As a therapist for patients with pheromone dysregulation, beta Xu Zhouxing never forgets his duty: always be ready to inject an omega's pheromones, then get fucked by the sick alpha--
Once the alpha's and omega's pheromones are completely fused and the enraged alpha has been fully soothed, his job is done.
A one-time deal with huge returns and no investment.
The first time Xu Zhouxing "sold himself," he ended up with the best employer in the world: Qiao Yue.
A young, handsome, chaste general of the Star Ring Republic, a great man stationed for years on a border planet to protect its people.
Being picked out like merchandise by a rich man was a little unpleasant, but Xu Zhouxing still felt incredibly lucky. Given their respective circumstances, it was hard to say who would be taking advantage of whom once he and Qiao Yue got into bed.
This deal promised a win-win: money and pleasure!
Qiao Yue developed pheromone dysregulation due to childhood trauma. While other alphas want to cuddle with their wives during their heats, he only wants to destroy things. His doctor said he needed highly compatible pheromones for treatment, or one day he would either kill himself or kill enough people to be sent before the Interstellar Court.
Using the matching system, Qiao Yue found himself the most suitable omega fiancée: an excellent match in terms of compatibility, family background, and personal ability, with a face as lovely as a rose.
They were a perfect fit in every way, and Qiao Yue was satisfied. But his fiancée made a request:
For my own safety, let's get married after your pheromone dysregulation is cured.
Out of respect for his fiancée, Qiao Yue asked him to choose a healthy beta therapist for him.
There was just one frustrating problem: his fiancée's taste differed from his own. The therapist he had chosen wasn't Qiao Yue's type. He was too pure and bland, making it difficult for Qiao Yue to feel any desire.
Neither man could have imagined when they first met that their mismatched attraction would never find its way back on track. When a song rang out across an abandoned space station, when an antimatter bomb came hurtling toward them, the day would come when each became the other's unattainable desire.
When they meet again, Xu Zhouxing has evolved through an unexpected fusion with alien genes and gained a following of his own. He is no longer the young man who could only cry. But the laws of the Star Ring Republic clearly cannot recognize a romance between a human and an alien.
A very cheesy, old-fashioned, melodramatic ABO story set in a future interstellar world, with a little pseudo-science fiction and alien elements.
Main couple: an A who unknowingly wins himself over x a weak, pitiful B at first who later becomes self-reliant
One-on-one, bottom-centered, happy ending.
Content warning:
The bottom has intimate contact with various supporting characters, though they don't go all the way. Decide for yourself whether that counts as remaining pure. Later on, he is biologically nonhuman.
Writing serious stories is exhausting, so here's a melodramatic trashy story as a treat.
Moral: Love yourself before you love others
I just said a few points. If the author doesn't like it, just pretend you haven't seen it. 1. I think you said in your essay that the number of clicks is less when you write the plot. In fact, there is generally nothing wrong with the plot. On the contrary, it should not be written too compressed and too fast. People may read it if it is written slower. The war plot is not a problem. The pace is too fast and the content is too compact, but the monologue of the protagonist's inner changes disappears. In such a compact plot, there is no description of the inner emotions of the characters, which is just a running account. For example, when Chen Yi died unexpectedly, the pace of this chapter was too fast and could have been more descriptive of the protagonist's inner emotions. Even add some environmental background (not necessarily necessary, I just think they are all purely plot levels). 2. One hundred chapters is not considered a long novel, and there is no need to omit the description of some key characters in the article in order to reduce the number of chapters or words. This is not a first-person article, and the plot can be unfolded from everyone's perspective. For example, why did Meng Fangxu rebel? (Perhaps you plan to write a side story?) However, there is no foreshadowing of his rebellion in the text. The popular writing method is still "unexpected and reasonable" to make readers understand that his rebellion was unexpected and unreasonable. 3. What is the value of the existence of "Yingzhou" and "Xiangong"? There is no key character or key plot. If this world setting wants to include Yingzhou, it is mentioned and rationalized in the first few chapters. It suddenly appears in the middle and late parts of the novel and ends in only two or three chapters, which makes people confused. And the structure of Yingzhou? Even though I said it, it doesn't feel consistent with this world view. A romance novel set in a future universe still needs a slightly simpler, harmonious and unified background. "Gongzi Jing" and "Immortal Lord" are strange because you can see that the author wants to create the characteristics of the characters in a few sentences, but even if the characters are three-dimensional, what is the role of their appearance?
Hahaha Xu Zhouxing has grown up with a lot of personality, and he feels a bit gangster [Spread Flowers]
Isn't that right? People around Qiao Yue rebelled one after another. Those who didn't rebel sacrificed their lives. I hope there will be a reversal.
Ohhhhhhh This chapter is so beautiful, my eyes are filled with movie scenes.
I really like how my wife described him! Warm! Brave! Persistence! And full of love and compassion!!
Throw flowers!! This hodgepodge book by my wife is really full of elements and arbitrary. Although some interesting settings were not developed, which is a bit regretful, I am still satisfied with the overall rhythm. It made me cry so much, tsk tsk, I have to keep writing!!
Great! Oh oh oh!!!
In fact, what I can't understand the most is that Carlo told Gong so that Gong could see his father and others. Of course, maybe Carlo was going crazy at that time.
Oh my god, hahahaha, it's so popular. How many Mao films have I watched?
[Rose] The author's writing is very good. Here are my little suggestions. It can be seen that this is a novel that the author put a lot of effort into, so it feels like there are many interesting tasks, plots, and backgrounds that you have conceived, but have not written out. It is a pity 😳 Every supporting character is very flesh and blood, so I am very curious about their ending and thoughts.