The name is okay, just. . . Talk. . . . They are just walk-ons. . . . Don't be so "careful". .
Handsome guy???
Come on, that's called Shota, is that true?!!
Sweat me to death, you repeated it too many times...
This is the first time I read this kind of article, and I think it's pretty good.
Even though the update is a bit slow, the ending is still good.
Your heroine is not too strong, she is better than those writers who have no imagination.
The storyline is pretty good, but the ending is a bit too rushed.
I hope you can continue to work hard, that... Actually, I also like Xiaofeng,
I support Xiao Feng as the protagonist and look forward to your sequel...
Bird, I have to admit, I think meow, this is too casual...
Hey, let's write the finale!! ~~~Finally, I can write the finale first~ [Satisfied~~] I hope you can give me more opinions and let me revise it.
The ending is over. If everyone is not satisfied, then I will think about it again. As the saying goes, we are God, and we are waiting at any time~~
[Dear friends: Why don't you hurry up and code the text for me! Let's fly away again~~~]
I am also a cute dividing line o(∩_∩)o
Meow, it turns out you didn't abandon the article...
Come on~
Work hard to update the article~~
2 points
The name is okay, just. . . Talk. . . . They are just walk-ons. . . . Don't be so "careful". .
Handsome guy??? Come on, that's called Shota, is that true?!!
Sweat me to death, you repeated it too many times...
This is the first time I read this kind of article, and I think it's pretty good. Even though the update is a bit slow, the ending is still good. Your heroine is not too strong, she is better than those writers who have no imagination. The storyline is pretty good, but the ending is a bit too rushed. I hope you can continue to work hard, that... Actually, I also like Xiaofeng, I support Xiao Feng as the protagonist and look forward to your sequel...
Bird, I have to admit, I think meow, this is too casual...
Hey, let's write the finale!! ~~~Finally, I can write the finale first~ [Satisfied~~] I hope you can give me more opinions and let me revise it. The ending is over. If everyone is not satisfied, then I will think about it again. As the saying goes, we are God, and we are waiting at any time~~ [Dear friends: Why don't you hurry up and code the text for me! Let's fly away again~~~]
I am also a cute dividing line o(∩_∩)o
Meow, it turns out you didn't abandon the article...
Come on~ Work hard to update the article~~ 2 points
18Ah, have you abandoned the article?