[On hiatus for a major revision of the complete story]
[Xianxia + a domineering, irresistible male protagonist as the shou + melodramatic hated-by-everyone-to-beloved-by-everyone arc. Cover art commissioned. Daily updates; if I can't update, I'll post a leave notice.]
Jian Chuo had lost his memory.
Before losing his memory, he was the senior disciple of a righteous immortal sect and the sole apprentice of the Sword Sovereign of the age. He was a heaven-favored genius destined for a smooth cultivation path, born to be admired and respected by all.
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After losing his memory, Jian Chuo was abandoned by everyone and driven out by his sect. He grievously wounded the Sword Sovereign, committed the heinous crime of betraying his master and ancestors, and became entangled with demonic cultivators.
He had a cultivation partner, whom Jian Chuo had forcibly taken for himself. The other person did not love Jian Chuo at all and even loathed him in every way. Everyone was laughing at him, waiting for the once heaven-favored genius to be abandoned by his partner.
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The thing was, Jian Chuo remembered none of this.
Listening to it all was like hearing some absurd, melodramatic story, especially the parts about his cultivation partner...
Jian Chuo was quite sure he did not like this cultivation partner, even though the other person had done nothing wrong. He only wanted a divorce... or for one of them to become a widower.
His situation was a complete mess. He was gravely injured, and his cultivation had fallen. Demonic cultivators were hunting him, the righteous sects despised him, and the unlucky cultivation partner by his side wished he could kill him. The once exceptionally gifted senior disciple of an immortal sect had truly been dragged into the mud.
But he was Jian Chuo, Jian Chuo, who was best at solving every problem with his sword.
“You want to kill me?” The sword cultivator drew his blade and gently asked his cultivation partner, “Don't worry... I only need one strike to kill someone. I won't let you suffer.”
A melodramatic hated-by-everyone-to-beloved-by-everyone story. The shou handles leveling up and fighting monsters, while the gong is a love-struck, angsty romantic.
CP: warm on the outside, cool on the inside, gentle, and in-control, irresistible shou Jian Chuo x gongs of all kinds. Main gong: Qin Zijing.
Gongs: prickly childhood friend; aloof Sword Sovereign; sharp-tongued, jealous cultivation partner; gloomy ghost-like demonic cultivator; robotic, aloof beauty on a high peak.
A huge amount of misunderstandings and tragic love. The main plot follows a melodramatic, wildly messy broken-engagement arc.
The protagonist's name is Jian Chuo, with Jian pronounced in the third tone. Cultivation levels in this story: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Spirit Transformation, Tribulation Transcendence, and Great Ascension.
Content warnings:
1. An irresistible shou who will kill his husbands. Some gongs may die more than once (they're tough).
2. Contains a huge amount of dfxr toward the shou. Please indulge my personal tastes.
3. Melodramatic! Dark! Includes forced love! Many potential triggers. The shou's characterization comes before everything else. It's the classic, old-fashioned xianxia hated-by-everyone-to-beloved-by-everyone trope. I've made it melodramatic, so please indulge me.
4. Contains many chuunibyou, lowbrow passages of the classic rich young master who refuses to accept defeat and insists that the weak can rise.
5. The cover art is commissioned art of the shou protagonist. Please don't use it to represent other characters or steal it.
[Does a Straight-Ahead Dragon-Pride Hero Have to Be a Good Guy Too? [Quick Transmigration]]
[Melodrama + beloved by everyone + aloof, beautiful, handsome shou]
The System was very dissatisfied with its new Host.
As an honest NPC in a melodramatic story, the Host didn't act the way he was supposed to at all! Faced with the System's bossy commands, he not only refused to obey, but also demanded that the System speak to him respectfully.
Why should the System respect the Host?
From the moment the honest-guy character was created, he was nothing more than one part of the rich and powerful people's games in a melodramatic story!
The System continued to act nasty and make no effort to hide it. Hearing this, the other person sighed softly.
“He said to speak respectfully. Don't you understand?”
Another sinister voice rang out. Only then did the honest-guy System realize that someone far more powerful than it was dwelling in the Host's soul, someone it had no way to resist.
That was the last thing the honest-guy System heard. Soon, it was reduced to worthless garbled data and tossed out of the Host's soul by that entity.
“What kind of idiotic script did that thing give you?” the voice continued. “Aren't you straight? You refused to work with me, and now you've ended up as a man's damn cock sleeve. Are you happy?”
“Don't make me swear at you,” the Host replied coolly and calmly. “Does being a pain in the ass feel good?”
The original Dragon-Pride Hero System: “...Tsk.”
Getting insulted by the Host really did feel a little good.
[The illegitimate son of a wealthy family in an ABO story]
His husband's adoptive father asked him, “Which of my two sons do you like?”
[An ordinary student at an interstellar military academy]
“Have you heard?” a classmate said deliberately in front of him. “That new poor student sure sells himself for a high price.”
Content warnings:
1. An aloof, beautiful, handsome man. Completely straight! Cool on the outside, warm on the inside, and actually quite nice. He's mainly cold toward the original System.
2. The System is dark and twisted. The sort that makes snide remarks and dfxr the shou. It stays upset from beginning to end, and even passing dogs kick it twice (but the System is not a gong).
3. Multiple versions of the gong. Still melodramatic, dark, and full of tragic love.
4. Melodramatic and dark, with forced love.
Theme: Don't get married on a whim
Babies, I'm sorry that I have to stop updating for a while.
