[Listening Snow Tower] Watching Fireworks Fall

It's a good story, but what about the promised extras?

…Where's the extra story we agreed on? Tingxue Tower is a martial arts story with fantasy and fantasy... At first, I deliberately searched for stories about them that were like legends, and eventually became legends. Unfortunately, when I searched Baidu and various websites, I didn't see any stories about them. I can only wonder if their stories are too perfect, making people afraid to fantasize about them? I couldn't think of any other adjectives, so I had to use this word that seemed lame in front of them to describe Tingxue Tower. Xiao Yiqing, the owner of Tingxue Tower, who said that he wanted to hold the world in his hands, gave up all the four guardians in the past just to follow that man, and... The only one who could stand beside Lord Xiao was the blood demon's daughter, Shu Jingrong, who was described as the "sword of defense". By accident, I came across a fanfic like this. The reason why I say "approximately" is because this article has eight chapters and a total of only 21,931 words. The writing is also extremely bloody and divine... Using every possible means. This is really not a good article. The first chapter has nothing to do with the main text. The second chapter, which is supposed to be the main text, only has more than 2,000 words including punctuation marks, various inscriptions and various characters. At the beginning of the article, he said: "There is no so-called truth in the world, which is worthy of trust." This is really a nonsensical beginning and makes no sense. Even in the pitiful words, the final ending is a perfect happy ending, which has nothing to do with the main text. This article is pieced together from fragments. In the third chapter of the text, a young man in white clothes said: "Invite the bright moon to come and take a picture, and play the harp in the dark bamboo and roar again." This is the prelude to the appearance of "Bi Luo" in this article, and before Bi Luo became Bi Luo, he also had a name, Jiangnan Qingyi Jiang Chuge, who is known for his skills in piano and sword. "The top is poor and the blue is falling, and the bottom is Huangquan. Both places are nowhere to be seen." The name came from Bi Luo, originally to commemorate a certain woman who came from the vast sea to the vast sea, but it became the name given by the protagonist to Bi Luo, but Bi Luo shouted "Good". However, most fans are like this, so there is no need to pay too much attention to it. Everyone's inexplicable affection for the protagonist and the so-called invincibility of a certain sword master are just what they say. In the fourth chapter, a disciple of the Sword Master proposed to the protagonist, and the protagonist cursed in his heart. At the same time, Xiao Yiqing became jealous. If you read on, you will see the protagonist becoming a god in the next chapter. The author knows that there is no such thing as a god in China. Only Pangu, who opened the sky and transformed into the world, Nuwa, who created humans out of mud and water, Fuxi, who used body and Tao, established the Sanqing of Taoism... I think I know that, but why did they use foreign gods? ... And in this chapter, Lord Xiao finally kissed the heroine. In Chapter 5, the author prolongs the kiss and appears in the text XXXXX XXXXX XXXXX The heroine's tangled history is followed by the strange appearance of the strange mother-child Gu and the strange detoxification of the strange ten thousand poisons. With the heroine shouting: "How can I deserve this!" After solving a dozen mobs and opening a hidden line, this article is finally coming to an end. ... The female protagonist left the male protagonist and returned to him three years later. She said, "Well, can you wait for me to come back?" He said, "Okay. I'll wait for you." After talking a lot, the final position was: "Xiao Yiqing, it's time to get up." The article concluded by saying: People searched for him thousands of times, but when they looked back, the man was looking back with his eyes open. So heartwarming, the author said, this is dark history. But it is dark history, otherwise it would not be such a novice, there is so much divine logic, and there are so many "original sentences" but it still goes astray. This article was written by the author in 2010. Today, in 2014, when I saw this article, the author said that he would overturn and rewrite it. Then write it! I hid my little expectation and said to the author: If you don't write well, I will crush you to death with a long review. So, I am here to fulfill this wishful unilateral agreement and crush you to death with a long review. Are you ready? And, as agreed at the end of the article, extra chapters.

I think it's quite good-looking. The heroine is much better than Shu Jingrong in the original work, and the heroine is also quite powerful. Unlike Xiao Yiqing and Shu Jingrong who were suspicious of each other when they were together and died in the end, at least Xiao Yiqing can be happy, right?

Yi, actually I think the concept of this article is quite good! The part about the mirror is not bad either... I still quite like the writing style... But I really can't accept the plot. But having said that, I like Biluo very much~~

It turns out that in this life, there is only "parting". It is truly forever. Be philosophical! Step, step, step

Passing by ~ stepping on~ Please give me a spin-off! Extra!

Sprinkle flowers~~It's finally finished Eight passes~~ Extra, extra extra~~

It's over

It's too much, there are only so few! ! !

Um, so thin. Not enough to see…