
(Gong Shang) Wine-Crazed (First Draft)
(恭觞)酒狂(初稿)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 180k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
79Chapters
198Favorites
9.0Score
20Nutrient gifts
1.6kClicks per chapter
57Comments
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Qian Zang wants to save him, but Shao Gong doesn't want him to save him. Shao Gong wants to report to the newspaper, but Qian Zang wants to kill him again... Going around in circles, even if it's painful, there is something that cannot be given up and must be done.
It took me two days to read the article, and I felt from the bottom of my heart that this was the story of the two of them. After so many years, maybe the author girl will never come back here, and the two middle articles will probably not be read. But the story of the two of them has been completed in my heart, thank you
I think of the time when Drunkard started serializing, as if it was still before my eyes. The fertility of autumn and the foreboding of desolation are very suitable for this story after Penglai. Now, the bright early summer seems to be able to dilute some of the melancholy caused by the ending. Personally speaking, both Yin Qianzhang and Ouyang Shaogong are not perfect in the official story. Although they all embark on their own paths as the story develops, and within the framework of this world view, the identity setting is still relatively complete, but it has to be said that a lot is missing in terms of character. Especially for players who love the character itself very much, it is even more unsatisfactory. The creative ideas of fans are mostly derived from such thoughts. Mr. Soy Sauce said that what he really wanted to write about was just these two people, and even the plot and setting had to take a step back. In fact, why not? It was originally an attempt to satisfy and calm down. From the very beginning, until now, I can't remember some of the plot very clearly. I am indeed a person who has always been very bad at advancing and controlling plots, and I rarely find unreasonable things during the reading process. The standard for evaluating a text is nothing more than the remaining details of the characters' emotions, personality, and thoughts, and they are also unique and have a distinctive personal color. After all, everyone will have different understandings of the same object, and I think it is very interesting to observe a world through the perspective of others, even if I have carefully considered it many times. From this point of view, the word "drunkard" is perfect for me. I was very pleasantly surprised when I first read it. I saved the Shao Gong chapter and the Qian Zang chapter and read them several times. I was filled with joy, but I didn't expect to see the subsequent series. At that time, the article described: Qianzhang, who was painted with blood under the moonlight, more or less seized the opportunity, but did not know whether he could achieve a miracle, and he did not insist on whether it could be achieved. After waking up, Shao Gong, in addition to being happy, immediately began to think about plans again. Even if the goal of life was drawn with suspicion and hatred, it would be okay. I thought that if I did it, I would have a clear conscience and leave calmly. I think that if I hate someone, I can be firm and ruthless in my revenge. In the end, no one could let go. At that time, I felt that the two of them could just exist like this. Standing side by side and drifting apart were only distant possibilities. Along the way, people's hearts changed, and there was an endless future to look forward to. Even if they never met again, it was enough. As the story unfolds, the mood begins to go up and down like a roller coaster. The tranquility contains a premonition of disillusionment, and the peacefulness contains an undercurrent of murderous intent. Coupled with the interspersed plots of drunken dreams in the past eight years, the warmth of the past, even if it is wrapped in many disguises, is as beautiful as being rimmed with gold. And now that we know about the betrayal and eventual death on Penglai Mountain, we don't delve into the careful exploration between the two. We feel that it is normal. The slight undercurrent never stops, and it will accumulate into a stormy sea. With such dense additions, I feel that the entire game process has become more reasonable and full. Regarding Qian Zang's time on the Jade Altar, I always seem to insist that no one will be wary of everything around them after losing their memory. What's more, everyone around him has his own agenda. Torture and coercion are always not a pleasant memory. The only one who shows some kind of kindness makes people wonder if this is a red-faced and white-faced drama. Personally, I also feel that even if I lose my memory, there is something deep in the bone marrow that makes an individual a unique being. In the article, Yin Qianzhang's coolness, caution and aloofness exactly outline the afterimage of Wu Xian. If the previous chapter of Penglai easily made people immersed in a kind of sentimentality and heartfelt regret for the ending, then Zui Meng Jiang Hu is more story-telling. It is very interesting to see how the fragmented clues in the original work are connected. Of course, in this process, everyone has their own interpretation. If the ideas are not consistent, it is normal. But it is always satisfying to see a well-thought-out and logical idea. (Especially in the case of cold CP). As a new person, Yin Qianzhang has a cold and heavy past after all, and the past of nearly twenty years is not so easy to abandon. Subconsciously, he still put up a lot of guard against himself, and could not really accept everything naturally and happily like a new life. However, the desire for the world and the need to establish some kind of emotional connection with others were always surging in his heart. So it was contradictory from the beginning. The seemingly gentle and harmless young man just folded his hands in his sleeves and looked at his struggle with ridicule. While he was busy setting up an overwhelming net, he also expressed his position and gave appropriate comfort when needed, gradually melting the man's defenses and making him willing to regard himself as a close friend, no matter how angry he was. There may have been moments of wonder, attraction, and heart-to-heart communication, but the hand in charge has never lost control. At best, it's just fun. It wasn't until the moment when Jing Lingdao revealed the truth that the two of them seemed to be on equal sides. However, fairness and peace are only for a moment, and the river of fate continues to flow. Once their trajectories intersect, they will only drift away from each other. Ten years later, when we meet again, the past, whether it is the years of knowing each other or the thrilling battles, have all faded in the face of a future that is so dark that it is completely unrecognizable. Those two years were