[HP] Sirius's First Year Out of Prison

The light-hearted and sweet writing and the game part are very realistic. The last few chapters made me worry about whether the game I played became bad because of the bad team.

The graceful Ms. Galen attracted everyone's attention when she first appeared in the magical world. She calmly reversed the injustice of the dark wizard and saved the magical world. Ms. Galen is committed to improving the status of women in the family, changing the repressive social atmosphere for women, and providing many convenient and well-paying employment opportunities, which has greatly promoted the bonding of wizarding families. What can be seen is that the faculty and staff of St. Lily are all extremely outstanding witches who shine in their positions, create great value for society and make great contributions to the cultivation of young witches. Since the founding of Holy Lily, more and more healthy and positive young wizards have entered Hogwarts, and the way students are trained has also been greatly improved. What is remarkable is Ms. Galen's vision of equality for all beings. During her reign, she received strong support from the former werewolf group and actively encouraged the group to contribute to social peace and development. This also improved the living space of other groups such as giants and house elves. In addition, what is not known is that Ms. Galen also made a lot of efforts to eliminate the Dark Lord, assisting the greatest white wizard Dumbledore in history and the savior Harry Evans to jointly prevent the resurrection of Voldemort and save the lives of Hogwarts students. The "Loud Beep" he founded has been the newspaper with the highest public support in the wizarding world since the 1980s. It has introduced advanced Muggle scientific literature and aesthetics, greatly facilitated the technological development of the wizarding world, promoted technological and cultural exchanges between wizards and Muggles, and created a variety of positions. It can be said that the emergence of Ms. Galen has saved the declining British Ministry of Magic and British Wizards. She is the ninth female minister in the United Kingdom after Amelia Burns. ——To Acacia Galen

I'm still waiting for the second part, it's so good! ! ! Sister Huiyue is the top of all the Ke Tongli movies I have watched! No! I should say he is my favorite protagonist among the novels I have read.

Teacher, teacher, will you write HP again in the future, such as parents, children, or even reading style! I really like your style! It feels delicious no matter what I write! (Private Marseille, I pushpushpushgogogo) I really hope that when I click on Lujiang every day, I will find that you have updated the teacher [hp] xxxx1 (Yanyan Nanguang) [hp]

I finished reading it in two days. I like the three stories about the period of ghost possession. I wonder if the author has read the Fairy Sister by Yu Qing, a writer from Wanwan. The part where Lemon has her own body and meets Xiao Qi in the hotel is very similar to the reunion in Fairy Sister. If you haven't seen it, I strongly recommend the author to check it out. The same setting is that the female protagonist disappears (one soul is sleeping and the other is waiting for the physical body), but the male protagonist does not know whether the female protagonist will reappear. Yu Qing actually did not write much during this period. He simply used the two things that the male protagonist always turned on the TV and someone else said he was seriously ill to express the complex mood of despair, hopelessness, and having to look forward to. But the so-called affectionate expression of the male protagonist in this book is awkward... It can't even be called industrial saccharine. In addition, the last few chapters were really too messy and rushed. The zombie dad was supposed to be solved by Mom and burned into ashes and brought home. Anyway, Mom appeared in two or three chapters. The use of the urn to scare Lemon was a test or something, and there was no explanation in a single word. But this article was written four years ago, and it's probably impossible to overhaul it. It's a pity.

So cute, the crackling potato dog

It's so nice to finish scattering flowers and stay together for the rest of our lives.

Of course, teacher, whatever you write is fine, as long as you keep writing [][][]defend and follow [a dog's head holding a rose in its mouth][Comparison of hearts][]

Age-changing agents are really good things

Hahahahaha, let me say it again, well done

Hahahaha, the twins are indeed the twins, the menu is also very good, I feel a bit hungry when I look at it [love eyes]

Great writing, even more [poor]

Aa

I shared the same brain with my wife. I also thought about the part about my mother, "I'm sitting at the door waiting for you to pick me up and take me home." [Crying] The crying buff is superimposed.

Such a cute chapter, it made me feel soft [cat's claw][cat's claw][cat's claw]

I have read all the books and every one of them is my favorite!

I thought I was reading the story of Si Ling's descendants, but I didn't expect that it was the story of Si Ling's parents.

It's September, madam, are you back?

Great, looking forward to the author's next work

At the end of "Spreading Flowers", both my wife and Wen have grown up well together, and have witnessed a precious world that they love very much. I wish my wife all the best (btw, the author who likes my wife very much has really interesting things to say. I read it carefully every time hhh). In fact, I am looking forward to the teenage Harry's rebellious period hh, breaking the heart of the old dog, etc., And then the dog goes to kiss Thea for comfort, which is both gratifying and a little sad be Like God, are we all getting old? How come my lively, cute and charming little Harry has grown so big now that he doesn't need us anymore, hhhh, then quarrels, consolation from elders (who is this elder, haha), reconciliation, and continued growth, it will feel very cute. Because the wife's character growth is so good, I can't help but think about the possibility of little Harry growing up, haha. (Celebrate the completion again) (Mrs. Love)

I just found out it was finished so I quickly watched it! I didn't expect it to be finished at the end of September, I thought it would be October. But first, I would like to congratulate you on the ending. Hahaha. Thank you for bringing such a good fan work. I particularly like the science popularization in the text. You can see Rowling's expansion beyond the HP world text, and the author has also completed a beautiful story along these directions. The author has done a good job in setting up the background. I must say that the heroine is so charming. I like it so much. She has everything under control but The feeling of tolerance is very charming, and the emotional line is well written, but what I like most is the plot of the relationship between the heroine and Penny. This female friendship makes me feel very warm, especially since Penny has greatly expanded beyond the original image. I am fascinated by this feeling of fandom expanding the world view and characters of the original novel. The most unexpected plot is when Harry changes his surname to Evans. I really like this treatment. It's inexplicably touching. Finally, thank you for bringing this work, and I wish you will write more good stories in the future [cat's claw][cat's claw][cat's claw]

It's so dazzling that the article's food also needs [starry eyes][empty bowl][empty bowl][empty bowl]

Happy New Year. Although it's a little late [Star Eyes], it's really beautiful! ! It will be infinitely beneficial! !

My family has a lot of work in August! In addition, there is a bridge section that I haven't decided to deal with yet, so I'm taking a leave of absence... I'll try to figure it out before mid-September (Toshita seat...

Xianpin, both in terms of writing and plot, is a very mature healing story.

School has started, and I've been catching up since before the holiday, hahaha

So the two of them were reborn together?