The wine glass in Gu Changchen's hand fell to the ground with a clang. Wu Bufan asked: "What does receiving mean?" Gu Changchen ran away, but Wu Bufan held him back: "Changchen, once a man says his word, it's hard to chase him!"

After chasing for a long time, I suddenly saw the end The story style changes suddenly. . I still feel that there is still no clear explanation between Xiaobai and Changchen. No matter how you look at it, Bufan looks like a sidekick. . Didn't the Emperor say that he was accepting it at first? .