Life rushes by in a blur, and every person could fill the pages of a book.
This is what I want to write: the emotional diary of an ordinary girl.
Make yourself a cup of hot tea, and listen as I tell you about the extraordinary life of an ordinary girl.
PS: I'm just an obscure nobody. I started writing this story as a hobby, so updates will be irregular, but I'll do my best to write it carefully and see it through to the end.
I've only been writing for a short time, so please share your feedback and help me understand where I need to improve. Thank you.
And please, whatever you do, don't leave this obscure nobody hanging!!!!!!
The beginning and the end seemed a little mismatched, but yay! Celebrating Feng's debut!
Pure dialogue is a bit confusing.
You need to change your habit of padding your word count; complaining too much is a serious flaw. =V=