enough for Yin Qianzhang to figure out a lot of things and to follow through on his one path to the end. But Ouyang Shaogong didn't seem to have changed. His hatred and doubts guided him to seek answers without paying attention to trivial inner fluctuations. Of course, there were many inside stories that he didn't know yet, and the constant shocks left him no time to care about the word love. I was always on tenterhooks while chasing the series. The protagonists of Carriage, Mixiang, and Qingxue were exhausted from running for their lives, and they were injured time and time again until they were completely injured, but they still stumbled through. And it felt like I had already entered the final chapter of Youdu before I even took a breath. Even though the road before fulfilling the promise is deliberately made extremely long, the ominous shadow of the ending is always heavy, making it impossible to relax and enjoy the last free time. The constant flashbacks to the past in conversations and recollections, and the various details gradually revealed, all indicate that everything will return to the void. Over the long years, they have all grown old. Wu Xian's shadow never left, but was exquisitely connected with Yin Qianzhang, who was unbound. Changqin's inhumanity has not changed after thousands of years, because he never regards himself as a member of the mortal world, and the perfection of his life that he longs for, as Nuwa said, never exists. Destiny has never been shaken. Looking back and reading it again, the reunion to the ending actually takes up half of the entire text, and I personally feel that the connection is much closer than at first and cannot be separated. However, when I reread it, I had a more natural feeling in my heart, and it didn't matter what happened in the end, because the guideline had long been hidden in the hearts of the two of them, and it was only a matter of time before they let go of everything. Even if you follow your heart, why would you feel sad about spring and autumn? After spending a lot of time on and off, I finally wrote down roughly my feelings about alcoholism. Although the expression was very unclear and not fluent, I felt somewhat at peace in my heart. My thoughts about these two people have been changing. With the review of the original work, discussions with fans, reading fan works, and even my own state of mind, it has been constantly ups and downs. In the end, it was impossible to finalize because of too much blank space. As if that person was a real person, no matter how many records are left behind, they cannot be restored. I struggled with this at first, but now I feel good about it because it provides a broad space for people to imagine. The different understandings in everyone's heart will make their existence richer and more vivid. Finally... I'm not very good at writing concluding remarks... Once again, thank you to the diligent and conscientious Soy Sauce Girl for providing such a touching interpretation and wonderful reading experience.
Replying to this question... I'm not very familiar with Jinjiang and I don't think I have any constructive opinions. Is it better not to always reply to comments? So I only replied once in the process of following up. I check to see if there are any updates every weekend. You are very diligent and haven't missed anything in a week. I didn't play the ancient sword because the graphics card couldn't be used... I just listened to my friends' stories. The strange thing is that after listening to her story, I didn't fall in love with her favorite characters Su Su and Zi Yin, nor did I fall in love with the more popular CPs, such as Su Lan (?) [Wrong expression], but I fell in love with Gong Sang. When I found this article, I was wondering whether Qian Chang was a very irresponsible person. As I read along, all my doubts about Qian Chang turned into regret and heartache. I've never played the game, so I can't say whether you're over-imagining it. I just want to say that the image of the two people in this article is what I look forward to most. Needless to say about the writing style, it is a pleasure to read the writings of adults. Is the article finished? Will the stories of their eight years be written again? Will the story of Mr. Little Wu Xian be written again?
I have never read the entire article before, because the author marked the first draft as GN and often reworked and revised it. Because I wanted to see a basic final draft, I kept waiting. Seeing that the author GN chose protective licensing, I thought that the author GN had published it elsewhere and might not care about Jinjiang's comments or anything like that, so I, being a lazy person, just kept lurking. Ahem, in fact, having said all that, I just want to say that the author GN, you have written very well, and the data is cold only because of the subject matter, authorization, and not following the Jinjiang trend. The author GN's writing style is simply a joy to watch. It is a return to nature, beautiful and natural, and the plot is also very reasonable. The most important thing is the author GN's understanding of the characters, which is a step further based on the game, especially Qian Xiang who has very little ink. Today I read the whole article and suddenly realized that the Qian Xiang in my heart should be what the author GN wrote, just like the last piece of the puzzle has been filled in, revealing the whole picture. Thank you very much to the author GN for writing this article. The ending of Ancient Sword made me cry, but the ending of Drunken Maniac made me feel a more lasting sadness.
How can I put it this way? I feel very confused after reading this whole article. In fact, I have been following this article for a long time... I just couldn't be bothered to reply, so I have been shamefully obsessed with it for a long time. Now that I have finished it, I have come out to bubble. When I saw the ending, I thought, maybe this will help me feel relieved. No one has ever owed anyone anything. No matter how false I am, I am lucky that those days were real, so I have no regrets. I have also read a lot of articles about respectful worship, but this one is the most touching and has the best feeling. Well, I don't have the words to describe it. This seems to be the impression of these two people. All in all, I really like this article. Thank you for your hard work, Xiao~~I admire it•
The Drunken Dream Jianghu DLC is about to be released~ I have a feeling it will be full of gay feelings~
In fact, I still like the Nuwa Empress very much. It's just that they are gods, and the Tao is ruthless. What they value is all the people in the world, but it is by no means a single person or group of people.
A declaration of friendship is the same as a confession
The writing is great, I feel it is very reductive. If Gong Sheng could easily let go of her worries and be kind and friendly, she would not be the couple I like (I feel like I have a masochistic tendency, so I hide my face)