"Meeting the Sun," a sweet campus romance with a happy ending, is currently serializing~
There are five races in the world: gods, demons, immortals, monsters, and humans.
The immortals live high in the clouds and are revered by all. But are they truly the so-called righteous path? And are the monsters, feared by everyone and despised by all, really destined to be "evil spirits"?
Was the scheme laid by the four of them a deception, or a well-intentioned lie?
Truth and falsehood intermingle as the truth gradually comes to light.
Overnight, the entire Fox Clan was slaughtered.
I was lucky enough to survive, and was saved by the Demon God.
I never thought that in my lifetime, I would have the Demon God as my patron and ally in seeking revenge. I must have done something very right in a past life.
But why did no one tell me that the mighty Demon God has two very different sides?
[Spirited Girl × Two-Faced Demon God]
Later, I learned the whole truth from the Tracing Pearl.
"In the Tracing Pearl, Immortal Lord, were you really my elder brother?"
Lan Xiuzhu thought for a moment, then said, "Yes and no. I was merely entrusted by the Heavenly Dao to assist Qingxuan, who was you six hundred years ago."
"Then what about Shen Mingyan?"
"Shen Mingyan? As you can see, he was your husband six hundred years ago."
Oh my god! So I was already married!
Does that mean I was the High God Qingxuan, who fell six hundred years ago to save all living beings?
But... I already died once, and I married six hundred years ago. Does that marriage still count now?
Under the fireworks, they confessed their true feelings to each other.
Uncover the memories of a past life and protect all living beings.
Through every life, never part.
Content warning: This is my first novel, so the writing and plot aren't very good and may not suit everyone's tastes. Feel free to skip it if that bothers you.
Theme: Set out to save others
I feel like you are portraying Yun Dai as an image that is a bit cool and cruel but a little easily moved by emotions. However, the part where she thought the man was cute gave me a bit of a heart attack. Overall, she appeared to be stupid and pure love-minded. Then, I felt that our heroine was also younger, and she seemed to talk and act more like a child, but she was a bit more normal than Yun Dai.
What a pitiful Yundai, she was really taken advantage of, and she is still such a disgusting person. Sure enough, the love brain never ends well. In fact, the overall logic of this situation is not big. It needs to be refined and expanded. And can he accept her by tricking her into getting married? It makes her look a little stupid
It can be seen that you really want to make the heroine into a very responsible person who cares about the common people, but you should not say everything out loud. It lacks a little bit of blank space to allow readers to imagine, and the plot of exchanging souls is a bit absurd and lacks a little foreshadowing, but the advantage is that the writing is smoother and it is not so tiring to watch.
What a miserable family, but pay attention to the details. The part where Ji Ling goes to the street to find the old woman could be more descriptive. Just talking about the old woman wearing rags is too general.
I feel that the part where Lin Yangrong sees through his father's true face can be written more specifically. Instead of using one sentence to describe it, it can be written in dialogue, which will create more tension.
""Surprisingly" gave the author a big worm~ It should be since here
A new character has appeared. Is he Ji Ling's childhood sweetheart? I feel like our male protagonist is a little jealous. Will he write Xiong Jing?
Do you understand? In the last life, the female protagonist was the strongest and saved the male protagonist. Then she was reincarnated and the male protagonist is now the strongest. The female protagonist also started to practice again? The heroine will probably wake up later on, right? (The interaction in this issue is so sweet. I hope the interaction between the male and female protagonists in every chapter of Madam can be written according to the standards of this chapter.)
After reading this, I can feel that our heroine is a baby who cares about the world and is very responsible. The main line is also very clear at present. I feel that the running mode will be turned on, maybe going to one place after another to find spiritual weapons and activate them? I hope to see the heroine's growth as soon as possible