The reason is that even after a major revision, I still struggled to write, to the point where I couldn't tell whether there were any problems with my writing and where the problems were.
Thinking about it seriously, it's because I'm not good at writing plots at all, but I care too much about this character. My XP is completely Su Shou, and I really want to make the writing particularly good and outstanding.
But whether it's Su Shou or Invincible Style or Nitrogen-fixing Xianxia, they are all subjects that I have not covered. Especially the Invincible Tassel Shou, I was completely confused and blinded by it... In fact, everyone may have noticed it.
I feel like I was taken aback by my idea of making the character look sexy, trying to use the plot to create something interesting and interesting about the character.
But I'm really bad at writing plots. I feel very uneasy every time I push the plot, and I can't watch and poke dfxr as much as I like before.
Before writing the article, I actually read a lot of plot information and lessons, thinking that I must use a complete and powerful plot to bring the story to life.
In fact, when I was writing the article, I was worried about it with my friends. I often tell my friends that I am worried that I will fail in writing, and then waste my only chance to open up the text and be completely shaped (now it seems to have come true).
During the process, I actually tried to hold the steering wheel on my own several times, trying to remedy my shortcomings by revising my essays or insisting on daily updates. But the more I wrote, the more scared I became, and the more I wrote, the more I realized that I was wasting my only chance to be completely shaped.
I feel like my anxiety about this book has gotten out of control!
Now that I have found a new job, I no longer need to use this book to transition into life. Decide to take a break and give yourself and poke some time to buffer and rest.
It's not a scam, but I'm really afraid that my writing will be super bad and make me regret it. I think maybe I need more abilities to write a fairy-like control Su Shou.
Anyway, updates are temporarily suspended.
Next, I will first write some free bonus extras about Gu Yuan to ease my mood.
Actually, something that makes me more painful is that when I was writing the extras and welfare extras of Yuan, I felt very relaxed and felt that all the baby's development and emotions were under my control.
But this very relaxed state cannot be maintained when writing stamps... It feels like I care too much and don't have enough ability, so it's counterproductive.
As for other content (such as when will the update be resumed, do you want to write something else), I will wait until I finish writing the extra chapter of Kite today.
I feel very sorry for everyone, and I want to say sorry to everyone! I don't quite understand why it's so difficult and painful to write. I basically never had it before...
Before re-writing the stamp, I might read a purely emotional book to refresh myself. But when I was writing, I ended up like this, and I didn't dare to use Sistermao or Tweet anymore...
Anyway, I'll write some more about Gu Yuan today to keep myself awake.
Once again, I would like to say sorry to my friends who are following me.
Why is it locked? The teacher wants to see it, wants to see it, wants to see it
When will this book be updated? I like it so much 🥺
Babies, I'm sorry that I have to stop updating for a while. The reason is that even after a major revision, I still struggled to write, to the point where I couldn't tell whether there were any problems with my writing and where the problems were. Thinking about it seriously, it's because I'm not good at writing plots at all, but I care too much about this character. My XP is completely Su Shou, and I really want to make the writing particularly good and outstanding. But whether it's Su Shou or Invincible Style or Nitrogen-fixing Xianxia, they are all subjects that I have not covered. Especially the Invincible Tassel Shou, I was completely confused and blinded by it... In fact, everyone may have noticed it. I feel like I was taken aback by my idea of making the character look sexy, trying to use the plot to create something interesting and interesting about the character. But I'm really bad at writing plots. I feel very uneasy every time I push the plot, and I can't watch and poke dfxr as much as I like before. Before writing the article, I actually read a lot of plot information and lessons, thinking that I must use a complete and powerful plot to bring the story to life. In fact, when I was writing the article, I was worried about it with my friends. I often tell my friends that I am worried that I will fail in writing, and then waste my only chance to open up the text and be completely shaped (now it seems to have come true). During the process, I actually tried to hold the steering wheel on my own several times, trying to remedy my shortcomings by revising my essays or insisting on daily updates. But the more I wrote, the more scared I became, and the more I wrote, the more I realized that I was wasting my only chance to be completely shaped. I feel like my anxiety about this book has gotten out of control! Now that I have found a new job, I no longer need to use this book to transition into life. Decide to take a break and give yourself and poke some time to buffer and rest. It's not a scam, but I'm really afraid that my writing will be super bad and make me regret it. I think maybe I need more abilities to write a fairy-like control Su Shou. Anyway, updates are temporarily suspended. Next, I will first write some free bonus extras about Gu Yuan to ease my mood. Actually, something that makes me more painful is that when I was writing the extras and welfare extras of Yuan, I felt very relaxed and felt that all the baby's development and emotions were under my control. But this very relaxed state cannot be maintained when writing stamps... It feels like I care too much and don't have enough ability, so it's counterproductive. As for other content (such as when will the update be resumed, do you want to write something else), I will wait until I finish writing the extra chapter of Kite today. I feel very sorry for everyone, and I want to say sorry to everyone! I don't quite understand why it's so difficult and painful to write. I basically never had it before... Before re-writing the stamp, I might read a purely emotional book to refresh myself. But when I was writing, I ended up like this, and I didn't dare to use Sistermao or Tweet anymore... Anyway, I'll write some more about Gu Yuan today to keep myself awake. Once again, I would like to say sorry to my friends who are following me.
Why is it locked? The teacher wants to see it, wants to see it, wants to see it
When will this book be updated? I like it so much 🥺